All Spirits Strive to Be First

When I read my book, I can understand it, maybe because the whole story is already in my mind. And book lovers may have only a partial understanding of it? If there is any, I will improve and answer it. Comments are welcome.

The beginning is quite interesting, but the forced world view and the tragic life experience of the protagonist are a bit subtle. I suggest the author modify it. Overall, it is ok.

😌 I wish everyone abundant wealth, happiness and good health!

I came here specially to visit, and I can see that the writing style is very powerful.

I don't know which work it is from, but it seems to be about Xianxia. I feel that the routines in the first three chapters of this article are very similar to that one. Of course, there are better similarities. There is no big problem with the three golden chapters. The only possibility is that the writing style could be more refined. In addition, since the cultivation system sold by the author is not copied from previous generations, it is not recommended to roll it out at once. It has no sense of picture, and even a cursory reader like me will forget what it is after the second chapter. Only by proposing a level system that is similar to the protagonist bit by bit can it be more impressive. For example, one level higher than the protagonist or two levels higher will be acceptable. No matter how high it is, you won't know what it is. Either it is to portray an extremely impressive supporting role, at least a character who can play the second role at a certain stage, then his realm will definitely be remembered, and the system related to him will also be impressive.