The Most Powerful Interstellar Billionaire

No, there's nothing wrong with the way it's written. The real problem is that the plot is procrastinating, and there may be something wrong with the setting. I have also written novels. Today I am looking for new books to read just because I want to know how others write their books. Sorry... I have only read the fifth chapter of this book. Let's put it this way, the overall feeling is not good, it is too bland. What should be written is not written, and what should not be written feels a bit watered down. So it's a little bland. Moreover, there is a problem with the protagonist's golden finger setting. Looking at the author's profile, he writes about earth disasters and the difficulty of human survival. He should be in the science fiction genre. Since it is a science fiction stream, your first golden finger reward setting is meaningless. I just happened to be paralyzed in a car accident. The golden finger directly rewards physical strengthening, which is better than this so-called clairvoyance. Coupled with the identity of the protagonist, it is completely possible to set the character as a genius scientist like Iron Man, researching cutting-edge technology, etc. Then the character setting of the protagonist is not lovable, but a bit disgusting... Another point is that you bring in alien civilization at the beginning. This is the so-called rhythm of hell difficulty at the beginning. Few of those big sci-fi guys dare to write about the technology of civilizations beyond the earth. You come right at the beginning, which does not make reading attractive to readers. Or modify it and change it to a natural disaster at the end of the earth rather than an alien invasion or something like that. Such as the sudden end of the world, earthquakes, tsunamis and other natural disasters. Or a certain high-tech biological company may have a research accident, causing the virus to leak and infect organisms. With this line, you can choose to follow the doomsday science fiction stream. Or the protagonist researches technology with the help of Gold Finger, saves mankind, and powerfully opens up the technological landscape. Go for those black science and technology novels. The above can be concluded... The author has no outline... It is definitely self-written. The character setting is imperfect, there are problems with the protagonist's personality setting, the themes are conflicting, the plot is dragged out and not sorted out, making it look a bit dry, and the main line is not clearly set. These are some of the problems I found. I hope they can give the author some help. Above! ! Also, I would like to ask the author a question privately. How did you get this recommendation vote? So many recommendation votes, envious...

No one talks? Let me talk about my feelings. I haven't finished reading it. I only read the first few chapters. Because the author's writing style is very strange and it always feels very familiar. It's a pity that novels written in this style of writing basically fail. There is no emotion involved. It can't make me laugh. No. It can trick me into tears. It is really flat emotionally, without any ups and downs. This is my first impression! I have only read the first five chapters, and I haven't read the others yet. I don't know if it is the same. If it is all like this, then I am sorry that we are not destined for each other!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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No, this is the end of the eunuch, I feel dizzy

I guess the author is a woman, writing about men from a woman's perspective, and there is no sense of empathy.

It's a bit like an American science fiction film. Especially starting from the chapter before the destruction of the earth, I gradually found the feeling, as if the protagonist is me, I am the protagonist.