The Immortal Goddess Rampages Through Another World, Crushing Scum

Comments from passers-by (no points for entry-level cute reviews) Book title "The Immortal Goddess from Another World Tortures Scumbag" Author Banchi Yanyu's works Signed and put on the shelves Reading word count: 30 chapters or more (including some V chapters, quick reading and writing review mode )—Comments and ratings—Book title: Slightly long, it summarizes the plot content but lacks thorough highlights. The good thing is that the heroine can be seen from the title as a strong and slap-in-the-face character, which some readers preferIntroduction: It explains part of the background of the story, lays down the foreshadowing, and the writing is good. It is different from the introduction of many similar articles on this subject. It arouses curiosity and clicks to read, and it is easy to retain the readers' hearts (but it is a bit different from the title. Personally, in fact, There is also a contrast and cuteness) The eye-catching degree of the first chapter: about 65%, but this is from the perspective of female readers. If it is from the perspective of male readers who do not often watch female videos, it is about 50%, but the score for semi-barbarian tribes may increase by 5%. Content of Chapter 1: The heroine's appearance is concisely and clearly introduced, and part of the background setting of the story is introduced with the heroine's hazy feelings. It is natural and smooth. The turning point of Qi Lanlan's taking away the heroine is more cleverly used with the word "human feelings", which makes the reading less stiff. The foreshadowing is done well before the heroine comes on stage, which brings effect to the turning point in the following text. Enter chapter v: Compared with the previous article, the point of the heroine's good nature is given again. I hope to continue to strengthen the writing style, but there are too many bad guys, and the heroine cannot let go of her defense. A few good people can be mixed in (yes Let the good guy be killed, and then the heroine awakens some memories and so on 🙃) Words: The writing is concise, the characterization is in place, the scene is well set up, and the plot line is buried in key points. I won't go into details. Friends who want to read it can find out for themselves. Sentence punctuation: There are some typos. I hope the author will check them carefully after finishing a chapter. There are several in the previous chapters. Advantages: 1. The heroine's character is not artificial, she has a true temperament, and she is very three-dimensional. 2. The expression and psychology of each character are quite good. 3. The hierarchy is strict, cascading upwards, there are many mysterious places to explore, and there is room for development. Full of space 4. There are many interesting points, and the environment and atmosphere are well done. Disadvantages: 1. In the early stage, a lot of writing was spent on the tribe with the Cang family, the Qi family, and the role of Lu Yinghan, and the heroine is more suitable to be alone. 2. In Chapter 18, it is described that the power of blood is very powerful, but it does not seem to be mentioned in the previous article. When killing one woman and three men, the power of blood was used, but the effect does not seem to be strong. 3. The heroine does not have to be referred to by her name Huang Ruoye when speaking. She can be replaced by "she", "girl", etc., Which is not so blunt. As for the heroine's expression and demeanor, I hope it can be melted a little. She is not cold all the time. She has to respond to the people she trusts around her with an expression, otherwise she will be too cold-blooded. After all, she is not a killer. 4. Lack of sense of immersion Summary: This is a fascinating book. It describes barbarism profoundly and reveals some barbaric phenomena, echoing the introduction. It is easy to attract people to watch in the early stage. The heroine's character is very decisive and powerful in the later stage. Friends and fairies who don't like this kind of subject can also give it a try! Comments from passers-by: Jinghua Floating Lantern Festival (There may be many points that were not mentioned, guys don't comment if you don't like them🤣)

Wow, what a cute heroine!

It's the first time I've seen such a decisive heroine, and it feels quite fresh. However, I have a small suggestion, that is, the camera switching seems to be too frequent. Sometimes the camera switches repeatedly five or six times in a chapter, which may not be conducive to creating a sense of immersion. Of course, I have only read about twenty chapters so far, so I don't know if this will be the case later. Added to favorites, investments and recommendations, keep up the good work!

Counter-routine, interesting! Come on, God! Please return for a visit!

The beginning of the chapter is so bloody... I instantly remembered the Aztec sacrifice of human beings 😓 I was trembling.

The circle leader is mighty, 800,000 words have been written, come on

Scumbag! 😜😜

The heroine has such a lovable personality The writing is superb

Woohoo, the heroine is so cold-blooded and scared 눈_눈woooooo😭

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