NPC Career in Another World After Get Off Work

After reading more than 100 chapters, let me briefly share some of my feelings. First of all, after reading more than 100 chapters, this book can be regarded as another book. How to say it? I felt that after more than 100 chapters, I gradually lost track of what the author was talking about. This is the feeling. But I still feel better about the author's description method, which is limited to the author's narrative method and the way he writes the story. Now you can see chapters 100 to 200. Just read it slowly when you have time, or just read it continuously. To the extreme, it feels like every chapter is a new story, which makes it a bit difficult for me to intuitively understand what is going on →_→ If any book lover has strong imagination, please tell me briefly in the comments. Forget it if you criticize me with comments like "I don't have enough imagination" or "I'm too stupid to understand the plot". I revealed that I had spent almost 200 or 300 yuan to read the paid chapters. I have read a few good and bad works, good ones at first but then bad ones, good ones after bad ones, good ones but not good ones. Besides, I will also delete sarcastic and sarcastic comments. Having said so much, I just want to talk about my feelings. Maybe some book friends will also feel it, so I can give you a vaccination in advance.

No, man, how do you want to set it up? Every setting is so weird. If in your opinion the people in the book have low IQs, can't you tell that an NPC is a real person? Do you still have some free time to play after work? Why did you just stop going to work? Not only is the context unreasonable, but it also invalidates the title of the novel. If you want to directly open a hole to fill in your own imagination, then you'd better write it in a different way. This is not appropriate because it is still slightly connected to reality.

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Hailou. Airi Bati, yo yo yo Chek Nao, I am my little brother, the most handsome boy from the beginning.... Zhuge's little brother (=´∀｀) is a man (´∀｀=). Book title: "The NPC Career in Another World After get off work" Author: You should know that everything is like a dream. Word count: 50,000. Book source: Creative Circle Shen Pinglou. Commentator: Actually, my name is "Sheep Liangliang". (This story (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻) A brief comment: a novel perspective and a witty protagonist. First impression: In my first impression, what attracted me at first It should be classified. After all, I actually look forward to every game article. With the title NPC, it feels particularly novel. From the introduction, it is a very simple and clear introduction. Although it seems a bit much, it is very interesting. The simple setting is written. So, I am actually depressed about the question: "What is DND"? Introduction: It's your break time after get off work. This game is about to be entered with players from all over the world. There are currently three ways to enter: 1. Join the game board as a brave man from another world chosen by God. You must complete the tasks assigned by God. Once the god you believe in is confirmed, it cannot be easily changed. 2. Become a free adventurer and start your adventure freely. 3. Incarnate into an aboriginal (NPC) of your choice. The camp, belief, and skills are initially fixed with the selected NPC, and have certain basic equipment usage rights. You can change the camp and belief later. The favorability of all NPCs in the initial birthplace village area is increased by 500. This is a world where various forces collide with each other under different god belief systems. However, for a For casual gaming players, Wang He will naturally choose to become... This is a story about playing an NPC and using his brains and skills to enjoy the game among players, NPCs and gods. (A slightly different NPC. And pseudo-DND novels, please feel free to eat) Story background: Game world (temporarily Western fantasy). Story style: novelty + protagonist's IQ is online. Brief review: The story starts. As an office worker, the protagonist has to go to and from get off work every day. Recently, the protagonist has entered a game "Void" jointly developed by the world with great expectations. Because of the void, everything is void, and there is still emptiness there. The protagonist enters the game, selects NPC in the character selection column, and starts his own acting career! Then, as an old player, the protagonist begins to study some of the potential of this game, and the protagonist also believes in this game. It's not just entertainment! As a faith-based priest! His status is self-evident. I believe that with his special identity, he will play the role of pig and eat the tiger. There are also those predecessors who are eyeing it! To summarize: This story is similar to my first impression. It is a very novel story and uses an alternative protagonist to describe the game. I personally feel that the subject matter is very good! . As for the progress of the plot, I think it's pretty good. The word count is just 50,000. Things that should appear are appearing, and things that shouldn't appear are slowly appearing! As for the writing, there are flaws that need to be paid attention to, and there are also feelings. It feels a bit verbose, and a lot of words are wasted on a lot of settings and some descriptions. I feel like it could be simpler. Personally, I prefer "clean" writing. The direction of the story: It's a bit difficult to guess. After all, it is only 50,000 words, but I can be sure that the protagonist will definitely come into contact with the issue of gods later, and the protagonist will also look for some potential problems as an NPC to solve, and finally become a great godfather. Recommended people: First. First of all, in terms of writing style, it is a traditional game, the protagonist has an online IQ and is possessed by drama, and the writing style is more serious, so it is recommended to this kind of readers. As for the subject matter, if you like game writing, and then add novelty, it is very good!

