Picked up an Apocalyptic World

Copied, I have a suite in the apocalypse... It's basically the same, but what they wrote is logical and well-founded. What the hell are you writing?

It's a bit poisonous, especially when it comes to advertising. You directly invade other people's servers to advertise. Can't others see it from your ads? You also have to leave no traces. Your ads are just traces!

There are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it anymore. There are all kinds of inconsistencies. The author's IQ seriously affects the protagonist's IQ.

What the hell are you writing? People are drowsy when reading this.

I read that this book has a lot of words. The quantity is there, but I don't know if the quality is worth pursuing.

The protagonist opens a gold shop and gives the store manager 10% of the turnover. The turnover is 30 million a day, and the bonus is 3 million. The protagonist is out of his mind. The price is lower than other gold shops, and the dividends are the dividends of the turnover. Other gold shops may not have 10% of the gross profit by doing this. Does the protagonist want to tell the world that his gold has no cost?

After reading dozens of chapters, there is a fatal bug in the book, that is, what qualifications does the energy crystal have to replace gold as currency? According to the current content of the book (before chapter 100), human beings are completely incapable of absorbing the energy in the energy crystal. That is to say, apart from its special name and special acquisition method, it is no different from a stone on the ground. As the number of zombies killed increases, the amount of energy crystals retained increases. Does the author know what inflation is? As for gold, although there is currently a large amount of gold in human hands, there is an upper limit to the amount of gold that can be held. Humans in the end of the world do not have the ability to mine gold, so they can only use existing gold. , As long as rulers who understand the economy adjust it, the circulation of gold can be controlled quickly, and gold is one of the equivalents that has lasted for thousands of years. Regardless of psychology or market rules, gold as currency has a higher priority than energy crystals. How could people in that world choose to give up gold and use energy crystals as currency? Give the male protagonist an opportunity to make gold? In "I Have a Suite in the End of the World", the currency of the apocalyptic world is called "Acrystal", but Acrystals can extract energy and can be used. The speed of people using Acrystals and the speed of obtaining Acrystals have reached a balance, so Acrystals have become a universal currency. Although the world in the novel is fictitious, since a world has been created, there must be rules for the operation of this world, rather than everything serving the male protagonist.

From this book, I feel that the author is a minor, and should be children in the age group from elementary school to junior high school. The story concept is quite good, but the protagonist and supporting characters are very childish, have little social experience, and lack some social common sense. Reading this book feels like watching a group of kindergarten children playing house, very ignorant, very childish, and very naive! ! ! This is my feeling after reading this book. I wonder if subsequent readers will have the same feeling? !

It's too poisonous. Not only does he give away his daughter, he also has no brains. Doesn't this protagonist have no brains? In the apocalypse, the system summoned Yafei, and you gave it to others to please them. Speechless, diaosi mentality

It's the same old routine, nothing new at all, and it doesn't look good.

How come the country is written in a bad light without it being obvious? Whatever Pig's Feet does is based on the country's greatest malice. Even if Pig's Feet contributes to the country, he will be chopped to death, and then he will buy foreign things at high prices, even if there are any harsh conditions attached. As long as someone says that this is a society ruled by law, it is not so dark. The other party will call you naive and give you examples, but he will never give you the names, places, and dates of the people in his examples. There are only a few old cases that can be named. 1.4 Billion people are represented by these

Chapter 563: The virtual game company still wants to sell shares to Tencent. You are beyond the era, and you still care about the game copyrights owned by Tencent? No new game released in a hundred years? Technology crushes it.

After reading twenty chapters, it was full of poisonous points. The main character was treated like an imbecile throughout the whole process. He transformed from a fat man into a national-level athlete with a bottle of medicine. He was thinking about gold the whole time. He gave cans to everyone when he met. He was afraid that others would not know that he was rich.

I endured the toxicity and read Chapter 38. There are countless poisonous points. A brief list 1: Personality, from the time I read chapter 38, it doesn't matter whether it's the protagonist, the supporting role, or a passerby, whether it's a modern person or a post-apocalyptic person. All underage characters, modern people do not have a sense of maturity that has been polished in society, and people in the apocalypse do not have the sense of crisis that they experienced in the five-year apocalypse. It feels like a student treats the campus as the world. There is no deception, no intrigue, and it is so peaceful. 2: Too much speculation. Of the many chapters I have seen so far, the most poisonous one is the one about gold. From getting it to selling it to opening a store, it's all poison. In the apocalypse, it is a pitfall for the protagonist to use food and crystals to exchange for non-necessities such as gold in a fair manner. However, you can find a villain to investigate the protagonist and fill the pit. The problem is bigger if you go directly to modern large-volume recycling after exchanging gold. You can recycle millions of dollars at a time in a regular gold store, and the money will be paid directly to your bank card. There is no way to fill this hole, and the author has no intention of filling it. Think about it, why are other works sold for small amounts or sold on the black market and abroad? The next operation was even more direct: 3 million yuan directly bought the gold store with the goods and the store! Let's not talk about the price. Before buying the store, the protagonist had sold 3.5 Million gold to the gold store. Now that the store has bought it, the goods have also been kept. Don't give 500,000 to your co-owner to open a store for a dime. Let's talk about the gold supply issue. A private gold store has a three-day discount promotion with a turnover of tens of millions. Are you afraid that you won't be investigated? How dare a gold store with no purchasing channels dare to be so pushy? 3: The pit of gold is too poisonous. Let's leave it here and continue talking. I opened a gold store and poached a friend to be the store manager and gave him 10% of the shares. Was this friend born a gold medal salesman? It was the store manager who returned the shares. Not to mention taking the gold bricks directly to the master in the shop for processing. Gold directly persuaded half of the people to retreat. 4: If you want to play gold, you directly need to buy a virtual helmet. I just couldn't bear it when I saw this. When you first arrived at the end of the world, if you didn't understand the situation well and insisted on playing with such a big technology, how much foundation do you have in the modern era? 5: The timeline does not flow, time is suspended in the modern apocalypse, and people are suspended in the apocalyptic modernity. However, in some places, there is no pause in the writing. Things that were explained before returning to the present day are completed after staying in the present day for a day and returning to the end of the world. What about the agreed-upon timeout? Summary: There is no logic, too much imagination, and the writing power cannot describe the style corresponding to the world view.

