Yun Si

I only read a few chapters, and I really didn't expect that this was a female pornographic book. I was attracted by this long-standing historical allusion. Even if this book is listed in a literary text, it is definitely not an exaggeration. Although some readers are uncomfortable with the rare characters, I think the author does not need to change. Readers will generally skip the issue of rare characters. Chinese square characters themselves have picophonetic characteristics. When seeing these characters, whether the readers recognize them or not, the author's understanding has already flowed into the readers' hearts. As for the setting, from the name given by Yun Si, the author created an image of a weak woman and included a wish for her healthy growth. At this moment, Yun Si is no longer the author's subjective image, but a child of the plane created in the shaping space. This shows that the author's world view is rigorous and stable, with strong regularity. I think the author will continue to be immersed in Han style and classical culture. The promotion of these traditional aesthetics is a focus on the social benefits of the work. This work may not quickly become a popular masterpiece because of the age of the Internet, but it will definitely become a classic over time, and thus have the immortal life of a rock. I wish the author will persevere in the creation of this book, devote his youth to creating a classic, and accumulate soil into mountains in exchange for amazing brilliance!

"Yun Si" Reviewer: Sui Sui Changjun Overall review: This is a fairy tale novel based on the writing style of white clouds floating out of the dust and the charm of long flowing water. The plot is cleverly conceived and the succession and transition are well grasped. (The reason why this work cannot have a good ranking in Xianxia is the obvious problem - the market, and the author must understand it. Qidian Women's Channel is a strange place. Readers don't like to read short stories, but they don't want to read too serious books, so...) The purpose of this book is relatively long-standing, focusing on the step-by-step rhythm, without eye-catching reversals or selling points. But there are no serious symptoms, so Yun Si has indeed become a critical book, a book that is at the critical point between being popular and not being popular.         ，，，， The protagonist Yun Si has a vivid image. The smart and lively girl seems to be jumping around. The description of her emotions is also very accurate. The readers will be confused and lost along with her. (But there is one unreasonable point that no one pays attention to: the mythical beast, although it is a mythical beast, this does not mean that it can survive from ancient times to the present, and its heart was hunted by Yunsi's aunt? Assuming that it has survived to this day, it must be very powerful. How can Aunt Yunsi How can it be killed? Or maybe it was passed down from ancestors, so if the remaining spiritual consciousness lasts for a long time, can it still inform Yun Si? The vocabulary is rich, the scenes are set up vividly, and the plot is rendered with ease, giving people a comfortable feeling. Without repeating the good words, let me tell you my views on the prospects of this book: First of all, I tried this book in the new book investment group in August 1999. The author's attitude is very diligent, and I know that she can persevere and write Yun Si well and finish it. I expected that her book would not become popular due to the increase in word count (it would be a bit strange if it became popular, maybe the female author has changed her taste). If it is not popular now, it is unlikely to be popular in the future. But it doesn't matter whether the first book is a hit or not. Just lay a solid foundation and pave the way for the next book. I feel that the author writes for himself and the writer writes for everyone. When the author of Yunsi can transform from an author to a writer, it will not be difficult to succeed based on the foundation of this text. Secondly, what is this book about?         ， This is probably about writing a story about the journey of a woman with a vast celestial spirit. She constantly strengthens herself, sublimates herself and blooms with brilliance on the journey of knowing secrets, seeking secrets, decrypting and breaking secrets. It is mixed with things like the Penglai Wonderland, human suffering, joys and sorrows, the twists and turns of fate, etc. (Maybe there is also a mixture of love and hate hehe). It is fascinating and thought-provoking, constantly enriching the character image, honing the protagonist's will and ability, and walking out of a yangguan path. Then, some words to the author: No matter whether this book has reached the original conception in your mind, it is the best, and you don't have to pay attention to other people's opinions about the remote pronunciation of Yunsi. Only when people do their best can they be qualified to look at others and examine others. The same goes for writing a book. Being meek is not a bad thing, but being eager for quick success is. I envy your long-term talent. There are thousands of roads, but there is only one in front of you. Write this book and keep your original intention unwavering. Finally, I wish the author more and more wonderful writing! Keep up the good work and keep optimistic about you. 😳 ——END——

