Earth Deterrence

It's a very interesting science fiction novel. In my eyes, it is no less than Douluo. I hope the author will persevere. Fire is a matter of time 🙂

The plot develops a bit too fast. Slow it down to fill in other plot points, otherwise I won't be able to write many words.

The author is a person who can tell stories in his own way, but he is lacking in the ability to create characters and needs to work on this aspect.

Can you give me the entire role play? Follow the pig's feet and become a licking dog! He's the kind of guy who has no skills but just licks, but if he's lucky, he can pick up treasures from pig's feet.

Are all those leaders brainless?

This book is not recommended? No way...

Based on my more than ten years of ☞book experience☜, I feel that this book will be popular in the future. First of all, the setting of the main subject matter framework and the writing style are not vulgar and have no sense of fatigue. You can feel that the author is writing with great care. You can see the psychological changes in the matching of different characters, different statuses and different personalities in the book. It can be seen that he has put a lot of effort into writing; secondly, good writing can describe the details of changes in things and psychological impact in a well-reasoned, well-founded, cause-and-effect, beginning and end. It is clear and step-by-step, but also leaves foreshadowing, which is rare and valuable; finally, it is rare and valuable; In the end, I hope it can be improved: while the plot development is not abrupt, different individuals and groups can have better characters and emotions when faced with various choices, and clear character and psychological changes without superfluous things. There are ups and downs without digging holes. I hope the author will read my comments, because I invested in you and hope that this book will be popular 🤭🤭🤭

Darling, this is the first novel I've seen in which the origin of the protagonist is guessed, and it's quite smooth. The author didn't feel like he was poisonous at all. So far, I feel like I am watching The Three-Body Problem. I am looking forward to it. Come on, author.

It's good to read. This book will definitely become popular as long as it doesn't collapse.

The author's update speed is not good enough. I don't want to say more updates, but at least it needs to be stable. You have only written about a hundred chapters now, less than one tenth. Don't think about it just because the data is not good. Even if I recommend it to you now, it will be difficult to retain readers with this chapter. It's better to think more about the plot behind it, improve the details and don't write too much, make the points more obvious, and think about whether the suppression is excessive. The plot of this latest episode is very good. It does not completely copy the poorly written plot, but also introduces new plots. From this point of view, you are already better than many people, which shows that you have put in the effort. The most important thing in writing is to avoid impetuousness. A considerable number of people will only copy poorly written plots to create garbage. At your level, if you stick to it, it won't be a problem to earn tens of thousands a month.

Come on, come on, it's very well written.

Finally found another book I can read at the starting point

It's very immersive, like you're actually there

The characterization is great! Updates are much faster than those next door to me😂

The introduction is rubbish, but the content is perfect

The simple words show the great principles of life, which is quite beautiful.

Thank you to the author, it's so beautiful. I will keep following it.

I read your novel every day. The plot of the novel is tight, the story has ups and downs, and there is no disconnect. It is a thoroughly enjoyable article that is enjoyable to read. I will read each character in each chapter carefully and find that the characters of different characters are very unique. I like this very much. Reading your novels gave me a passion for writing, and I would like to give you a sentence: There will be times when you can ride the wind and waves, and hang your sails directly across the sea. I wish you to become a great god soon. 😊😊😊😊

August 1st. Negative. It is raining lightly in the sky, and the author has not updated.

August 2nd. Clear. The sun is a bit bright and the author still has not updated.

The update is a bit slow😅😅😅😅😅

A very good book, but the update is a little slow

Is Peach Blossom in stock? Post a few more chapters! Not enough at all

Come on, it's a very interesting book.

It's so painful... Why are the books being serialized every time... Cultivation Chat Group I Have a House of Horrors The Daily Life of the Immortal King Food Suppliers Global Martial Arts Dad's Alien Restaurant The Only Koi in Cultivation The First Sequence Super God Mechanic With the addition of this book Ruins of the Earth, the reading time of ten books a day is even less than an hour 😢

The author will update soon! Send the blade!

Gold always shines. The plot is really interesting. I hope the author will finish updating the book.

It looks good. Good luck to the author. I will subscribe if it is released.

It's very exciting. If you write it like this, it will definitely be included in the fine book library.

Tip 100 coins, don't think it's too little 😁