The Ferocious Beasts of the Prehistoric Times Measure Calamity

There is always no second place but first place! ! ! 😁😁

I don't understand what the operation of two hundred thousand words a day is. Don't you plan to sign a contract and put it on the shelves? ? ? ?

The author has a suggestion for you. The first four chapters should be moved to the front. Otherwise it will be very discouraging! The first few chapters are written in an interesting way to attract readers, but you only introduce the background in the first few chapters. The background of the protagonist Earth Star is huge! If there is no foreshadowing, it is a failure. It is better to write about an ordinary person who reads online articles or understands myths and legends.

The writing is poor, why don't you let me talk about it?

Zhe's thirteenth novel this month 😡

I've changed my vest and it's much better. The next few books should be roughly the same. I'll change my vest again and dig a hole, so bye.

If you don't write well, don't write. Once you write, you'll see that it's too fake. I'm really speechless,