Zongman's Plunder System of All Realms

Great author, I still like this novel. The subject matter is good after all. From the author's perspective, this is my first time writing a book, although the writing style is a bit poor. I would like to give you a suggestion about the plot. Just one heroine is enough, don't start with a harem story. After all, novels are full of strange things, and there are countless harem novels like these. If you write about a harem, it will not be good for book reviews, and you will probably end up being called a stallion. Then the Naruto chapter at the beginning was too sloppy, and the rest was also scratchy. If you have a chance to catch up on the first few chapters, don't skimp on the rest. I look forward to the author greatly improving this book, and I also hope that this book will get better and better.

Author, why haven't you updated it after writing it? If you don't update it, please tell me earlier.

Harem? Tsk, sorry to bother you

Oh my God, look at this article. I really want to take off my leather shoes and throw them in the author's face. Oh my god, save this kid.

Just by looking at the introduction, you will know that it is another brainless and pretentious article.

I feel that this plot is very familiar, the copywriter is the master

The protagonist has been going further and further on the road to estrus and mating

In the comment area, a professional troll named Xuanyuan Diyao has not finished his homework yet. Please forgive me. After all, primary school students are under great pressure nowadays, and some strings will always break!

Can the author tell me about the update? ,

Taking in people randomly is just a kind of horse.

If you don't want to read it, don't talk nonsense here. Author, don't worry, I will always defend you. So you must not give up, author. I am with you.

I can't stand it anymore, it's boring to death. The author is really not suitable for writing novels. Give up. I endured reading more than ten chapters but was forced to quit by the author... Miyamoto Rei: "The bridge is not very safe. I wonder how the parents are on the other side of the bridge?" Shizuka Marikawa: "Speaking of which, where are your family members? Where are you? Let me start by saying that I have no parents for a long time and my relatives live far away. "My father is the only one in my family. The most important thing for me now is my life and that of my lover." As he said this, he looked at Zero who was sitting next to her. Zero: "My mother died in childbirth when I was born, and my father also died of cancer a few years ago (Zero did not help his father with treatment in order to prevent his father from experiencing a 'dead body incident' in this life)." Takagi Saya: "Like Miyamoto, I am on the opposite side of the Gobetsu Bridge." Hirano Kota: "My parents I don't live nearby either, that... No matter where I go with Takagi-san..." Saya Takagi: "It's really disgusting,... But it's a bit reassuring. (After Takashi Komuro received the lunch box, he lost the influence of the protagonist's aura, and remembered Kota Hirano's protection and tolerance for her along the way, which made her start to treat Kota Hirano. So dependent)." Busujima Saeko: "Where does your family live, Hirano-kun?" Hirano Kota: "My father is a gem merchant and went to Amsterdam to purchase goods; my mother is a fashion designer and has always lived in Paris." Takagi Saya: "What era is this character setting? !" Marikawa Shizuka: "Hahaha, according to the comics, my father should be the captain of the international passenger ship." Hirano Kota: "My grandfather is like this, and my grandma is a violinist. Hahaha~" Takagi Saya: "It's really, really perfect..." Then he was stunned and speechless. Zero: "Okay, everyone's situation is understood and the sky is getting dark. Let's decide what to do first." Rei Miyamoto: "What should we do?" Saeko Busujima: "Is there a way to cross the bridge?" This is a short paragraph in this novel. Who told the author that the novel is written like this? Even the composition is not written this way. I really can't accept it.

The author is too short. Each chapter repeats a bit. It is really short.

It doesn't feel like writing a novel, it feels like reading a narrative

I would like to give you some advice. Don't add parentheses to force an explanation. It's very embarrassing. You can just add them at the end of a paragraph.

Why are there always brainless stallion stories?

It made me want to pick up the slippers under my feet and throw them in the author's face. I was so angry 😡

Are you writing a novel? Why does it look more like an outline to me?

You're already a hero and you're still robbing someone of your bloodline?

It's boring to death, I'm invincible from the beginning, and I keep going to some weak worlds. Is it interesting? The author will see who can finish reading this book.

Why do you always wear such low combat effectiveness? Or what about anime without combat capabilities? Why do they always have something to do with dragons? Among the Hokage, there are only a few ninjutsus that can be related to dragons. How did this bloodline mutate? It's not that I hate Long, I quite like her, but your nonsense makes me feel uncomfortable.

In fact, when I first started plundering Otsutsuki's bloodline, I was very happy. I was invincible at the beginning, which will definitely be fun in the future. But how can you have a relationship with a dragon as a soul? You have a soul body, how do you refine your bloodline? And you are already invincible, so why do you always travel to worlds with low force values? I don't mean to be discriminatory. I feel that there is really no harm to the dead body. It's just like accepting female novels. If you look at other novels, there are also some that travel through low-level martial arts worlds and are funny. It's fun and relaxing. That's because people have already been stressed and stimulated, which makes them a little judgmental. Only when you are tired will you relax and be funny. Let us get used to it. When you write like this, it makes us feel that your strength is used to bully others. The world where you can wear and punch, the world of Dragon Ball, although it is indeed a little old, but it is still very good-looking.