The Wonderful Journey of the Elf

They were all bullied like that. As long as they have a temper, they should at least take revenge. They have never killed anyone from beginning to end. Is this Team Rocket? Whatever others say is what it is, and I have no opinion at all. Too cowardly, I persuaded you to quit, I

The sauce continues to bubble 🤓

The boy embarked on a journey from the rubbish ruins of the golden metropolis with his beloved Pokémon. I was very happy to find this book in the late-night daily recommendation. It felt like a lucky hunt. The story of the most representative golden city in the Johto area and Team Rocket is great. The author's writing style is clean in my opinion, and the water is what it needs. The elf library needs a variety of genres. In the era of urban style and realistic elf literature, I can find such a traditional elf novel, which makes me feel peaceful. Good night.

Come on, the book is very good and I recommend it every day.

In the first picture at the beginning, the image of an orphan boy with a strong character and a strong sense of love and justice was well created. The setting of being an orphan in two lives laid a good foundation for the protagonist's character. However, since joining the Rockets, the character's character has begun to become strange. Let's ask about a past life. People who are struggling to survive in a cruel society are very mature even if they live again, so your self-complaints are very dramatic and really inconsistent with the character. The inconsistent character makes people feel that it is impossible to read. I persisted until chapter 17 and I couldn't hold on anymore. . . . .

The author's writing is pretty good, but it's a bit rough in some places. First of all, there is the issue of qualifications and brilliance. I feel that four-star qualifications are bad qualifications. There are too many gleams and they are not rare at all. The battle writing is very rough, and it barely shows any level of skill. It's like rolling your face on the keyboard. Anyway, there are too many skills to use up (I feel sorry for you for a second). Some details are rough, such as feeding armored pupae that cannot eat, insect-type skills have twice the effect of normal types, etc. I hope the author can be more careful in writing this book. Come on, author!

The author wished that all the elves could tame one... He kept emphasizing that he had no money and was poor, but in the end... He slapped himself in the face... Without money and power, where would you find the energy to cultivate so many elves...

After reading dozens of chapters, the elf qualifications and the glittering streets are really poisonous points. . . There is no difference at all, anyway, the average per capita is four stars. Then according to the opening, I thought the author was writing a dark novel or a realistic novel, but the further I read, the more strange it became. A civilian who joined the Rockets ended up crazy about participating in various official website competitions and playing gyms. The plot of the Rockets was not as good as the plot of the gym. Are you an alliance trainer or a normal person? Civilian trainers, if you write a realistic version, civilian trainers will definitely not be qualified to go to the gym to participate in the competition in the early stage, otherwise the gym will be busy. If you write a nostalgic anime version of the pm article, then don't start in a dark way. To be honest, it is a bit different, and it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. . .

I haven't finished reading it and only read a few chapters after it was released, but that Lulili is so damn disgusting and disobedient and runs around. Even if the author is doing it for the chance of that Lulili, he can't indulge his elves too much, right? And are four-star elves really that common? Can't you just write dark stories seriously after taking all the bad elves and joining Team Rocket? Whose Rockets team allows you to wander around casually after collecting the elves? Just go out and wander around, are you still going to follow Xiaozhi's path? He's obviously from Team Rocket and yet he writes so brightly? If you want to find a long-term club from the beginning, write Alliance or Bounty Hunter. Have you ever seen a Rockets team that is so laid-back? Don't even have any tasks? Want to run away after taking the elf? Don't have to do anything? 🙂🙂🙂

I don't discuss the protagonist's IQ, I don't discuss the random skills, and I can tolerate the issue of qualifications, but I am here to read a book. If you meet Yukira and you don't accept it, I don't understand. You can make your own energy cubes, but are you afraid you can't afford it? Don't mention any other reasons. If you write a book, you can add adventures and other things so that you can afford it, so why not accept it? When you encounter them, the elves under you are all rotten sweet potatoes and stinky bird eggs, and you don't accept them. This is really unbearable.

I think this book is pretty good, why doesn't anyone read it?

A time-traveling businessman with such an IQ must have committed suicide because he had no money. Your method of time-traveling is wrong.

I just don't understand the purpose of conquering so many elves. There is no so-called primary and secondary elves. It would be better if the number of elves can be controlled within 12 at the beginning. Later, I personally feel that too many elves can easily become poisonous.

It was good at first, but seeing that the mythical beast is not as good as a dog, I can't stand it anymore if I have a mythical beast in my hands.

There are too many messy elves. When writing about elves, 6-8 elves are enough. If there are more elves, you won't be interested. Just make sure the main lineup is enough.

After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand the battle. Let's not talk about the turn-based fighting problem. The key point is the commentary that is like talking to oneself. I can't stand it anymore. Come on, author, and say goodbye!

When I first started reading it, I sat down to write about the character of the main character in his previous life. He is a profiteer who grew up begging. It was hard to describe in one sentence. You might as well write about a high school student. The early garbage dump was a bright spot. I won't talk about other things. So many people have written about it. It is normal for a book to have a few bad reviews. A bunch of bad reviews is the problem of the author.

Write the next Elf Shuba and I will definitely support you

Why did you release the Tyrannosaurus? Mom sells batches

Can the author put the heroine at the end? After all, it is an elf novel, and if the female protagonist is not well written in elf novels, it can easily lead to poisoning.

This Liu Yue character design is disgusting. If only the heroine abandons the book, forget it.

I don't want to say it anymore, mainly because I can't stand it.