Marvel's New and Different Universe

Hello Hello Sa (What am I doing? Is the word count low?) I'd like to apologize first, I promised you to post a book review today But I've been reading a lot of circles all day, and I'm only now reading the book... I haven't read much before I have to write a book review... Ahem... Let me talk about the title first, it is very simple and easy to understand, it is a Marvel fan Oh! This is really embarrassing for me! I don't know much about Marvel... I haven't even watched the movies... This means that the title of your book has attracted many Marvel readers, but it has also discouraged many readers like me Ps. I didn't want you to change the title of the book. ~But you can weigh it and think about it, because after reading it, I feel that it doesn't matter whether I have read Marvel or not, I can understand them all. I am mainly worried that you will dissuade some readers because of this (Ps. This is purely Complaints, ifthe author thinks it can be changed, then it's okay to change it) ——Chapter 1—— The transmission failed. Since there have been successful experiences of "white mice" transmitting before, how can we say that failure is not a problem? Failed😂😂 It's a bit... Awkward (?) And feels like it was added for the sake of the next plot. I think this is more difficult to change, so let me complain about it After that, it's Dongfang Luo. Why did I feel like he agreed to go to the science department without hesitation And the woman didn't explain clearly, but the male protagonist went without hesitation and didn't ask a few questions In addition, the male protagonist beat the fat man before, and he didn't even think about getting fat. Some possible consequences of beating up a fat man Based on the above two points, I feel that the male protagonist is the kind who relies on force to solve everything and has no IQ😂😂 It is best to change the setting, especiallyif the male protagonist beats up the fat man, if it does not have any impact on the subsequent plot,! Personally think! It will be better if you delete it. ——Chapter 2—— By the way, why is Chinese used in New York? Or is it just Danny who speaks Chinese? Or... The word "New York" in "that world" is in Chinese? This may be a poisonous point (or is it the author's foreshadowing? I don't know), can you briefly explain why Why didn't Danny confess to the male protagonist that he also "time traveled"? Why does the male protagonist tell all his "secrets" so easily? Wouldn't the male protagonist have thought that time travel is a "state secret" or something like that and shouldn't be talked about? Don't you think maybe Danny can't be trusted? Is it because Danny saved him that the hero confessed everything? These behaviors have lowered the male protagonist's IQ. ) ——Chapter 3—— Say it first, (to avoid being suspected that I am here to cause trouble to blackmail you), I think the sentence "Old place" is quite interesting, and it finally did not insult the male protagonist's IQ Bad, the woman asked for coffee, and the male protagonist went there? Wouldn't the male protagonist be (even just a little) wary of strangers? How come you trust everyone? Whether it's Danny or Colleen Wing. By the way, what are you talking about as a writer? Are you bullying me, a newbie who hasn't read Marvel?😂😂 ——Chapter 4—— It's also the last chapter. Sorry, each chapter has a lot of words, and I don't have much time (I've been writing for an hour, I guess I read it too carefully), so I can only end it here It's very unfriendly to me, a person who doesn't read Marvel. . . You said Colin Wen went to teach, so I guessed she was a teacher You can briefly introduce Colin Wen. Your previous introduction about her is indeed almost nonexistent. Ps. It's just a suggestion from someone who doesn't read Marvel If all your readers have read Marvel, it's not necessary —————————————————————— Finally, general comments Writing style: ★★☆☆☆ (Neither up nor down) (ps. This is a review from someone who has read too many well-written novels) Plot: ★★★☆☆ (Not bad) (There are some poisonous points that make the male protagonist very mentally retarded) (There are also some things that are very unfriendly to people who don't watch Marvel) Smoothness: ★★★★☆ (Not bad) (Except for the beginning, which is a bit awkward, everything else is smooth) Investment Index: ☆☆☆☆☆ (Not good) It is recommended to invest) (ps. Don't mind, because you have already signed the contract) Finally, attach a screenshot It feels a bit strange to use "the other party", you can change it I am so tired😥😥😥I have been looking at me for an hour The last word, come on

Finally someone has a comic plot

I want to watch the plot of the Zombie Marvel Universe. I want to change the plot. I don't like this plot.

Is the author not from mainland China? How to use traditional Chinese characters?