One chapter of persuading people to quit is full of contradictions and double standards. . . After playing too much in the East, I chose the West. After playing too much in the human race, I still chose the human race. I talked about doing as the locals do, and named me "Abel". Then I talked about "the body, hair and skin are inherited by the parents", and randomly adjusted the character's image without changing the hair color and eye color. . . .

After reading most of the book, I felt that the pace of the plot was too fast. The protagonist here is appointed as the host of the celebration. Two days later, before the celebration is over, he enters the next dungeon. Then, after the dungeon is completed, he returns to the real world to cause trouble, and then enters Odin's Hall of Valor. So let's talk about the celebration. This book gives people the feeling that the protagonist has been drifting with the crowd, not knowing what he wants to do or what he wants to do. He is inexplicably assigned a lot of mythical tasks and then follows them. He is kicked around by a group of gods like footballs and causes trouble in the street. In the end, he does not know what he did. It is very messy. The other writing chapters are like this, the first chapter is about the game world, the second chapter is about the celebration, the celebration is over, the third chapter is to reveal the game, the fourth chapter is the new copy, the fifth chapter is to save reality, the sixth chapter is the seed of the world tree, the seventh chapter is the Hall of Valor, and the eighth chapter is to save the world. As for this book, I kicked off the celebration halfway through exploring the game world, and decrypted while celebrating; after decrypting and decrypting, I opened a new copy, and then saved reality, saved and saved. Suddenly, God came and started the God War, planted the seeds of the World Tree, and after half of the seeds of the World Tree were struck by Odin, he entered the Hall of Valor with a thunderbolt. The rhythm is too chaotic, the transitions are too fast, and I rush to start the next part of the story before I finish telling it. I'm not a bad author. I wrote novels in this style in junior high school, and now I don't even have the eyes to read them.

So let's ask about the setting. What would the main mission of a free adventurer be like?

The early stage was quite good, but it gave readers a casual beginning of farming, and ended up entering the plot of a classic adventure story. Before they even got over it, they entered a intrigue and intrigue at the level of gods. This is only a hundred chapters long? The main plot structure has changed several times, and the protagonist's power level is spiraling out of control at an exponential rate. The turning point is when you log off and find yourself being pulled into another dungeon. The rhythm of the plot is obviously fragmented. An unexpected encounter is twenty or thirty chapters long, and it is originally a plot node where the east and west settings meet. A lot of characters appear for the first time, but the description is full of mysticism and conspiracy. From the perspective of the Oriental fantasy, everyone is silent and locked up, but the plot suddenly enters another high-level situation, and the characters who were showing off before have all become dispensable and insignificant existences. This kind of level transformation has happened several times in this long script, so are those conspiracy theory plot features just to fool the readers? And in the whole book, when facing high-level forces, the protagonist can fool him every time. This kind of plot is too frequent. It seems that those great gods are very weak, but they still pretend to be deep and mysterious in playing a big game of chess. (A neutral and kind human being negotiating a deal with a chaotic and evil demon is really rare in my life Personally, I feel that the writing is good and the structure is okay (the setting has its own way of explanation, just like the house rules), but the pace is out of control too fast, and I don't know how the plot will develop in the future (Where is the promised social animal healing game after work? 996 Blessing becomes 007 and is played by the game???

