Matou Sakura's Dimensional Journey

What pushed me to read this book? It is the Cup of Fate Heaven (Kidney 2 must die! Zang Jie must die! Hour must die!)

There are very few fan novels with Matou Sakura as the protagonist. As a reader, I am very happy to see such a novel being written. Come on, author-chan.

It is precisely because book lovers like a certain character that they are interested in fan fiction about a certain character. The audiences are different, so the author should not belittle oneself, work slowly and build a good fan base, so as to have a good starting point for future works.

I feel that Sakura's attitude towards Shirou after her rebirth is too bland. Although I know that the author will never let Sakura get married, but according to the timeline, Shirou should be Sakura's only light before her rebirth. The reaction when seeing her again is a bit too bland. How about turning Shirou into a scholar (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

If you find any typos, please tell me here, I would be very grateful.

Author, where is Chapter 9? Where?

I'll report tomorrow, but I can't see the author's book, which is sad. . .

Once you gain the ability, your whole personality changes. Sakura's character at this time was timid and afraid of being autistic. It is impossible to suddenly become strong just because you gain abilities. It's better to just write that the devil will go on a rampage and kill the old bug. Then I realized that it would be better if I had the ability to resist and kill my brother or reject my brother.

After reading a few chapters, I still like Sakura as the protagonist, but I feel that the author's character design of Sakura is still a bit broken. I just finished reading the HF line, and I especially want to find a fate fanfic to detoxify. Sakura in this book does not give me a strong sense of substitution, and it is also accompanied by a small break, so I will not collect it. Good luck, author 🙂🙂

Sakura~sakura~ Seven flowers on a tree Not afraid of wind and rain ~ ↘↗↘↗~Seven flowers ~ ↘↗↘↗~are not afraid~ ↗↘↗↘~ sakura~sakura~ Great ability~[Funny]

In fact, in my opinion, the author's writing style is not a big problem. The main problem is that the timing was not chosen well. I personally think that it would be best if Sakura's tragedy can be saved. To be selfish, I am the biggest fan of Sakura in the entire Type Moon world. I may not really care about other people... I'm really a dark person.

Yesterday I went back to watch the original Matou Sakura's fate. I was wrong and I regretted it. The old man wrote it to death. Sakura was so miserable.

Although it is a bit stingy to say this, I really want to say: What if your book is not only signed and put on the shelves but also charges for VIP chapters, what will you do to poor people like me 😓😓

HF I am autistic now, find a friend to caress me

No, the author didn't understand each character and just wrote them randomly. Sakura is a gentle girl and you wrote her as a madman who often takes off people's arms. Superman was written as a powerful man who bullies a little girl. Mapo is not the kind of person who comes to visit politely. The person who visits Lao Chongzi will most likely issue a formal official letter from the Holy Church and then proceed directly. He will definitely not say nonsense like admiring Lao Chongzi. I originally had illusions about this book, but after reading a little bit, I really can't accept the poisonous points of the character!

Come on＾0＾~The photo is really good. Let's drive.

Come on, author, I know you are the best, use your imagination and compile this book into two million words 😰😰😰😰😰

I suggest that Matou Sakurakai's nursery rhyme and ghost princess should be adapted to the inner fairy tale in Fate/Stay Night Sky Cup: Lost Butterfly. Four teddy bears explode into candies and swallow the oldest fat tiger.

Author, it's best to turn those people into black men and distort their psychology.

Why am I not a fan yet?

I haven't checked yet whether the baby is placed forward or backward, I'm afraid of poison.

It's very well written, but I personally don't think the grade should be like this. But newcomers all have their own frustrations, so don't belittle yourself and don't give up. Upup!

It's too hard for me, the 78th 😆

I don't know why you perverts are always having sex. In fact, I don't mind Sakura and Shirou being together in fan fiction at all. After all, the original novel has given me a lot of emotions. The biggest reason why I read fan fiction is to see the author write a plot that can change Sakura's fate without changing the character. Secondly, I also want to see Sakura and Shirou get together. Because I am still very happy in the dog food in the HF line. Furthermore, from an emotional point of view, I don't think the protagonist of that fan novel can compare to Shirou's love for Sakura. This is also the reason why I read the fan novel detoxification after reading HF and clicked on this book. However, this book is still a bit unsatisfactory. Although it is not my favorite, but the author, please come on. Let me say a word to the author. The plot of the original work of fate is very exciting. There is no need to come up with all kinds of imagination when writing a fanfic. If the original plot is well processed and written, many people will read it.

Didn't it mean that 500 is a fan? Why am I not?

To be honest, I don't want Sakura's ending to be like this. It's too miserable. I just finished watching Game Life Zero Sum and so on, and now I almost cried when I saw Sakura's ending 😭😭😭😭😭 Come on, author, when will a new book be released?