Be an Otaku in the Comic World

I really hope that Qidian can provide a refund function. If you buy half of the batch subscriptions, you will be persuaded to cancel. The so-called revenge is like this. Have you never seen a woman in eighteen lifetimes?

What I don't understand the most is giving away equipment in Apocalypse (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻ A hat that can speed up 70%. It's nothing to give away, you can sell another one. But the bracelet is obtained through a lottery, and this one is just given away? And the bracelet is for saving souls. The protagonist killed 100,000 zombies in Apocalypse, and the equipment that accumulated so many souls is just given away? If you understand it, the enhanced equipment is awesome. Batch! The protagonist is working hard outside, and then leaves the equipment to his wife? Just because he is in a small mood and needs comfort? (Where is his brain?) If you think about it, Busujima Yako's character portrayal is not acceptable. It makes sense that Yako Busujima would refuse the offer because of her petty emotions. (Don't tell me that the bracelet is not important! Anyone with any brains knows how important the equipment is that can save 100,000 souls!) Anyway, this paragraph is. Toxic! But I still read on, thinking that when the protagonist was about to go back, the bracelet and hat would be taken back. Or Busujima Yako would "sensible", but it turned out that after the protagonist went back and traveled through the world again, he didn't mention the bracelet, as if he had forgotten it.

After seeing this, I have a general understanding of this book, and I have summarized the following points, which may be a suggestion to the author. If the author does not like it, he can delete the comment. The first point is the issue of giving away equipment. In the first copy of "Campus Apocalypse", the protagonist gave away one of his only pieces of equipment because of the female partner's liking. I think it is unreasonable to forcefully give away my own equipment that can be used to save my life when my own strength is not enough. This is a poisonous point, and the author is advised to revise it without destroying the outline. The second point is that after the protagonist returns to the main world, the communication with his school classmates is too embarrassing. Forcibly striking up conversations with classmates who may become protagonists in the future. Especially the girl who can copy superpowers. The two skills of copying her vitals disappear and restoring blood after being full are very annoying. The third point is that after learning that his neighbor was a S. H. I. E. L. D. Agent, he deliberately gave away apples with special effects to deliberately expose himself. After the agent got the fruit, he sensed an abnormality while eating the fruit and continued to eat it instead of studying it in time. It makes people feel speechless. The fourth point is also the most important point. The ratio between the main world and the dungeon is too unbalanced, and it cannot even reach a 50-50 split. The copy segments are too long and annoying. Even the most basic Marvel event has not happened in the main world. Progress is too slow. I even suspect that by chapter 200, the chapters about the main Marvel world will not even reach 50 chapters. The fifth and final point is that the author is advised to change the title of the work. Judging from the current book title, most of the people attracted are Marvel fans or DC fans. But what you wrote is mainly similar to the infinite text mechanism. Leading to such a situation. I want to watch Marvel and DC but it's not fun. And those who want to read Infinite Streaming cannot find this book. This is a very embarrassing point now. Finally, I wish the author of this book success.

I keep seeing the New Shaolin Five Groups and I can't stand it anymore. In a world of low martial arts, they use grenades, Gatling, and explosives. Let me tell you, are you going for a trial or traveling? What I'm curious about is how the more than 600 monthly tickets for this book came about. Okay, I feel like I have a very venomous tongue, please come on, author.

I have read the Academy Apocalypse chapter, so I would like to share my thoughts on this book, which is just my personal opinion. First of all, I was deceived by the title of the book. After all, Marvel books are still very popular recently through Women's Federation 4. Judging from the title and introduction of the book, it should be in the construction flow. The first ability MC character's ability is also in line with the construction flow. With such a convenient ability, it should be possible to develop it in Marvel. The protagonist of Redstone Technology said that he didn't understand it and stopped doing it at all? ? ? What is the principle? What an amazing brain circuit. Secondly, there are various foreshadowings at the beginning of the book, including the identity of the protagonist's mother, the protagonist's Aunt Liu, and others. The foreshadowing begins with time travel without any explanation... It is a big failure that time travel can take plot characters away, especially in the Apocalypse, there are only two harems, and it can be expected that there will be thousands of harems later. It's okay to write about traveling through the heavens with the name of Marvel, but it's wrong to write about time travel in a messy way. After all, readers also have preferences. If you like the second dimension, will you see the Fifth Patriarch of Shaolin behind you? ? What the hell? There are Japanese comics in the front and domestic movies in the back? Next up is the American fantasy blockbuster The Hobbit? The span is so big. The protagonist's IQ is still a bit high in MC. When he reaches the Apocalypse chapter, he starts to let himself go. His IQ is off the shelf and his energy is on the line. After all, if there is too much harem and no energy, it is easy to die suddenly...

