Plant Expert

Sorry, this book is pretty good, but I can't stand the emotional drama, especially the child bride. I just can't stand it. Goodbye.

The author's novel uses the skeleton of agricultural knowledge to narrate the story, which brings a different scenery to me, an old bookworm who is accustomed to reading online novels. It popularizes a lot of agricultural knowledge and touches my long-forgotten high school biology knowledge. The rote biology knowledge seems boring and rigid, and I almost forgot it. Reading your book seems to remind me of relevant knowledge points and recall a lot of things. Let me give you some advice. Since you like growing flowers and know some agricultural knowledge, this is both your advantage and your shortcoming. In any world, multiple forces coexist, and the natural structure is also very complicated. You have two ways. One is to focus on existing knowledge, use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and don't talk nonsense. For other things, just think of it as a theme film, focusing on the growth of agronomists (in a different world); you can also complete the world structure and go to a multi-level world. Since there are advanced orcs, plants can also have advanced races. Conquering the world requires force, as well as equipment, elixirs, herbs, formations, etc. You can use The relationship between plants and the protagonist is the main thread. Develop the protagonist's skills, such as the alchemist (pharmacy and alchemy), the cook (additional skills), the tree herder (druid), the field master (raising plants can also be used on the battlefield), the lord (self-cultivating to make a fortune), if necessary If force is required, it will involve the strength and martial arts system. You'd better not touch the protagonist in this regard, and use other supporting characters to try to develop a weaker martial arts system (continue if it succeeds, and let him disappear if it doesn't work). Otherwise, if you force the protagonist to cheat, sometimes it will be counterproductive and make everyone uncomfortable.

The emotional drama of this book is a failure. Write less emotional drama. Even if you write more agricultural knowledge that I can't understand, it would be better than this emotional drama.

Regarding this book, what I like is a plot that slowly solves the mystery. It is not about knowing it all at once and then going out for revenge. As for Goldfinger, I have left some foreshadowing in the previous article. You can look back and make a guess. This book can only say that the Agricultural Pavilion is also a controlled organization. Behind it... In short, human beings are just a group of people in captivity. I'm a newbie who really lacks experience. To be honest, I don't know how to write novels, and I'm trying hard to think of tricks. The author currently only knows agricultural knowledge, about plant protection, disease and pest judgment, or comprehensive prevention and control. The author has experience. His hobby is flower gardening. Please forgive me. I will organize my thoughts. No matter how bad this book is, I will finish it, and then sum up my experience and write better things for everyone.

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Let me talk about my personal feelings. I originally wanted to say it in this chapter, but I found that I am too verbose... First of all, the plot is too light, the grass and tree ash is better, and the pepper feels much worse. As for this competition, emmmmm, it's not that it can't be done, but is it a bit slow for you to ask and answer like this? As for the direction of the subsequent plot, it would be okay if there were not these giant plants. With the giant plants and the agronomist being raised so high, it always makes me think that you will have plants vs. Zombies later. If this is the case, the previous text has not explained it, and there is no clear description of the power system of the novel. If such fantasy things suddenly appear later, it feels like the context will be severely separated. Then, what I want to say is what is the outline of this novel? Roughly speaking, it's about getting stronger and taking revenge, or in urban areas, there are people who copy lyrics, review songs, dramas, and film reviews from Weibo, there are also people who contribute to the rejuvenation of the country, there are people who get opportunities or are pushed away by the system, or they just install AC on a daily basis, write about farming, and so on. To put it bluntly, the outline is a routine, but I always feel that your novel has not entered the routine yet, especially this competition is a bit abrupt. It feels like you have a map-changing task before it has reached the stage of changing the map. Finally, I would like to give some suggestions. I think it is possible to write a more dramatic story when dealing with pests and diseases. For example, at first, you may be cold or even make things difficult for the protagonist because of lack of understanding and distrust. Later, you will be reluctant to do so after being resolved. Later, you will actively cooperate when you see hope, and finally admit your mistakes and apologize. It can also be a misfortune, because the disaster caused heavy losses and could not afford to fall ill, or someone's misjudgment led to serious consequences, such as gray hair overnight, depression, etc. Don't be afraid that readers won't like the routine. Readers just don't like the author's writing so that they can see the routine. The above is just my personal feeling, that's all.

How can I put it, the family drama and emotional drama look like rat droppings in a pot of porridge, it would be much better if the number of scenes was reduced.

You have your life as a guarantee at every turn... Know a lot about different worlds? Can you resurrect for free? Do you know your own pig's feet?

This book is very good, I hope you will

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