Azur Lane Life from Scratch

Alas, the protagonist didn't create the ship girl he wanted, so he talked coldly and had a bad attitude towards the ship girl. He was reflecting on it one moment, and then had an attack the next moment. Sure enough, a dog can't change his attitude.

Chapter 5: Persuading the ship girl to quit. This is totally unlike what someone who values ​​the ship girl as important would do. He is so angry even if he doesn't show his golden skin. He also has a bad attitude towards the ship girl. Anyway, it's disgusting to watch.

I hope you can leave me some comments and suggestions. After all, this is my first time writing and there are many shortcomings. I hope you can point them out.

This book is about to be finished. If you have any suggestions or ideas for the new book, you can leave a message below. Thank you~

I decided to speed up the story a little bit, so this involves the addition of ship girls. I would like to take your opinions into account for this addition. If you have any ship girls you want to see appear, you can leave a message below to tell me. (The selection range of the ship girl is before the different color grid, or she can be the ship girl in the different color grid)

I was passing by and just read the introduction and the first picture. Let me ask two questions first. First: The port area in the introduction has nothing in it and is dilapidated. This problem should not occur in the blue in my image. If it is a ship R, it is possible. However, the technological power in the blue background is unusually developed, not to mention that the final boss Siren is directly in the future science fiction style. Therefore, the port area is in a dilapidated state. This is unlikely. In my judgment, the background technological power of Ship B should be on the level of the display device in Date Live, which builds a building a day, so that it fits the background better. Do you still remember the comfort settings in the back house? Furniture can help the ship girl rest and allow the ship girl to gain more experience. Is this like the energy-gathering formation in ordinary fairy tales? To summarize, ordinary furniture, as a special group of people, should be used by commanders at will. Only special furniture that can increase comfort is truly valuable and needs to be competed for, that is, furniture coins. Therefore, the dilapidated port area in the introduction is not suitable. At least I turned to you for the third time and was a little bored before I came in to take a look. Second: The specific process of time travel is of little significance. In the first chapter, you spend most of the time traveling through water. Who cares how you travel through water? Everyone just needs to know that you are a time traveler. At most, your way of traveling through time should be funny. The protagonist will complain about something and it will be over in two sentences. It is also comfortable to read, and you will not be annoyed because you are always in water and just don't wear it. After all, there is no foreshadowing in your time travel, so what's the point of writing such a long chapter? Do you know the golden three? In the first two sentences, the protagonist travels through time, and then briefly introduces the surrounding characters. In the second chapter, he writes about his character and leaves a first impression on people. In the third chapter, he creates conflicts or suspense to seduce readers to read on. Understand?

Cassin is expelled🥵

Cry, why don't you marry Ming? The protagonist has been rejected by Ming so many times.

The new book "Kyoto Monster Slayer Story", everyone is welcome to take a look~

This is the most satisfying emotional development I have read in a ship-girl novel. The reason is that the protagonist did not mess around because the ship-girls had a crush on him, but seriously thought about his feelings for the ship-girls. This is my favorite part. Hope the author will keep it up. Unlike other similar novels, the protagonist loves the ship girl because he has played games before time travel. In this case, I only think that the protagonist just wants to have sex with the ship girl because she is beautiful.

Fortunately, the author raised a hand to defeat his father and sister, otherwise your protagonist would have had a miserable start 233. . . At least when I played Granblue, I had Lafite, Long Island, Counterattack, and Little Gaga at the beginning. By the way, I recommend a few blue and white gods of war, not to mention the Fletcher class, light cruiser Leander + Ajax, Brooklyn + Phoenix, heavy cruiser Salt City Lake + Portland (I definitely know this), light cruiser assaulter, etc.

Chapter 167 is a little bit poisonous. Did the author forget the identity of Cassin and the protagonist? When your commander is threatened, do you think the ship girl will go crazy? Also, the location is an amusement park, so where are the security guards at the amusement park? How could you allow gangsters to harass customers? I hope the author will think about it before posting.

I hope the appearance can be balanced. I have forgotten which ship girls the protagonist has.

According to reliable information, the next re-enactment event is in France. You can save some oil to max out the Triumph Cannon~

I am very happy to see the growth of Kanmu fanfic. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. I hope that the novel will not be too game-like, which really lacks a sense of substitution and realism. For example, if the protagonist really suddenly traveled through time, why would he not think about anything and just accept it immediately? It is too rough, and suddenly appeared in the port area without explaining the setting, world view, and sirens. How come there are hard mode maps and so on in reality? In short, it feels like the protagonist is still playing the game instead of reality. Many game fan fiction has this problem. There are some conflicts that need to be adjusted when switching some game gameplay to real-life settings. The game settings cannot be copied. Some things must also be clearly explained and rationalized, because we need to create a realistic world.

The submarine activity is coming again. I don't know if everyone has any Rubik's cubes and supplies left. Because the five ships are all new, the construction pressure is still quite high. One activity after another, I felt like I was going to die... I will post the second update after I get off the plane~ By the way, I got Chen out of Chen three times in a row today, which was so cool~ If he hadn't gotten out, I would have really just uninstalled the game.

It's not finished, please be careful when buying chapters.