Not a Magician

Coming from the first book, although there are many broken parts, it is still a good book. It is true that there are still many areas that need to be strengthened. I would like to give some small suggestions to the author. The setting of the protagonist can be a little funny. Many popular books recently tend to have this feeling. The author can refer to the recent popular books, which should be a lot more fun in daily life. The last book had a strange feeling. Although the protagonist was strong, it was a bit lacking in excitement. Although he won in the end, I always felt that the protagonist was a bit abused. It would be more interesting if the author strengthened some of the protagonist's ability growth plans. Then, in the Heroic Spirits section, I can write more popular characters in FGO. After all, I can't draw them myself, but having such characters will be an element to attract readers when reading.

Solomon and the protagonist are really incompatible with each other. The protagonist is completely led by the nose, thus losing the meaning of the relationship between master and servant. In addition, it is more like mechanical magic than scientific magic. Although creating things out of thin air is unnatural, it does not feel that the characteristics of this kind of magic are highlighted. It feels like there is no use for the protagonist to deliberately spoil the story. In addition to highlighting his prophetic advantage as a time traveler, it does not have a good chemical reaction. Instead, the protagonist takes it for granted and measures the reactions of others based on what he has seen from God's perspective. In short, this is a traditional time traveler who can calculate and be clever, but lacks the pursuit and charm of a magician. He is just an ordinary little person who hopes to achieve his goal by clearing the Holy Grail.

Why bother? If you don't want to use Solomon to push back, then why did you summon him? Why not summon individual followers to forcibly torture the master? Summon an unusable follower. . . Accepted

Isn't this a doctor wearing Solomon's skin? According to the relevant plot of FGO, it is shown that Solomon has played the role of a perfect tool after he was summoned by the director. He can fight wherever the master tells him, and he can get perfect answers to the master's inquiries. He is also the master's perfect personal bodyguard. Because of his lack of humanity, even if the director orders him to commit suicide, he will not resist, and he will never contradict or strike without reason. At this stage, he is not addicted to magic. ★Merry is simply the dream soul of all masters! Conclusion: This is a fake Solomon! Or maybe the author doesn't understand Solomon well enough!

Entering the palace three times, and coming a few more times, seven in and seven out

It feels a bit forced to subjugate one's intelligence and abuse the owner.