King Zhenguan

There is a saying that the quality of an online novel lies in whether it can arouse readers' interest in reading within the first five chapters. For historical novels, in addition to plot writing, your description must be roughly consistent with historical facts, or at least be able to justify it. When reading the first few chapters of the author's work, there are a few points that are different from what I know. It is really stuck in my throat and I can't express it. I hope my personal opinions will not cause everyone's displeasure. 1. Regarding the issue of stoves, I privately define the author's stove as a briquette stove, but not many people used coal in the Tang Dynasty. Most people still used firewood and charcoal for heating. The protagonist only builds one stove, and there is no way to use it without supporting fuel, right? At the same time, because I have not carefully researched it, I am skeptical about whether the cost of the briquette stove is suitable for distribution as disaster relief materials in the Tang Dynasty. 2. Pinyin problem. I don't read many historical novels, but among the few that I have, you are the first author I have ever seen who writes about Pinyin. The Mandarin of the Tang Dynasty was not the current Mandarin. Relatively speaking, it should be a medieval pronunciation similar to the southern Fujian dialect. If you have a certain degree of study of Chinese language and literature, you can use pinyin to mark the pronunciation. Of course, this may be just a small mistake by the author at the beginning, and it will be improved later, but I personally feel that many old bookworms who like historical works have some research in mind, so I hope the author can try his best to justify himself in some details, so as to give readers a better reading experience. The above is not my final evaluation of this book. After all, a novel has millions of words. After reading a few chapters, I can only get a glimpse of it. It is not rare that the more you write, the better. The final conclusion will be made by those readers who have read more.

This book is for primary school students. The wording is very colloquial.

I won't say much, but their ages include Qin Huaidao, who was born in 625, and Li Zhi, who was born in 628. When Qin Qiong died, Qin Huaidao was 14 years old and was older than Li Zhi here.

The content is okay, but the writing style is poor and the wording is inappropriate! Always a show!

I registered Qidian purely to complain. Author, did women in the Tang Dynasty clasp their fists when saluting? And in your article, any salute is a fist touch! Seeing the emperor do the same, have you ever heard of Wubai? I'm really embarrassed to see you. Even if you don't know, if you don't say clasping fists, you can say salute. Your writing is all modern. Li Lizhi even said, "For the banquet held in this palace, I need to ensure the safety of the guests who come to play." What are these words? This is something that only the daughter of the president of Shanghai Beach would say. It's a very good theme and main line, but it's made to death by such a small problem. There are also names for people. It cannot be said that they are not standard. They are simply called randomly. Sometimes they are called young master, and sometimes they are called master. Also, you are a prince. When you see a minor official, you still have to return the favor in a very formal manner. It's so funny. You are Qin Qiong's son after all. {"NickName":"Big Eyed Little Goldfish","UserId":308376698}

I've read Chapter 684 in one go in the past few days, and I seem to have given you several monthly passes. I can't help but want to complain about the author here. Can't writing a book use snacks? There are so many typos, and there are always mistakes in who is talking to whom in the relationship between the characters, and I won't talk about Hu Hao. This will affect the mood of reading. I haven't read the next chapters, but if I keep making mistakes like this, I will definitely not be in the mood to read it!

There are too many poisonous points, just weeds. It's a bit hard to read the books.

It is recommended not to use your brain when watching it! Otherwise, I really can't watch it. I persisted until Chapter 65, when I saw Li Shimin and Changsun Wuji "said that with movable type printing, in three years of imperial examinations, students would be able to replace the officials of aristocratic families. If they want to leave with a seal, just let them go." Do they dislike the country's demise too slowly? Only Li Chengqian has a brain in this book! There is nothing else, and the protagonist is even more wise. 😓😓💀💀

I just read the first 4 chapters. The author often takes it for granted. Pinyin annotation of Hokkien? Too toxic for me personally......

The author said that I can forgive you for making many typos. I can also forgive you for typing the protagonist's name wrong. After all, you were deeply impressed by the last book. I can also forgive you for taking down Wu Mei on the premise, and it's okay for you to grow cotton. I think it's possible even if you take out tomatoes and peppers, because botanists and historians have verified that this is possible, but it's too much if you take out potatoes and sweet potatoes, which are only found in the Americas. If you get this from the barbarians, you have to follow common sense even if you are imaginary. This thing was only introduced to China in the late Ming Dynasty. Even if you were earlier, you couldn't be that many years earlier! At this time, America didn't realize where you got this! This is too much!

The monthly recommendation is given every day, and the chapters are getting fewer and fewer. The book is really a good book. I can give this book full marks, but can it be updated quickly?

Not much can be said about the problems that can be seen in this book. The modifications that do not damage the overall content of the paragraphs are all minor flaws. The first few paragraphs are roughly descriptive, but it really shows in the later paragraphs. There is no mention of using toilet chips to wipe buttocks when it comes to developing food, and there is no mention of using toilet chips to develop daily necessities. I didn't say anything about steel. A batch of things is brittle and cannot be used to make spears or swords. Of course, I don't know what the steel was like in the Tang Dynasty. Of course, I won't tell you if you don't make paper, so you can't make toilet paper by the way. This actually doesn't matter to me. I try not to do things that I can't do and always stick to my heart when I travel to the past. I really want to say that the protagonist is really a good person, no matter how good the book is.

To be honest, hay is poisonous, but it is stronger than a highly toxic plagiarized book.

