Cultivation of Immortality in Two Realms: I Have a Proficiency Panel

What's the point of having a world of immortality on both sides?

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the protagonist is not doing anything serious.

Too many golden fingers? Just one is enough, having more seems too easy

The protagonist in the previous life was an adult, right? Why do I feel like a high school student, a high school student born in the 1990s?

Too much ambiguity, stallion writing. Interested readers can read…

If there was big data in the world of cultivating immortals, the golden finger of the protagonist would be useless. If his cultivation suddenly skyrocketed, his economic power suddenly increased, all of this big data would be available.

What are you writing about? You always have self-doubt. Everyone wants to harm you. You always hide it. It doesn't look good.

It feels very good, but some aspects are a bit verbose. In fact, when you write about this kind of time travel between two worlds, you must grasp the cool points, the advantages of the other world, the advantages of our world, use the advantages to the disadvantages, you write about time travel between two worlds, what if someone discovers that you have this ability, so you have to live alone. Etc.

This is the first time I heard that Shuanglinggen is 150 years old and has not yet formed an elixir.

In the main realm of the two realms, his name is Wang Changsheng, and in the other realm, his surname is Feng. Are he preparing to live two lives? The woman who wears both sides back and forth goes back and forth?

It's a pity to see the girl surnamed Huang giving a lot of explanations.

Very young, the author is not very old

How do you know that you can collect resources by going to another world of cultivation? You're not a major repairman, so why do you want to be independent? You can use your golden fingers to show your genius and get better training. But the whole world can't compare to you alone?

Did the protagonist buy too many talismans? You can't sell resources from other worlds, and you can't buy resources from this world on a large scale! Since the order in this world is so good, it is impossible for talismans to be sold wantonly! The key is that the author did not write out where the lower-level monks will consume talismans. After all, the protection is too good.

The author, please don't believe what those bastards say. The writing is very good, but the updates are a little lacking. If updated, it would still be very good. If you keep at it, someone will definitely watch it, I've already given it a full thumbs up. Automatic subscription has been turned on, just waiting for you to update.

Is there any benefit in continuing to write when my grades are so bad? Cut it off. The book is a good book. I suggest you start a new book. After all, continuing to write with this grade is the same as writing a new book.

Update a little faster, holy shit

The writing is very good, the plot is very smooth, and although the writing style cannot be said to be very good, it is not bad, and the logic can be self-consistent.

Why hasn't it been put on the shelves yet? It already has 280,000 words. Hurry up and talk to the editor about putting it on the shelves.

I borrowed a precious place to push this book and traveled through the world of immortality, and I actually managed to become a big boss. Readers are welcome to comment