The Cute King in Marvel

Come on (ง •̀_•́)งI like your writing style very much

.... Emmm Overall, it's okay. The most annoying thing is that the protagonist never forgets his original name. Since he was reborn as the cute king, why not call him Rimuru? Who would keep the original name of someone else's popular time-travel novel, right? For example, the cute king was named Mikami Satoru before, but he changed his name to Rimuru during time travel, and the Bone King changed his name to Ainz Ooal Gown during time travel. Do you think this is the truth, author? 🤫

The content of this post is a transfer of a book review I have posted elsewhere: "The Cute King in Marvel" Author: Dream Scarlet Moon Number of chapters (as of the time of writing the review): 277 Progress status: To be continued Type keywords: time travel, transformation into a slime, soft and delicious, easy. Rating (out of 5): 3 points. [Friendly reminder]: Most of the typos in the comments are similar-sounding words, which are deliberately done to avoid sensitivity and are not written by Wen Mang, the original poster. _____ This time I complained all the way (눈_눈): [Disgusting point ①~Compared with the original cute king, the image gap is too big]: To be honest, the first time I saw the name of this book and the blue hair on the cover" I was looking forward to it when I was a girl, because I have recently become obsessed with the protagonist of this comic, the Slime King who has a delicate body that is soft and easy to knead and flatten, and whose beauty is unrivaled in comparison to Diao Chan and Xishi (⊙ω⊙: inexplicably reminds me of the image of the fat blue man wearing a crown in an RPG game called "Dragon Quest"). I clicked on the book with full expectations, and then read dozens of chapters. When I saw that the protagonist Lin Feng (named after Lan) had obtained the "Great Sage System", I thought, "Yes, it's OK, it's in line with the original work." When I saw the protagonist's body transformed into the tender appearance of the cute king, I thought, "Yes, it's OK, it's in line with the original work." "When I saw the protagonist using the swallowing skill to eat the bullets fired by the enemy, I thought, "Yes, it's in line with the original work." It wasn't until the protagonist was taken in by Tony Stark and became his and Pepper's house pet and "girlfriend" that I realized that the route was a bit off...(´-ω-`) Huh? Isn't it the protagonist who is galloping around the Marvel world, conquering this world of superpowers with his beauty, wisdom and strength? What about being said to be invincible and said to be unparalleled in wisdom? Although the cute king is beautiful in the original work, what he relies on to subdue his subordinates and defeat his enemies is not "begging Tony's dad to support him", "shopping with Pepper's mom", or "wearing women's clothes to entertain the master's family". Beauty is only a part of the cute king (I mean the real one) (so big) Part (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧), I think what makes him more attractive is his personality, and the current protagonist's personality can be said to have completely subverted the original work (including himself before the transformation, I don't believe that teenage boys today can be so jealous, and they are not a special hobby group), from being independent and self-reliant The king of cuteness has become a master who relies on his beauty and cuteness to eat Ruan rice and be raised in a pot. Although I am also very cute like Luo Tai (passerby: You have a problem →_→), and the protagonist with a fierce breast is indeed my cup of tea (… →_→). If I can be the transformed protagonist of other cute anime (passerby: You have a big problem →_→), but it will definitely not work if you are a cute king. A cute king does not just mean "cute" in the literal sense. If you want to be him, you must first not be just a childish doll (according to the original setting, the cute king seems to be about 16 years old, is it fake? I mean personality). _____ [Disadvantage ②~The taste of milk is too strong, and it feels like a child's intelligence]: Speaking of little kids, I feel that the protagonist has become more and more intellectual since he went home with Tony's father and was pampered by Pepper's mother. Although it was softer at the beginning, it didn't reach the level of becoming a child. It felt like it was moving towards Jimin. However, since moving into Tony's house and being treated with so-called "family-like care", it has begun to degenerate, degenerating into a baby that is full of milk and does not look like a boy at all (although the cute baby is genderless, but he always emphasizes that he is a boy). Especially after being asked to dress as a woman from time to time, the "mom's baby" temperament becomes more and more prominent! Although I don't know how old the protagonist was before he time traveled, I think he must have been in high school at least. Please tell me, under what circumstances can a normal high school boy (based on the average age of 16) degenerate into a preschooler who likes women's clothing, acts coquettishly all day long, is always pouting and angry, and is unusually lacking in love? Don't you feel ashamed? 16-6=10, the 10-year personality gap can be bridged by a single person? He is close to adulthood (it would be even more embarrassing if he was set as an adult man), but now he has become a little kid. Isn't he ashamed? (´-ω-`) _____ [Disadvantage ③~Don't make excuses if your writing is not good, it is no longer just for your own entertainment]: As for writing articles for yourself, the person who wrote the book mentioned at the end of the first few chapters that the articles he wrote were for himself, because he felt that no one had written the story of the cute king joining Marvel, but I want to say that it doesn't matter if you In other words, when you publish what you have written, it is no longer your own. It is impossible to agree to adding text at the end of the novel to avoid being complained about the writing style. If the writing is not good, you will still be complained about (I am so strict (∂ω∂)). _____ [Disadvantage ④~The writing style needs to be improved, and the writing habits can be changed]: (see Come or not, it brings up a new topic by connecting the previous and the following. The poster had a lot of fun (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧) As for the writing style, I can really feel that the person who wrote the book is not a veteran who is good at writing. My writing style is relatively immature, so I can accept that I write things for my own appreciation. Indeed, it is just right to enjoy myself alone! There are often typos in the article, so I don't care about this in my article. There will be (but I made a mistake on purpose), as long as it does not affect reading; But I have to say that the paragraph is inexplicably changed. It should be a whole paragraph. Maybe the author thought it was too long, so I suddenly forced a line break at a certain position with "," at the end. This is a bit embarrassing. If you want to change, can't you change the position where there is ";" It means that the sentence has not been finished, and there is still the last half of the sentence, but it will make people feel very uncomfortable when they are suddenly interrupted! By the way, who taught you this half-cut line break? →_→ There are also problems with often omitting the number of words in the plot that everyone thinks they know and excessive writing. The former will make people feel uncomfortable. When a certain plot character wants to speak, even if you think the reader may think that you are short of words, you should finish it. , After all, the characters' emotions have been reached and the atmosphere has been created, but when everyone is waiting for you to come to the end, you give me a "..." Number, and then add "I think everyone knows the plot, so I don't know the word count", abruptly interrupting everyone's brewing emotions and asking everyone to "wake up". This is very irresponsible! The omission here is not called "not watery" (because you are too lazy when you are enjoying yourself) →_ → As for the latter, it's like having a joke in a sentence, and then you have to reveal it yourself. Don't you know what the chapter comment is for? If you hold back the comment, there will naturally be some commentators who will complain about it (like me (∂ω∂)), and use you to spoil it? What is the word "()" in your chapter? Oh, it's not water? If the word count at the end is not included, it's not water, so feel free to enjoy yourself and I won't read it. Finally, the heroine seems to be a super-killer girl. By the way, the author later set the protagonist and the super-killer girl to be 10 years old, as if to remedy the inconsistency between the character's personality and appearance (if I remember correctly, the reincarnated cute king in this book was originally set to be 16 years old instead of 10 years old).

