The Root of American Comics

The first hundred chapters were great to read, the setting is interesting, the writing is not bad, the content is good and substantial, and there are no particularly poisonous points. It doesn't work when I get to the chapters on the shelf. It's a mess, it's uncomfortable to read, and it feels very confusing. It's not that the author's description of the characters is not good, but that you don't grasp it well enough. It makes people feel that this book has four or five protagonists, or no protagonist at all. It feels very confusing.

I just want to swim silently like a salted fish, the author keeps updating, old rules, live broadcast jj🙂

Come on, author, the writing is pretty good. It would be great if there were more chapters every day.

I fully understand the Marvel Cinematic Universe and have read a few comics. I like this book very much and I wrote my own setting. I feel it is more thoughtful and interesting than most Marvel fans. Nowadays, the Marvel fandoms that start from the same starting point look like eating fat, greasy and greasy. Finally, a different one appears. I saw someone saying that the author's book offended both those who like Xingyue and those who like Marvel. I haven't seen Xingyue, so I think it's from Marvel, right? I seem to be represented again... Anyone who likes this book, please sign up? I found that as long as I don't speak out, I will always be represented…

Come on, author, don't pay attention to those who talk nonsense. If my reading level is not good enough, I blame others for writing it too complicated. I am also drunk. This book ranks first among the Marvel fics I have read, because this book truly breaks away from the routine of pretending to be a face-slap. Even if other books say that Xianyuliu is not a show-off, it is actually still a show-off, but the status of the protagonist in this book is too high. Whose face? The protagonist really made me feel what it means to be unkind and treat all things as stupid dogs. Regardless of whether they are decent or villains, they are all the protagonist's pawns and the driving force to promote changes in the general trend. Awesome! Ouch. The pleasure of reading other novels comes from pretending to be slapped in the face, but the pleasure of this novel is the pleasure of cultivation, which is probably what it means.

Every author's work is their child. No matter how ugly it is, it is still their own hard work. Not all authors' works can be praised as gods, and not all authors have good writing skills. Of course, I do not deny that there are such excellent authors, but they are a small group of people after all. I hope that everyone will not use the standards of this small group of authors to hold most ordinary authors. The coding process of each author is not easy. I hope everyone can be kind and bring peace and tranquility to the Internet literary circle. Thank you!

Man on the Moon➕Marvel fan, I didn't plan to watch it at first, but the comments were so interesting that I decided to check it out. 3 Days to watch every day to see the latest. Personally, I feel that the first forty or fifty chapters are a bit confusing. After all, I just started to introduce the background, and it is still miscellaneous. In addition, this is quite unfriendly to those who don't watch anime, don't watch Marvel, don't play games, and elementary school students. After all, they don't know anything and can't understand anything. And then this setting is quite interesting. This kind of behind-the-scenes stuff is the first time I have seen it in the second dimension of Marvel➕. Although the father class appeared after half a day, the combat power is still stable now, and the pace is so fast without collapse. It seems that the author really wrote the text after finishing the outline (I really want to diss some authors, start with the outline, write the novel while writing the outline, and then enter the palace after chasing) In addition, many people said that I think it's okay, and I didn't see any random nonsense. Basically every chapter has a main plot, but the protagonist has been barely seen recently. Although he is the person behind the scenes, the Shadow Mage (let's call it this) appears too little. Finally, the update is so slow. I know you are a student and I can understand it, but have you agreed to fill in those twenty chapters this month? Why am I suddenly suffering from impotence after just two days of replacement? ←_←, Are you okay? At the end, "Bull Crash! Spartan Kick! I am the invincible assassin Black Widow!" Very much like our assassin.

I looked through the post today and found that some readers thought the author's writing was messy. In fact, this is not chaos, but the author is using his own way to rely on the Marvel Universe, adding various anime characters or mythological figures from around the world to tell a brand new story. Since the world view is relatively grand, necessary explanations are needed in the first ten chapters. At the same time, the author may not be able to control the grand world view too easily, so the early novels feel a bit confusing, but as I read later, it does get better and better. I think this book is a slow-burning novel, not one of those novice novels. You need to be patient and watch slowly. In short, thank you to the author! I'm optimistic about you! 😁

To be honest, falsifying history like pig's feet can deceive ordinary people and even countries, but both Asgard and Kamathaj can easily expose this lie. Although the deaths of Ancient One and Odin are inevitable, the mysterious side of Marvel is not limited to these two people. Even regardless of Asgard in the distance, the mysterious side native to the earth: the magicians of Kama Taj, the practitioners of Kunlun, the Japanese Hand and the rival Innocence Society have existed for thousands of years (including people who have lived for hundreds of years), as well as the superheroes and villains involved. When encountering these original mysterious aspects of Marvel, I am looking forward to how the author will deal with them.

