An Infinite Life That Begins with Chinese Martial Arts

The design of this novel is okay, but it's too pretentious. You have to cultivate two levels higher and survive the thunder tribulation. Why don't you go to heaven?

Really beautiful silk! I can't stand it after reading three chapters! Those who see that God is indestructible are not powerful in their physical bodies, but those whose souls are indestructible and understand their own way. Swallowing mountains and rivers for hundreds of millions of miles! Those who are invincible at the end of the world are all outstanding people. What limits them is not their realm. What limits them is the world!

It's barely okay, but the method is too simple for such a grown-up person, well, it's in line with the behavior of a teenager.

I feel like the ancient one. . . It's particularly annoying to write that Gu Yi can see through the time traveler every time. He is so awesome. Why didn't oaa kill the protagonist? This is no longer a matter in the Marvel world. Normally, if you really find out whether it is OAA or the Life Tribunal, you should kill the protagonist and then use it for research.

Sorry, I only read more than 10 chapters. I began to think that the protagonist would have a brain after decades of life as written in the first 3 chapters. However, the brain only appeared in his active crying and feeding at birth. The subsequent dialogue with the emperor and other things did not reflect the wisdom of his decades of life experience. Sorry, it's not my cup of tea. If you like mindless pretense, you can check it out.

I don't know how to comment on the author. I guess you copied the Song Dynasty story mechanically and used it freely. Anyway, it is completely different. The protagonist is really not a qualified power leader from head to toes to armpits and armpit hair. Lao Tie, your talent is not worthy of your ambition.

You can add a bit of horror or comics like Dragon Ball Naruto

To be honest, you, the author, have some great points about your book that I really don't appreciate. First, as a superior, you only think about improving your own strength. You don't think about the subordinates who follow you. Not everyone can travel through the heavens like the protagonist. They are limited by the world and only think about power and wealth. You have been the king of the southwest for so many years and finally founded the country, but did you give your subordinates official titles? If this is not the case, it will be okay in a short time. People's hearts will change as time goes by. And you said at the beginning that you would change the fate of the Song Dynasty. However, the Southwest King stayed there for more than ten years and finally did not want to be the emperor. At that time, the countries that did not occupy the Central Plains were small countries with few people. Even if they were strong, they would be looked down upon. 2. The writing style needs to be improved. The narrative technique is wordy and the writing is not concise and clear enough.

The Dragon Boat Festival is here, are there any book friends here to take a look?

It feels a bit confusing to wear it back and forth.

After reading the first one, the author spent a lot of time describing the strength of the protagonist. The pretentious scenes were obviously very wasteful. It was really childish. After reading the comment section, he said that the decades of life experience and decades of being in a high position after time travel are unexpected. Goodbye

When writing about martial arts, it is best not to write about time-travel and Marvel. The martial arts-type time-travel is okay, because I think time-travel will be more powerful in the later stages, not worse than Marvel and the like. However, the system was not clear at the beginning, and it felt awkward to travel randomly.

This writing style, you write a composition? You don't even write essays like this anymore, you just write a primary school diary. Improve your writing style. This is the foundation of a good book.

Why does it feel like reading a running article?

Come on, I really like it💪

King of the Southwest, I'm so laughable! ! ! The author of this throne, Southwest, can you search Baidu to find out how the ancient princes were canonized! ! Putting aside the title of King of the Southwest, which has no allusion or connotation, the most ridiculous thing is that the two-character king of the county is actually the two-character title.

***The worst Chinese martial arts novel I have ever read,