Since I haven't read The Hobbit, I plan to skip this volume and wait until the next volume to read it, and then... I'm glad I didn't read it. Today I opened the book as usual to see if The Hobbit has been updated, but I saw new negative reviews in the book review area. After reading the negative reviews, I read the two chapters updated on August 17th and the first chapter updated on August 18th... Emmmm, I felt like I saw the ultimate dog-licker... Roughly, the protagonist was offered a bounty for assassination. The house was bombed and even his relative Aunt Liu was injured. Then he went to take revenge. He first found the assassin organization and then found Elizabeth. Elizabeth came up and said, "Stop it!" …? ? I haven't read the previous chapters. Is this an enemy that the protagonist actively provokes? This Elizabeth's tone seems to be that the protagonist is at fault first. After reading the three chapters, combined with the description of the negative review I saw, the protagonist was assassinated for no reason and his relatives were implicated. So what is the art of Elizabeth telling her to stop making trouble and letting her handle it, and then killing a few killers and starting negotiations? ! Where to negotiate? The protagonist and the employer negotiated without even meeting? I just asked for a house and lost my engine skills. Is this the compensation Elizabeth wanted for her help? Why do I feel that the protagonist did something to Elizabeth and cheated someone else, and then the victim came to take revenge? The protagonist wanted to kill someone, but Elizabeth stopped her and asked for some compensation, and then both parties were happy. This is my most intuitive feeling after reading the three chapters from 8.17 To 8.18. Isn't it the same book as before it was released? I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye everyone.

The previous chapter and the next chapter are always incoherent. Why, we have to make up for it, which makes me always think that I have missed a chapter.

I was deceived by Marvel and MC. After reading MC, I started to skip reading. After reading a few chapters, I started flipping through the table of contents. After flipping through, I decided not to read it. Infinite flow will collapse, especially those who write old dungeons. The power systems of old dungeons are almost the same, and there is no point in starting to upgrade without thinking. You can cover it up by wearing more clothes? There was a group called the Villain Boss Chat Group. Not only did it go to the Super Seminary, but it also collapsed. The most important thing about a Marvel fan is the character of a superhero. Being flesh and blood is the most attractive thing about Marvel, okay? It's a lie.

To be honest, it's not bad, but since the title of the book is an American comic, why is there no progress in the main world after more than seventy chapters?

How to say it? Farewell

This is not dominated by Marvel. It is obviously that the system is king, time travel flow, and sending equipment is simply impossible for otakus. The title does not fit the title, and it is simply too difficult to make people understand reality.

Well, I'm just talking nonsense, I only read the beginning. (Trolls kill the whole family) As a good book, the most important thing is writing, plot, and setting. About roles and others, they are under the first three. The writing style of this book is more out-of-the-box, and the protagonist is also more dou (bi). But currently, the protagonists of most books do not have the attributes of dou and bi (maybe it's because the books I read are different). At present, what the author needs to improve is first of all his writing style and dialogue. It is best to describe the protagonist's character with more depth. The only thing left is the plot. If the emotional drama is really good, I won't say anything. But 눈_눈. So if you are a newcomer and your writing is not very good, it is best to downplay the heroine. This book is worth reading, not to mention that it has written about Minecraft, so I give it five stars.

I'll just say one thing. It's so *** poisonous!

Everything is good, but it's too white. At first I thought the setting was okay, but the main character was so white that I was a little confused.

The plot of the New Shaolin Five Ancestors is really confusing. The background of the New Shaolin Five Ancestors is the Qianlong period. As a result, Ao Bai and Chen Jialuo, the chief rudder of the Red Flower Society, became Chen Jinnan, the chief rudder of the Tiandi Society during the Kangxi period.

It's so boring, why not just write a comic or something random. If I hadn't seen Marvel, I wouldn't have bothered to come in. After reading the first dozens of chapters, there is nothing related to Marvel at all.

If you are interested, you can count the frequency of the protagonist's name and the words "this guy". I skipped the first world and read two or three chapters of the second world. Anyway, I couldn't stand it.

The more I read the book, the more uncomfortable it became. It was said that it was a Marvel book, but there were only a few chapters. I skipped and watched without commenting on anything, just slipped away.

I feel like giving up the book if I don't accept Wonder Woman into the harem.

Stop writing the word "this guy", it's so uncomfortable to see 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭[fn=1 2]😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭[f n=12]😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

One of the tacitly recorded poisons in the academy, a native who just met you not long ago, gave away the only two pieces of equipment you had. Just because they are beautiful, are you a licker? Even if you said you can buy more, you don't need to spend money. Half of your income from a mission was given away like this, 70% of the speed bonus, defense and heat preservation. This top-notch equipment was given to an unrelated woman.

Someone wanted to kill the protagonist's whole family, and the whole family was blown up. The protagonist's aunt was almost killed by the killer. A female n number tried to persuade the protagonist, but the protagonist just pretended that nothing happened... Abandon the book, I advise everyone not to try poison.

