The World of High Martial Arts from Scratch

It looks good, the infinite rebirth flow is very refreshing and immersive. Come on, it will definitely become popular.

After watching it for so long, I would like to objectively express my views on this work. I have watched the anime "Zero Starting Another World", so I know the setting of death retrospect very well. The atmosphere and foreshadowing created by the author in the early stage are actually very good. However, one thing I want to say is that those who like it will keep reading it, and those who don't like it will only look back if you become popular and the number of words is too high. So the current reader retention rate is definitely not high. Secondly, this is the second dimension. Readers of the second dimension like to read fan fiction and humorous cute stories. Obviously, the world of Gaowu is a little darker. It can be seen that the author still writes refreshing stories, but he does not directly make the protagonist particularly powerful, but slowly matures from the experience of failure. However, many people like the protagonist's aura to be very obvious, and he cannot bear the slightest grievance or suffer the slightest pain. There are a lot of vague foreshadowings, some foreshadowing that I can guess, but some are full of mystery, or uncertainty. Perhaps the author should draw on a lot of anime settings and blend everything in, but instead of emphasizing explanations like death retrospectives, he unravels the mystery bit by bit. As for logical issues, there is no suspense aspect to talk about. And although it is a high-level martial arts world, the style is not that serious, and the emotional descriptions are very good. The overall setting framework is also okay. Of course, there are some common problems of refreshing novels, but in order to be enjoyable, you must give up some things. The word count is still small, and I don't know where the plot will go. It seems to be similar to the world of high martial arts, but the opening and plot are very different. There are many elements that need to be slowly evaporated. I hope the author can stick to it, because I am an author. There are many people who can't insist on signing the contract, and many who have signed the contract can't insist on putting it on the shelves. The ones that get on the shelves may be forced to complete the book because of their meager livelihood. Of course I can't promise you anything, but I really like your work, and I have read one before, so I am not qualified to say anything to you. There are fewer readers now, so don't take it. It doesn't matter if no one sees through your foreshadowing. As long as you keep writing, we will be surprised by your carefully designed foreshadowing when we see the truth. Don't doubt your ability just because some self-righteous readers are criticizing you. Of course, don't think that your world of high-level martial arts is better than others. Calm down and write quietly. I don't know what the results of your book are, and I don't know whether it's just your hobby or whether you just rely on writing to earn money. In short, ignore the noise from the outside world and write your own work with heart. Someone will always like you. This is a message from an author who was once a eunuch, but now it is too late to pick it up.

The cannon fodder is indeed cannon fodder. He doesn't like people well and has low IQ. He is just there to set off the protagonist.

Oh haha, Charlotte is quite courageous. I feel like he is going to lose his temper by reporting such an aboveboard report, hahahaha.

The new high martial arts style, I look forward to it becoming a masterpiece in the future~~~

Today's recommendation ticket is here~~~

I feel like I can't wrap my head around it. What is the key to Charlotte's escape? Who killed him? Could it be the waiter?

Is the development of the world that Charlotte traveled through the same as the previous world? Shouldn't there be some difference?

This Ding Lizhi is really determined not to let go, and I don't know if Xia Luo can solve it this time. His time travel was really troubled.

What a twist, Charlotte has traveled to another parallel world. It's good, but you can't practice martial arts if you don't study.

I always feel that Charlotte is having a hard time. Just after a period of peace, something immediately came to my door. Why is life so difficult?

Hahahaha, it's so fun to read a book like this

The concept is really clever, there are laughs and tears, and it's getting better and better.

It's too troublesome to catch up with updates. I hope the author can write faster so that I can enjoy reading it in one sitting.

The structure and writing style of the article are very good. 👍 I have never been a big fan of things like lottery tickets, because I always feel that something that is too easy to obtain seems to be a blessing from God, but in fact it is often marked with other accompanying costs. The other costs brought by lottery tickets are written in the book, which is very good, come on!

When I read Chapter 103, I remembered a comic I read when I was a child. When I was a child, the male protagonist and his father were attacked by gangsters on the road. The male protagonist's father took a toothpick and killed them all with superb footwork.

Why put it in 2 dimensions? It feels much smaller this way

I am very optimistic about the follow-up of this book. Good luck to the author, hehe.

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