"Yun Si" Author: Yam Purple Sweet Potato Porridge Type: Fantasy Romance Rating: 8.6 Book Review: Da Da's writing style is very smooth, and he is especially good at depicting characters. Every character in the pen is very vivid and has a strong sense of substitution. In addition, Da Da's shaping of the scenes is also very delicate, which can give readers a strong sense of picture and make it very comfortable to read. Next, let's talk about the plot. There is no problem with the great rhythm control and the ups and downs of the plot. The strange fish in the second chapter at the beginning can be regarded as a relatively attractive climax, which caught my attention immediately. When reading the article, 19 also read the foreshadowing that Dada laid in the article, and I am looking forward to filling in the pits in the future. I saw that you are not good at writing introductions, so I would like to give you some advice. If you really don't know how to write, excerpting a paragraph from the article is also a good way. Generally, new readers will read the introduction before reading the article, and the introduction will also determine whether they want to click in to read the article, so it is still very important! Overall, your writing style and plot are very good. I am very willing to recommend your article to everyone. I will put it in the next recommendation post. 19 Has already been collected. Please continue to work hard! From：chushiji

What is life like? For Yun Si (si), the most beautiful thing is that her clan members must ascend to the path of immortality, her aunt is willing to abandon the scumbag, and she can understand love and hate by herself. For Mo Ji, justice can be supported, people can live in peace, and lovers can die together, which is what they want in this life. For Ying Ning, the best feeling is watching the rise and fall of the world for thousands of years, the joys and sorrows of separation and separation. For Luo Zhiyuan, don't think about the past, don't care about future generations, live in the present and just be yourself. For Jiang You, he loves the country more than the beauty. For Ami, it's my destiny that I can't control. What is love? For Yun Si, the person I care about happens to care about me; For Mo Ji, when the world is endless, there is only endless love; For Ying Ning, there is no reason to die, and I am willing to be a mandarin duck without envy of immortals; For Luo Zhiyuan, if the love lasts for a long time, how can we stay together day and night; For For Jiang You, it is a way to have both ends of the world; For Ami, it is a matter of giving up if you are ruthless~ The book "Yun Si" is a fantasy story written by an author with an out-of-the-box thinking. It is not all about romance or upgrading and fighting monsters. What I want to show everyone is more about different characters facing different endings under different circumstances and facing different choices. It is not a traditional cool novel, there is no system, and there is no golden finger for the protagonist. The characters in it do not have absolute good and evil, right and wrong, but are just the result of different perspectives and values. Advantages: The writing style is relatively delicate, the picture is strong, the imagination is very rich, the plot of the story is interesting~ Disadvantages: The title and names of the book are rare characters, the wording and sentences are too literary, it is a bit difficult to read, and some scene transitions are a bit stiff.

I believe everyone's first impression when reading this book is, what does this word mean? The word "" is too uncommon. If the two words are combined together, it is completely unclear what the meaning is, which inadvertently turns off the interest of many readers. Si, which sounds like si, is a legendary strong and ferocious beast. In the book, it is the name of the heroine. Secondly, even if the two-character title of the book is not uncommon, it is not clever in itself. If you can't see the selling point of the book, are you born again? Fantasy? City? ... I don't know, but I drove away another group of readers. However, after reading the weird title and looking at the introduction, it becomes clearer. The main line of the book is the pursuit of the path to immortality, mixed with the joys and sorrows of the human world. Open the text again. The author's writing style is very good, his vocabulary is rich, and the scene descriptions are very graphic. Reading the book is like watching a movie. The characters are also vivid and have their own characteristics, and the monsters and foreign objects are also vivid. The most exciting thing is the plot. The opening uses a storyteller to explain the background and introduce the male and female protagonists. The second chapter seems to be a routine upgrade to fight monsters, but it is under the author's unique imagination. I saw the cuteness. Go on and follow the footsteps of the male and female protagonists in the place called Death Valley, experience various true and false stories, and slowly discover countless philosophies of life. The author has a very rich imagination, and his descriptions of things and people are all unique, but his writing and wording are a bit unpopular, making it a bit tiring to read. Generally speaking, the biggest feeling I have about this book is that the author did not conduct market research before writing, and wrote based on his hobbies without considering the target audience. It is placed in the fantasy and romance genre of women's videos, but the writing doesn't have much writing. Describing the feelings of the male and female protagonists. The words are carefully crafted, and the words and sentences are not consistent with the style of Internet writing. Internet writing needs to be easy to understand.