Summary of poisonous points: 1. Giving away equipment casually and disclosing system information at will 2. Seeing a beautiful woman unable to walk, turning into a dog licker 3. A relative was attacked and seriously injured by a killer, and he wanted revenge because the murderer was the childhood sweetheart of the female number N, and with the persuasion of the female number N and the benefits of the murderer, the matter was over? (Are you worthy of being the protagonist?) 4. The original purpose of the female N number approaching the host is to copy the protagonist's abilities (after finding out, she was not given any punishment. If it were another protagonist, let alone kill her, at least she would become RBQ) 5. Power system Chaos, in addition, the article keeps using the words "this guy" and "this girl", 2 words, extremely uncomfortable... 6. Generally speaking, it is poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, even a brainless person can't stand it. The hunting system of the heavens has such a host, just kill it.

The relative was shot three times, the house was bombed, and the murderer was the heroine's childhood sweetheart. The protagonist was crazy and wanted revenge, but the heroine refused to let him go. The protagonist ran and killed several passers-by. The family called and said that someone had compensated for an engine so that the protagonist could put down his hatred. Then the protagonist gave up and went home to live a happy life with the heroine. It was so good, haha! Some things can be tolerated and tolerated, but people cannot be devoid of principles. Even if a loved one is shot and killed, you can let it go gently. You are not worthy of appearing in the protagonist group, so quit the group.

The protagonist is like ZZ. I don't understand why I have a harem (666666) even though I'm precarious (I can't take anyone away), and the MC doesn't have much potential, you say? Are you kidding (check out the mod) and the slutty British girl makes me sick even more. Copying the protagonist's passive skills (which are almost as limited as none) is better than killing that stinky watch (she can be close to the protagonist due to her abilities, why can't she be close to second, third, and fourth place?) Finally, I'm curious, does the protagonist behave like an otaku?

The MC world is the most complete world! You can add many MODs. One MOD can make a whole world! More development can be done! For example, Craftsman Soul! 1.2.3 Strengthen the craftsman's soul! Plant magic! Magic! Enchantment! A better enchantment table! More enchantments! Dragon MOD tries to take advantage of the bugs in it!

These pictures today are too poisonous! A gangster who wants to kill himself and his relatives can just ask Elizabeth to give him some engine skills and that's it? Not to mention that Elizabeth was trying to get close to the protagonist in order to copy his abilities from the beginning. After such a plot, can the two of them still be together? What kind of cool article are you writing? There are so many girls in the MC world who have never seen a woman? The protagonist has such a golden finger and is capable of being hated at this stage. He went to the killer organization and was full of murderous intent. He ended up killing more than a dozen passers-by and 3 gunmen. I thought it was a small climax, but it ended like this. I have to say that this part was really poisonous to me!

It's really poisonous. You can actually see the signs in the early stages. The Apocalypse is a bad street routine, and there is also a plot in which the protagonist casually exposes his abilities. This is not impossible, but the protagonist is really big-hearted. He said it himself, but in detail, some plots later have some poisonous points, but. Please tell me why the female character is required to be able to copy the protagonist's abilities. It's inexplicable. A superpower like emotion can even copy Steve's rule ability. WC, it's so awesome. Then how does the system explain it? I really can't understand why the author wanted to create this character? I guess the woman will have to travel through time with the protagonist in the later stages. When I thought about it, oh, Zhate. This character is so damn poisonous. Especially copying the protagonist's abilities This made me see the incompetence of the system, the name is so awkward, the work is so inadequate, the legal ability given by the system, a woman has the ability to be the protagonist, it makes me sad to see it. Many people can't stand this kind of plot, and I have nothing to say about the harem, a common poisonous point of unlimited flow. To be honest with this novel, the MC element has attracted many people, and some of the settings in the novel are quite good, but the author still needs to work harder. Be sure to use normal logic when writing. I don't know how many novels have such ridiculous plots. Wherever the male protagonist is standing, women will come to them. When the male protagonist does something, the women will fall in love with him. In fact, what I want to say most is that there must be a normal thinking logic. It will be much better to bring normal logic into it. Properly control the relationship between the protagonist and the character. Don't open those inexplicable harems and don't create disgusting characters. This way more people should accept it.

I jumped and looked at the back. The protagonist licked the sky. The female protagonist approached the male protagonist in order to copy and copy the ability. The male protagonist knew and chose to forgive, and took the initiative to post it for others to copy. The heroine sees that the hero's strength breaks through the sky and instantly kills her with hatred, and she takes the initiative to admit her relationship. The heroine's childhood sweetheart is jealous, and hires someone to assassinate the hero and his family, blow up his house, and almost kill his Aunt Liu. The heroine comes to kill him, but you are fine anyway. Your Aunt Liu was only shot three times and luckily did not die. That was my childhood sweetheart. He was only sixteen years old and ignorant, so you can forgive him. Then the protagonist changed into a dog puppet costume and immediately forgave her. I actually skipped watching a section because I was attracted by MC and Marvel. I'm really confused...

Seeing so many comments, I thought the book was good, but everyone came to complain 😁 Thank you Shennong for trying the poison, everyone take care of your health