Guard the Dimension

╭( ′• O •′ )╭☞This is the person!

What is the first chapter about? Install batch? Abandon the pit

The first dragon chair (ಡωಡ)

The following complaints only represent my personal opinions and should not be taken to heart. ———— Let me give you my personal opinion. I thought the last book was not very interesting, so I planned to read it, but it ended up being lost 😥 As for this book, I feel that the dialogue and writing of the characters are not as natural as the previous one, and it feels like a two-dimensional novel from a few years ago. In terms of the plot, the explanation of cheats and abilities is not very clear. For example, for Xiao Hei, it would be good if you just write a dimensional guardian system. There is no need to create a routine just to counter the routine. You started writing the villain of Lord God, the chat AI of Xiao Hei, and the golden finger of space ability. You set the protagonist's goal to protect the dimension, but the conflict and description were not enough, and it felt like it was just a throwaway setting. In addition, as the opening chapter of Clannad, as a contemporary of 8090, I have actually not watched a lot of it. I only watched one or two episodes, but I listen to the songs often. You can just start with Naruto or the one that everyone writes about in the second dimension. In other respects, the protagonist looks like he just came to the main god space and then became so awesome. It is written directly from the fact that he just came to the main god space. Or the protagonist was an awesome character from the beginning and came to the main god space.

I felt sleepy after reading it, the writing style is strange, the main plot is strange, and the protagonist's character is strange

Coming up with names is exhausting. Come on. ٩( 'ω' )و

She met him when she was alone

So you just stood by and watched the tragedy happen for the sake of the so-called plot. Is this the so-called protection?

Author, you can change the title of the book. The title is a bit unattractive. If it wasn't boring, I wouldn't click on it.