I have read more than a hundred pictures on other platforms and it was really uncomfortable to watch, so I specifically found a starting point to leave a negative review.

It's the end of the world, does surveillance still have electricity? ? There is no logic, there is no bare metal in science and technology articles, it is poison, the first chapter is poisonous, and the death

Is it too poisonous? When I saw Chapter 11, I was confused. The protagonist killed 7 zombies and each had a first-level energy stone weighing two kilograms. An ordinary zombie only had 10 grams? Including the zombies killed by the previous team, they only had energy stones the size of soybeans. So where did the protagonist get these two kilograms of energy stones? ? ? Others can only explode one energy stone when they kill a zombie, but the protagonist can explode a bunch of them? ? ? Will you use two soybean-sized energy stones in exchange for a smart watch later? ? ? So poisonous

You've committed all the taboos in writing novels

After reading more than 30 chapters about opening a gold shop to sell gold, I can't stand it anymore. I don't understand why the protagonist is so eager to exchange gold for banknotes. I suggest you don't read it. This book is highly toxic.

I'm really convinced. They say that opening a gold store is a formal way of dumping gold in large quantities. Gold has a provenance. Once you file your tax return, you have to check where your gold came from. The tax is only 3%. If you have never done business, don't you know how to pay the tax on Baidu? It's usually several dozen percent. Selling gold at a loss of 20%, with a turnover of 30 million, giving 10% to a friend can get 3 million. Is mathematics taught by a Chinese teacher? You have lost money. If someone else holds 10% of the shares, you will have to lose money. It is understandable that your gold comes from the end of the world and does not cost money. The problem is that your friend does not know that you do not cost money. How did he know that he can share 3 million. You can't watch this with your brain at all. The more you watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes

In the main world, he is thoughtless, exaggerated, has no ability to control the country, and shakes the rules of the gold market without knowing the benefits. The wages offered are not in line with normal people's behavior. The main character just wants to be a wage earner and helps others everywhere.

I bought this level 5 author account by swiping it. This is the first time I see a book like this written by a level 5 author account.

Can one cubic meter of space hold 2,000 cans? One cubic meter can hold 1,500 kilograms of grain and still have half of the space left? What cube is this?

It's a pity. If I had this portal, I would definitely be cooperating with the country, so I wouldn't have to worry about weapons. I'd give it up

It's just another world, it's not nothing, you can cooperate with the country, don't think of the country so bad, and the protagonist is a little stupid, you are an idiot, you run a world, remember this sentence, power-life eternity is the foundation, money is only an auxiliary

I am so embarrassed that I deducted three rooms and one living room, and suggest that everyone add it to the bookshelf. Whenever you feel uncomfortable reading a book, look back at this book, and you will find that the book you did not read before is still quite good.

Is this a high-tech food shortage setting again? Now we can synthesize flour. Isn't there any improvement despite the advanced technology?

It's so stupid, the more you read it, the more boring it becomes. Many chapters are about the awkward chats of people on the Internet. It lasts for ten or twenty chapters, or even more, without any useful information at all. It's like we go to Tieba by ourselves in real life. There is no writing level of this type of novel at all, and the word count is just pure nonsense.

Level 181, a downfall, a woman appears out of nowhere, and she really vomits. Obviously a very good subject matter. In the United States, I wasted time shopping with a girl.

In fact, intrigues cannot be written. You can co-write it with the state. After all, only you can travel through the world. I believe that the state cannot refuse it, and it is impossible to slice you up. After all, you are the root. If the state is involved, you can bring people there. You can say it no matter how you write it. After all, there is a special team to take care of you and take special photos. Professional negotiators trade, and professional personnel select technology. You can just reap the benefits without having to take risks yourself. Moreover, you can write as you like without worrying about what is reasonable. After all, you rely on the country to do things well. Professionals will cover everything. If you can't explain it, it will be solved by national professionals.