A simple and crude, but effective approach, the root setting is placed above Marvel's local magic, and even the local mages are brainwashed. Naturally, no one tried to expose the "mystery" as an outsider. Waiting for updates.

From the perspective of this book, the writing is very good, the writing style and characterization are good, and the plot also feels like a lot of effort has been put into it. But there is a problem. I have read about fifty chapters, and I don't know the situation after it was released. After reading these fifty chapters, I feel that this book has a bottleneck. How should I put it, although the plot is imaginative and rich in content, it always gives me a feeling that it is too bland and lacks a sense of substitution. Although it is not very strong, it is easy to gradually lose readers. Of course, there are still some true fans 😁

Possible downfall: Kantan and the mysterious power the protagonist displays over others The best way to hide is not to turn yourself into an extraordinary person and blend in among them, but to be an ordinary person who does not understand the mystery, or an extraordinary person with inheritance. You could describe the protagonist as a god or reincarnation of a powerful person, or as a child who is curious about mysteries. Moreover, Konstantin must either find another person to give him the inheritance of hell, or let him become Constantine.

In fact, reading online texts is a relaxing and pleasant thing. It is fate that everyone can get together to read a book. I have always believed that the growth of an online novel is never the effort of the author alone, but also the efforts of many readers. The author will seriously consider every valuable and sincere suggestion put forward by the reader, and carefully consider the plot that needs to be modified in order to improve the plot content and give readers a better reading experience. But as far as this book is concerned, there is a lot of discord among the opinions, and it is full of vitriol and forbidding. The author's writing motivation comes from every encouragement and sincere suggestions from readers, which allow the author to continue writing and the work to continue to grow. Of course, everyone has different preferences. You may not like this book, but please be merciful. Please do not post those disgusting and uncomfortable words. You can delete this book if you don't like it. There is no need to leave your dirty words. I sincerely hope you all have a pleasant reading experience

After thinking about it, the seven heroic spirits clearly know that the ranks include Andersen of the C rank, Itachi of the killing rank, and Kikyo of the mad rank. Based on the projection of the Noble Phantasm, Shining speculates that it is the bow rank. There are currently no duplicate ranks. It is speculated that the remaining heroic spirits should be in the third level of sword, spear, and cavalry. Then the problem arises. Kaito does not seem to be suitable for these three levels. Kaito should be at Killer level and C level (Magician under the Moonlight), and Archer level can be said to be passable. And according to the original setting, it seems that Kaito has never made a mistake, which means that if it is Kaito, his detection skills should not be blocked unless he himself pretends to be blocked 😏. Judging from the fact that Kaito's skills are blocked, he may not be the real Kaito. So who in the world of Conan might be disguised as Kaito? Sister Bei, Kaito's mom, Kudo's mom and Kudo Shinichi. The first three bosses can pretend to be too many people, and they probably can't pretend to be Kaito, so the truth is - Kudo Shinichi, it's you! 😃😃 If it is Kudo, there is no problem with class riding (after all, he can even fly a plane 😃). As a detective, it is normal to have detection skills, and it is normal to have the ability to steal things (the clues Conan finds are all hidden first 😏). He even has the skills to hide his real name. Xiaolan still doesn't know his true identity, and maybe he has the ability to grow bigger and smaller.

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The literary youth is not young enough, the light novel is not light, the pretentiousness is not enough, the sharpness is not thorough, and the talkativeness is not like a magician. What is this book about?

I originally thought it would be a sacred book, but it ended up being discontinued.

I heard that women's clothing balls can capture the author?

Kantan is a failure, I feel like the main character is totally Kantan's nanny. If it weren't for the fact that his friend was the protagonist, he would have been killed long ago.

Wow, this is the most awesome of the many Marvel-themed novels I have read. I hope the author gets better and better as he writes his own scripts, even arranges the villain scripts, creates history, and gives his own characters independent souls. It's the ultimate behind-the-scenes talent. It's awesome.

One look at the introduction and you will know that this book is rubbish and will not be popular.

Since it has been updated, update it steadily. Don't update it once a week or even every two weeks like in the first half of the year.

I quite like the setting, but it always feels a bit confusing. Take Chapter 7 for example, I couldn't understand what the theme of that chapter is at all.

It depends on the author's ability. It connects so many backgrounds and characters from different works. How can they be perfectly integrated in the end? If the author is not good at it, it will get worse and worse. If it can be perfectly integrated, then the scene will be beautiful.

This book is really good... It's just that I abandoned it (it's still on the bookshelf). It looks amazing as a whole, but I can't understand it (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)

I just found this book. Has the author updated it yet?

With this update frequency, I'm afraid it will be updated every week 😂, I'm already ready to watch this as a new show 😂😂😂

It's so messy and inexplicable

Is there Shennong, the Holy Mother of this book? Do you like to be a chivalrous person and mind your own business? Is there any kind of blunt pretense and slap in the face?

I really liked this setting, but it ended like this. Not enough