Creation Players Behind the Scenes

Some settings look a bit confusing 1. The setting of borrowing the body is a bit novel, but I feel that it needs to be established later and the loopholes need to be repaired. How the one who was killed at the beginning was resurrected was not written. Did the resurrection repair the body? Or did they switch people again? What the hell is cutting to the head of the clan leader? If anyone can switch, is it possible to cut a boss in the later stage to start a battle between the natives? 2. Isn't it unobtrusive that you added a therapeutic device to this, or is it something other than a game? Anyway, I looked a little strange here. I bought it from Wanjie Mall. If the game originally had such a device, it would be okay. It didn't appear suddenly. It's very embarrassing. I don't know what the author's world background is. It would be more appropriate to set up a device or method that fits the background. 3. And there are many settings in the early stage. There is no foreshadowing to start the game directly. In the follow-up, the settings are not explained in time. The more I read, the more fascinated I am. I don't know anything about the situation, and I have to use another person to attract people. It's easy to believe it. It feels like it's easy to be controlled in the later stage. I don't know what happened before, but it's very risky 4. The main god doesn't know the players, he has to ask people for everything, and he doesn't use his brain to think. He doesn't seem to care about winning people's hearts. Since there is a need, he has to deceive people, and he has to deceive hard. Otherwise, it will always feel like there will be problems. It will be better to deal with it later. PS. I can't make any good suggestions. I just hope that the author can properly exchange ideas with other authors or readers. There is a book of the same type that I am currently following. However, the setting and atmosphere are very well written. I explain the setting while advancing. It is also very interesting to fool people. There is another book that is really good at fooling, so I hope the author can also write highlights. I hope the author will work hard 😁

Come on! Very well written!

In fact, I think your writing is very good, but I still want to talk about my thoughts. If the author thinks it is not good, don't adopt it, because I don't want my thoughts to affect you, because everyone has different thoughts, and it is impossible to satisfy everyone. Don't make the protagonist too stupid. Although it can be seen that the protagonist, as a creator god who has actually failed three times, is definitely not very powerful, but don't make the protagonist too stupid. It's best not to be deceived. The novel itself is a group portrait, so the creation of supporting characters is very important. They should be numerous but not miscellaneous. Each supporting character must have its own characteristics. The world in the novel is also very important, just like the environment of the game, how to be novel and specific without being too chaotic. The setting of NPC, after all, as a Zerg, you can have some talents, you can also use technology + talents and abilities, armor, Crysis, Iron Man, etc. That's it for now, but I still hope I won't affect you. Come on, I think your writing is pretty good.

It's good-looking. I don't know if I'm the first to read this book, but it's really good-looking. The author has worked hard to update. I believe this book will be very popular. Come on, the author is great 🌝

[Crowdfunding] Ideas, characters. How to develop? The changes and impacts brought about by development.

[Crowdfunding] Supporting Role If you want an important supporting role, please attach the character's occupation and the personality that the occupation should have. Supplement: Occupation is their real identity, believe in me and you will have eternal life = students, Dayu Ruozhi = young boss, prodigal ambition = office workers. Professional personality = the character that the profession should have, such as Dayu Ruozhi's stability and caution. I will pick the one that suits.

I haven't read a few chapters. I saw that some of the races used as examples in the crowdfunding races by the author have no hands, so let me share my thoughts 1. If some races have no hands, they will be at a disadvantage compared to races with hands. After all, people can get more equipment, which is bound to be a bit unbalanced, so I would like to suggest their own routes 2. Many races without hands are not strong in themselves unless they follow the interstellar Zerg storm troop flow, but players should not want to be cannon fodder. They are all here to show off their prestige. It is not worth it to have small soldiers. So there can be a devouring evolution route, which can also be called biological equipment or biological armor. Freely evolve armor, form and attack organs according to its own characteristics. This gives players a lot of fun 3. Races with hands should mainly develop biological equipment (biological armor) and other operable equipment (such as Star Destroyers). Ahem. I didn't expect it to be specific. The author can extend it PS. On this basis, I thought of the player as BOSS mentioned by the author. The routine of hurting each other seems very exciting if it can be done. I hope the author will give it some thought.

[Crowdfunding] Brainstorming, complaints (constructive)

I think there should be more ways for "players" to make money. Ruyiyi The higher the level of killing the enemy, the more gold you will get The higher the damage caused to the enemy, the more gold you will get Add various professions to let the "players" do the work One by one dividing line - one by one For the "players" to attack the ants, there should be more military ranks Ruyiyi Commander, general By the way, the important thing is the level Worker As you work, you can get experience by killing enemies, so you can upgrade and get higher benefits One by one dividing line one by one About weapons I think there should be more cold weapons Ruyiyi Swords, knives, bows and the like Players can also make some tools to sell and make money by themselves ps: I deliberately re-read it once or twice for fear that I didn't get it right😂

I think this round of equipment should appear in another form, such as asking Li Kesi to create a small world. As long as people wear a special helmet and are forced to sleep, they can enter that small world. That small world can be infinitely resurrected (but resurrection requires money, and the increase in body strength also requires money). Then from that world, enter the Earth Armor Planet to fight 🌝I admit that my thoughts are too exaggerated

I like Dada's works, and I hope everyone will update more and create better content. I also hope to collect a lot of my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

Emmmm, the results are worse than the last one, it's not that it's not good, I just don't know why you didn't stick to the last one

The book is good, why is there no one here?

After reading this, I believe everyone has guessed it, right? Yes, Ant-Man, Grasshopper Man, and Spider-Man will all be characters that players can use in the future. Let's give ideas together. The condition is that it cannot fly, and its strength must be balanced with other races. For example: Ant-Man: Ability: Great strength, fast speed, 4 arms, no palms, unable to grab, tenacious vitality Grasshopper Man: Ability: super fast, jumping, has palms, fragile vitality. Spider-Man: Ability: Spinning spider webs, 6 arms, chicken claw-shaped palms

It's a pity that so few people have seen it. I only saw it by accident. It's well written, but it's a pity that the publicity is not adequate.

Your verbal and picture curses are ineffective against me and my defense rebounds.

Your verbal and picture curses are no defense against me.

You don't have a wife, so wake up.