I Can Match the Skills

I have some thoughts after reading this book, so I'll share them. First of all, the style of this book is funny. Secondly, the title and introduction of the book are a bit misleading to new readers. During the change of scenes, it just means that some time has passed and the continuity is not very good (although the impact is not big, you still need to pay attention) Generally speaking, it is good to pass the time and have fun and entertainment. I hope I can stick to it. 😏😏

I feel like I'm taking a funny and relaxed route, but the female apprentice is really too crowded. I don't think it's majestic at all. Moreover, I feel that if you write a protagonist who only accepts female apprentices, for example, he is very good to women anyway, so when the spiritual energy is revived, choose a feminine one. Son of Destiny, if you only write one, but fortunately you write two or three, this one will be fine. I have read many such books. Don't look at my ID as a newly registered ID. I am bound to a large size and cannot speak. After all, readers are pursuing a sense of substitution. Most of the books are male. How can I say this? When I read other articles, they are generally written with some dignity. But my usual words are still a bit confusing. Don't forget, between a master and an apprentice, I feel like what you write doesn't sound like a master or an apprentice, or like an apprentice? If you want to know how Western society is governed, even if you are a tease, you should write in a light-hearted way with a sense of distance.

Has anyone ever played "Magic Power"? Although this game is a bit old, you can really play it. It's quite fun. 8 Kinds of elements can make up a lot of magic. Each magic uses different elements and has different effects. According to statistics, there seem to be more than 1,000 magic effects! My favorite skill, black hole vortex plus a shield😁

This is another book that is led by the system. It doesn't matter if this book has a protagonist or not.

I'll tell you to quit at the beginning. Goodbye. I know that you, the author, don't want any readers.

It can start as soon as the player appears. The mentally retarded plot appears. Very poisonous

The skill CD is too long. With just a few skills, it can take dozens of minutes or several hours to put one in. Is it normal for a fight? The same goes for elemental fusion. Aghanim's Scepter should come out soon. Also, the blood volume. The level 40 gold template only has so much blood. Players have hundreds of health points at just a few levels. I hope the data will be more rigorous. In addition, it is recommended to write an outline first. A common problem for novice authors is that they do not know how the plot unfolds. For example, in one chapter, they were defending the city, and in the next chapter they ran off to adventure. The character descriptions are also a bit monotonous. For example, the general, the protagonist made a fuss when dealing with a few players, and the character description is relatively thin.

25 Cards can't be watched anymore The early stage is very good When the players appear, they will be poisoned

You can discuss some interesting skills, props, etc. In the comment area. New authors urgently need you!

I gave up, and I started to persuade you to quit in Chapter 24. The front is pretty good.

Good food and good books, you can collect and keep them I feel that the writing of the protagonist is a bit embarrassing. If nothing else, this is a rebirth game, so the biggest enemy is not the NPC in the game, nor the system, but the players. Players can be resurrected and wander, but the protagonist cannot! Players don't have a camp. Some players just like to be in the evil camp, but not the protagonist! Don't forcefully explain that the system doesn't allow it, that would be disgusting. The protagonist is reborn, what is wrong with selectively forgetting players? Just use the setting to forcefully explain it and fool the readers.

Why not write about traveling to another world? What are these players and apprentices? . .

Stick to Chapter 6, this style of painting is hard to describe in just one word

The author's writing is really great, I'm really speechless. Suddenly he used a big move that consumes 3000 HP to refresh people. I only have 1000 seconds left to become crispy. I really can't understand it...

I just want to know whether to write about online games or time travel?

Is the author serious? The cover of this book is the same as the other one.

Have you ever played Rocky? That game has so many skills!

Pig's Foot is still too young, and his total life is 4,000. Before he got anywhere, he used a skill to permanently reduce his life by 3,000.

The protagonist has successfully become a... Licking dog. In addition, the author said that the protagonist is so good to those two women, and the two women even secretly took photos of the protagonist and posted them on the Internet. I personally feel that it is very poisonous.

It's too cool. The system and skills take up too much space. It's so dumb that I really can't read it.

This is the only one, please give it to me.

The author's concept is okay, but his writing skills still need to be improved. Come on.

The first thing that comes to mind when I see his skills

Hey, why do you want to accept a disciple if you are obviously very good-looking? The problem is that this female disciple's writing is not good. She decisively persuaded me to quit. It was too poisonous.

This profile of yours really discourages you from quitting and I suggest you change it.

Chapter 1: Is the persuasion to quit and the mandatory mission real? If a Yunnanese works in Shenzhen and Shenzhen encounters an earthquake, the Yunnanese cannot return to Yunnan but can only resist the earthquake in Shenzhen, right? This is a mandatory task. Extremely poisonous!