I think Chang Le and Fu Cheng Qian should be included, otherwise the plot would be too cliche.

There has been a book shortage recently. I was browsing the history rankings and came across this book. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I just couldn't hold on anymore. I quit and looked at the comment section. I felt the same way. I didn't dare to say anything because I hadn't finished reading the rest. Just a few chapters. First, there are really too many typos. I'm not nit-picking. If it was the middle and late stages of the book, I could understand the negligence due to the heavy workload. But it's really unjustifiable that you have so many typos in the beginning chapter. As a Chinese graduate, it's really uncomfortable. The second is common sense errors that many book friends have pointed out, such as Zhongmen, Fushang, Stove, Li Zhi and the age of the protagonist, etc. It is said that there are more similar errors later. I have only read the first dozen chapters. The third is not doing research to open up my imagination, such as Pinyin. This thing is really ridiculous. The pronunciation and spelling rules of Pinyin correspond to Mandarin. Created, at least common sense should know when Mandarin appeared. It is not that the ancients did not have phonetic notation methods. Xu Shen's "Shuowen Jiezi" already had phonetic notation methods, followed by the straight phonetic method and the fanqie method. Taking a step back and looking at the cost of learning, even if it is not good to use the radical phonetic notation method that has appeared in modern times, it is better than the unfamiliar Latin alphabet. When using pinyin to pronounce the ancient sounds of the Tang Dynasty, many spelling rules must not be used to pronounce them. If standard spelling rules are not used, the meaning of pinyin will not exist, so this is a paradox and cannot be used at all! To summarize, author, I didn't read what you wrote later, but I can already conclude one thing in just a dozen chapters. Your attitude in writing books is very problematic. It's a matter of historical common sense. It's not about book friends and readers taking it seriously. It's the minimum standard threshold for writing this type of book. If you just slap your forehead and write it, then there will be problems no matter what type of writing you write! The author of this year's hit mystery, Squid, has to work hard to read a lot of books and study the British Victorian era and occult knowledge when writing fantasy. As a historical author, your requirements for researching information are really too low! Taking a step back, I saw so many typos in just the first dozen chapters, which speaks for itself. Writing articles requires a bit of craftsmanship. Taking a step back again, online articles are operated commercially. Your writing must meet the needs of readers and be responsible to the readers in order to have room for survival. I really don't understand your writing attitude. How can such a ranking be achieved? You really should learn from the writing attitudes of the old authors of historical texts. It's not that book lovers and readers are demanding, but that's the case with history, because history does not allow for too many erasures and modifications. Many backgrounds and backgrounds are the imprint of the times and are determined by the laws of the development of human civilization. And historical works The author himself must write something that is both original and regular under such a rigorous historical framework and against such a civilized background. Only then can he win the hearts of readers. Just like you can write about ideological leadership in the feudal dynasty, but you cannot write about ideological emancipation, democracy and freedom. You can write about various technical topics. Innovation, but cannot write about quantum mechanics information technology, it is a bit exaggerated, but the truth is as simple as that, and it cannot jump out of a certain scale. Perhaps this is the biggest difference between history and other genres, and it is also the biggest limitation of writing history. Therefore, I have said too much, author, please do it and cherish it! Don't let down your book friends who still support you! I'm sorry, I'll leave it alone for now!

I beg the prince to be the emperor, please stop being blackmailed.

Give it a try, and give monthly recommendations every day. Why are there fewer and fewer chapters?

Li Shimin will never have a satisfactory prince. An excellent king must have his own ideas, and Li Shimin, who has a strong desire for control, cannot bear that his prince disagrees with him. And he would not be satisfied with the cowardly prince. Throughout the ages, the most successful pair of powerful monarchs and outstanding princes is Hanwen Hanjing. The ones most likely to succeed may be Zhu Yuanzhang and the prince who died young.

There are loopholes in this book, which Gao Yang did not write. Add more sperm

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The template is indeed well planned. The IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are online. The promotion route needs to be planned. It would be more fun if the crown prince Li Chengqian succeeds to the throne.

I voted for two monthly tickets and applied for additional finesse 🙂

I hope the author can let the protagonist go to conquer the Turks in the future

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It seems that in chapter 30, I personally feel that the protagonist is mentally retarded. I don't know why so many people think this book is good.

It feels like among the brothers, only Li Chengqian considers issues from the perspective of an emperor!

After reading many Tang Dynasty novels, my eyes light up for the first time. I have a different feeling. I feel that the writing is very real. Come on! Take good care of you.

The author must have put in a lot of effort to achieve such a result in this book. This writing style is really not worthy of so many monthly votes and so many requests for help. All of them were praised and I vomited.

In fact, the writing is good, the updates are strong, and the historical genre can be considered a good one. But it is a pity that the author really should know some common sense about historical novels. How much pig iron was produced in the Tang Dynasty, and even the court built stoves to relieve snow disasters, and the court couldn't afford it. Several generations of emperors in the Tang Dynasty failed to kill the aristocratic family, and the protagonist dared not touch the aristocratic family even if he wanted to die. This is simply showing the lower limit of his IQ. The most speechless thing is that anyone who has read a few historical novels will know that sweet potatoes, potatoes and peppers were impossible to have in the Tang Dynasty. Then the Age of Discovery was to begin. These were only introduced to China in the Ming Dynasty. Are some Hu merchants also time-travelers? If these common sense things that ordinary readers understand are not violated, this novel will definitely get better results.