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Yun Si (same pronunciation), Si originally means female rhinoceros, because when I was writing it, I happened to see that Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty gave her this name because of his weak daughter, in the hope that she would be healthy. I thought the meaning was quite good, and it just so happened that the heroine was killed in childhood and relied on secret techniques to survive, so she chose this name.         （chi mei）（wang liang），，，，                                                                                                                              I started writing this novel in 2017. At that time, I encountered many things, and wanted to find a channel to change my mood. I stopped writing on a single machine for more than two years, and it has almost 300,000 words. By April 2019, I suddenly felt that I was too lazy and should insist on doing one thing, so I sent it to the starting point to urge myself to persist. Although I have read a lot of online articles, I have never studied the writing methods of online articles. I have not noticed the problem of uncommon words, which has caused trouble to some readers. I am very sorry 🙂 I have also thought about changing the name, but after all, I feel that it does not smell like that, so I will leave it as it is. I hope readers can like the story itself. Serious novice author Yam and Purple Sweet Potato Porridge

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[Testing Poison on Thousand Mountains] Title: Yun Si Rating: 9.2 After Effects: Yun Si's book, the first thing that touched me was the sentence of Yao Da Da. I have been thinking about it for many years, and finally started writing it. I think this is the same for many authors. Books are not only for others to read, but also for themselves. In the book "Yam Yao Da", many clues are laid in the first ten chapters of the opening chapter, whether explicit or implicit, but they are all ingenious, and the absence is perfect. It does not make everything clear at the beginning, but gives people a feeling of exploring flowers in the fog, which can deeply attract readers' interest in reading. In addition, Shan Yao Da's writing style is also first-rate, but a big feature that needs to be paid attention to in fantasy is that the paragraphs should be slightly shorter, and long paragraphs should be kept as few as possible. However, we still have to work hard to praise Yao Da Da!

This book should be on a male channel, not a female channel

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See Chapter 15. The writing style is very good. Due to the unsmooth camera transitions in the previous article, it is difficult to understand the protagonist and the concept when reading. However, when I saw Yi Meng Huang Liang, I liked the artistic conception very much. It is very difficult to modify. It requires a cycle of dual perspectives to capture love at first sight. The opening structure must be adjusted, and the mountain should be given a meaning and legend, and it should be simplified. Then the names of the two girls still have to be considered, there is no point in stealing the spotlight. Then the male lead makes a clear point, and finally there is a classic meeting. Next is the inner layer. It is easier to enter the maze, so that the reading feeling goes directly to the artistic conception of Yi Meng Huang Liang. In a dream, it is necessary to unfold the affairs of the dynasty and talk about life, old age, illness and death. This scene must be determined to be the male protagonist's love and hate between dream and waking. Then he leaves the mountain and dreams, and picks up the heroine with a beautiful smile, which is a masterpiece. Going out of the inner ring to the outside of Nanman Mountain and returning to the real story, it is extremely real at this time, and then unfolding to the subsequent events, readers will be very satisfied and curious. Small comments~ I am a fan of each other, and the book list has been collected.

It's good to have such patience when writing an article for the first time. The writing style has a historical flavor and will definitely be improved in the future.

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After reading this novel, I first felt that it was written by a girl, because it is very different from the male author. This is obvious. To be honest, I suggest that it is better to post this kind of thing on women's channels. It's my personal opinion. Xiu Xianwen is different from others in terms of content. This may be because men and women have different views on things. Personally, I feel that girls do not have an advantage when writing this type of novel. Although it gives people a different feeling, it is always a little less domineering. I don't know how to describe it. It is said that there is no cp, but there is no emotional drama in a novel, which always makes people feel less real. Whether it's been a long time, or whether it's been through so much, there must be feelings between them. Many film and television dramas specifically add some bloody emotional plots for this purpose. One is for the twists and turns of the plot and to make the characters more vivid. A book without emotional content and an emotional scene without a protagonist always feels weird. Family, love, and friendship are indispensable, and more emotional scenes can be added to it. Due to the female author, Brotherhood cannot describe the kind of friendship between men. It can increase the relationship between best friends between women, or the problems between men and women. The overall plot has a main plot plus an emotional line, which may be better! Finally, I want to complain about too few updates! Too little! Too little! Few!

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