Was the protagonist a sissy in her previous life?

There will be similar plots in other people's works, but they only touch on it, and they will not belittle other people's culture like this book, and say it is worthless. Writing this way will not make the novel more interesting~

It's hard for young people today to understand their thinking and logic.

Was there a bug when the protagonist appeared in the first chapter? By the way, does the protagonist Slime have a chicken? Will he poop? Doesn't slime have sticky mucus?

I was wondering if there wasn't a museum in the Black Panther movie that had things made of vibranium? ? Then just buy that thing and the protagonist can make unlimited vibranium after devouring it and analyzing it. It's enough to make a suit for Tony! ! ! !

Looking at Moe King, I thought it was Sakura, the first generation of Moe King Kuro, the magician Sakura. Am I broken\(//∇//)\

Send a few pictures of the protagonist

Here are a few more

Author, you haven't updated yet. I now want to apply for medical university.

The country bans sissies, the author promotes sexual transformation, good job, he even recognizes his father

To be honest, I don't want to complain anymore. I just looked at a few pictures of Discovery and Qidian, another novel about Thieves, and I looked at a few more emmmm pictures. Then I looked at Time You, and found that you actually wrote it first, so I have to complain. You haven't written as many words as your copycat, and he has already finished the book. He wrote it two months after you, so why are you embarrassed?

The alias of this book is "Have I done anything wrong in my daily life in the Marvel world?"

I remember the author seemed to have posted this

There really aren't many people writing fan fiction about the cute king. I hope you can keep going and create another KouKou group. The author must be a novice. You can listen to the opinions of the group members and try to write better. Come on 😁😁😁

I am the administrator to add fans

I haven't seen such a heartwarming article in a long time 😰👍️

Mark No. 30 Lan Gang Armor

The little author, who is not updating the article, holds up his two ears, cuts the arteries and veins, and remains motionless, so cute. The young author, who doesn't update his articles, inserts needles to destroy his brain and hangs him up. He sticks hydrochloric acid on his belly and crawls around so cutely. The young author, who does not update the article, is locked in a cage, hangs his tail and gives electric shocks. He is so sad and depressed, so cute. The young author, who did not update the article, pinched the left and right breasts, cut open the chest and performed a laparotomy, the blood was so cute. The young author, who did not update the article, was injected with anesthesia and tied up, and his cecum was cut and sewn up. His eyes were dull and so cute. 🔪🔪🔪 The young author, if he doesn't update the article, digs out his eyes and lifts them up, cuts off his bladder and cerebellum, his dying struggle is so cute. 🔪🔪🔪 The young author, who didn't write any more articles, tied his hands and feet and hung them up, using leather whips, candles, and electric batons, and he screamed so cutely. 🔪🔪🔪 😃😃