A Hamster's Apocalypse

This writing is completely nonsensical. There's inexplicable anger, characters appearing out of nowhere, and the narrative flows erratically. It's utterly incomprehensible, so I promptly abandoned it.

I'm creating this thread for feedback. Feel free to share your opinions; I'll accept the good ones. As for those that are malicious and pointless, I'm sorry, I won't pay attention to them.

Seeing that security captain was really baffling; he made me question my existence time and time again. When it came to the shopping spree, I couldn't stand it anymore. Was this supposed to be a domineering CEO story?

Did you read the posts on Magic Cube Space? There are so many similar ones, like: neighborhood groups, industrial water, bugs 🐛. To be honest, yours isn't as good as hers. Hers feels like these things just naturally appear at that particular moment. Your description of the feeling isn't quite there; it doesn't capture that feeling. I've heard that telling the truth isn't well-received QAQ

I looked at it for a long time, but I still didn't understand it. A jumbled mess 🙂

It's a mess, I can't stand it, it's incoherent and doesn't make any sense.

Dear author, your new book is great! I've joined the new book investment group, please update!

Due to my own special circumstances, the update time will be changed to noon from now on. Please be aware of this. We are also now recruiting extras; please feel free to reply below. The format is: Name + Occupation.