I Have an Experience Ball

602 Is the same as 607. It has not been changed for such a long time?

To be honest, there are reasons for the poor performance. The routines are too old. You can know the ending just by looking at the beginning. The facial expressions are too serious. The characters are fixed as soon as they appear. The plot is forced. The protagonist encounters too many pressures. He wants to kill the protagonist as a person. The famous sect is inferior to the magic. In the end, he is mentally retarded. For example, when the protagonist went to certify an outer disciple, the staff still thought he was a liar? Who is so stupid as to risk their lives like this?

The cliche opening becomes toxic if you read too much, with continuous slaps in the face, and Long Aotian's way of advancing the plot. I can only say that this book would have been completely different if it had been published a few years earlier...

At the beginning of the game, I was persuaded to quit, and it was because of the cross-fertilizer, and because the woman was injured.

I feel that this protagonist is a scumbag. If you want to have a harem, don't act so dedicated. Wang Xue is an ordinary person. You may be your sweetheart and your only one, and then say you will never date another woman. In the blink of an eye, you are called Sister Yutong, Sister Yutong! Then what will Wang Xue think when your sect Li Yutong comes to see you! If you want to start a harem, be a little more flirtatious. You have the ability and people will stick to you. Isn't it disgusting to do this? I'm not saying that harem stories are bad, but you have to make us understand! Don't spray if you don't like it!

I saw the experience orb was upgraded to 2⭐! Talent is supreme! Several girls can still cultivate at the same level as him! Turn to the last chapter: You are still competing with these girls, so I have to say something: Have you never fucked them with your experience ball and supreme talent? Then why did I watch it? It's not as powerful as having no system!

The introduction is still very important in the new book stage. A good introduction can attract a large number of readers to become fans. The more fans there are, the more recommendation tickets and monthly votes there will be. This book should not only have this achievement. I hope the author can write a good introduction.

It's great that the author can keep updating. I don't comment on the writing, just comment on his attitude.

It seems embarrassing to read ancient poems non-stop. Also, since I wanted to write about a world where the weak and the strong eat the strong at the beginning, why do I trust everyone I meet later without reservation? Inconsistency! The plot looks very awkward and the supporting characters are very problematic.

Well, the supporting role at the beginning pissed me off. It's been ten thousand years, and the standard is too low. Could it be that a martial arts family that has not yet recovered has directly become the instructor. If you don't have the basics of 6 or 8 in your outer door, who can rest assured? If you don't have any expertise, who can teach you? ? ? You have revived your spiritual energy. You have directly pushed human society back to the feudal era. You are also selling people. The sect has no testing qualifications or anything? ? ?

At the beginning, I immediately persuaded normal people to withdraw! Withdrawal

As soon as you see a beautiful girl calling you Brother Yun, Brother Xiao Yan, Brother Jing, and Brother Qing as soon as you time travel, it makes people feel disgusted!

Chapter 3 persuades him to quit, and the first three chapters are all kinds of bloody and poisonous things. When you write Xiu Xian, the first three chapters are all emotional scenes.

2.2 Million, less than 3,000 recommendations. All I can say is that the author has worked hard

The data column is written like shit, so many skills have been upgraded. Your strength has never been touched, so what's the point of upgrading your skills? Does it make any sense for you to write this data? For strength, either write down the levels of Qi training and Qi condensation, or delete it. Looks like an eyesore

The author has written more than 2 million words and only has so few recommendation votes. The author can still keep writing. No matter how good the writing is, with this perseverance, I have to read it.

What a poisonous flow. . . The golden three chapters begin.

I would like to ask the author, do people usually call you the author's brother? Or you call someone sister, don't you feel so embarrassed that you can't say it out loud. After reading three chapters, I really can't hold on anymore, it's so disgusting.

The protagonist seems to be mentally retarded. Don't you understand the real-life allusion of friendship and enmity? Anyone who has a relationship with a woman will break up in the same way! What's more, if the protagonist gives something to a woman and calls it a talent before he has ever had a relationship with a woman, is the protagonist an idiot or does he think others are idiots?

This book is so good that I have to describe each person's psychological activities in detail several times... To squeeze out the water and reduce the word count by at least 10 times.

This sect is just like the Demon Sect