Arrival of the Elf Dimension

This protagonist is not likeable, the author should change it. He has a lazy personality and never takes the initiative. He is forgetful and can even forget his own elf. He is stupid and relies on others being rough to stay awake. What if he doesn't die in a battle? Being in a daze at all times seems a bit mentally retarded, a bit indiscriminate of good from bad, serious emotions, thoughts come out all at once, and it is messy and unorganized.

The author should check the previous chapters when he has time. There are so many typos and wrong sentences that I read more than 30 chapters and I was so annoyed that I couldn't stand it anymore. While the number of words is still small, correct as many mistakes as possible, and then straighten out the sentences and paragraphs. The plot of this book is quite interesting.

If the author can't find the voice of the elf, he can do this. Just play the game, save the file, and then go into the illustrated book to listen.

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