Your body, hair, and skin are affected by your parents... Then you also changed your face and your name. Wasn't your name given by your parents but randomly assigned by the state? What's so pretentious? Stand and stand again. Either don't move at all, and your body, hair and skin are affected by your parents. Or if you change it, don't say anything about accepting it from your parents. Wouldn't it be better to just finish the character and start the game?

This is the beginning. The protagonist is tired of playing Eastern Fairies and chooses a Western background. The backhand is that he has played the human race for a long time and does not hesitate to play the human race. Later, there is a matter of principle in terms of appearance. Why is the body and skin inherited from his parents? It is a bit contradictory to be an NPC in a Western background with an oriental body. (The background is good. I wish the author to write better and better. I will leave first)

Thanks to Qidian. Com 14 for recommending unfinished eunuch novels to me.

It's obviously a plot development where the main plot is pretending to be an NPC, but an arrogant character who knows the protagonist's true identity appears in the early stages...

You're good at acting, and you're a priest in the West with an Eastern face in the game? People won't think you are a player?

The author is a logic genius. In the first chapter, he skillfully uses the double standard method and successfully creates the casual side of the protagonist...

Since ancient times, poisoners have been divided into ten realms. They are, Poison Master, Poison Master, Poison Master, Poison Spirit, Poison King, Poison Emperor, Poison Sect, Poison Lord, Poison Saint, and the legendary Poison Emperor. Legend has it that once one reaches the realm of the Poison Emperor, one can abandon the poisonous book and cannot do anything to him. If you want to reach the realm of the Poison Emperor, you must pass through the training of poisonous books. And this book is an excellent source. If you can withstand the poison of this book, you will definitely move one step closer to becoming the Poison Emperor. It's a pity that I couldn't bear it. Years of good deeds were burned down. This is a warning to all drug addicts. Do what you can!

When I saw Chapter 7, I felt something wasn't right. It should be another world in a game and the protagonist conquers the goddess and starts a harem. When I read the introduction of this book, I thought it was a good pure game novel, alas! ! !

It's been a while since I've been here, and I discovered an eye-catching book. What an unexpected surprise. I feel that this book has the potential of "Reincarnation Paradise". Well, I hope to publish more books with similar writing style, and don't just put some garbage on the list.

Let's talk about the shortcomings of writing a book. The protagonist has too many golden legs. The "real" NPC characters in the protagonist camp now appearing are almost all gods. There are also too many female characters, only about twenty chapters. The protagonist seems to have a harem and is a free-for-all, but has lost the challenge. The main quest should be placed on the side of the bullying player.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a touching DND. It's really good. Come on, the game settings are very novel and very similar to Neverwinter and Victory!

The author's writing is great, the writing style is very touching, and the game settings are also eye-catching and novel. DND has a strong flavor and is a good book for setting parties. But there are too many settings thrown out at the beginning, often listed in a long paragraph, and explained in detail. Sometimes there is always the illusion of looking at a collection of settings. In short, there are many paragraphs that are too long to read... It's quite interesting to play the role of an NPC preaching, etc. The author should not just throw away the settings in a hurry and write more funny plots... Just like Lepijia's "Super Mechanic", it occasionally treats players like leeks, earns experience and upgrades, manages and develops its own power, and throws out a few humorous comments from time to time.

Have you ever thought about crossing a world one day? Go to a new world, see different scenery and different characters. Freely choose the path you desire, embark on an adventure, and start a fresh life. What will you encounter? What do you get? What will you become? All this is unknown. It is up to you to choose the path to this world (part-actor), The sensational ending. Whether you appear or not depends on the plot arrangement. (Formal face)