Be an Elf Trainer in a Parallel World

After looking at dozens of pictures, I really can't stand it anymore. Not to mention the freezing light and the 100,000 volts you gave to Bibi Bird. What do you want to do by giving Menas the entire hard vortex water blade? 🤔 You also want to fix the Rasengan. Do you want to give your Bibi Bird wings and the entire Raikiri? Who would dare to write a Pokémon fan with a real-life Pokémon background? The relationship between the characters and the background are not explained clearly at the beginning. As a result, when I saw the school trip, I didn't even know what everyone was doing. I had to rely on dialogue to know who was the teacher and who was the classmate. The plot of a sister is even more vicious. I have met my sister and classmates for a few days. At least on the surface, the classmate is very good to the protagonist.

Up to Chapter 126, 31 of the 46 VIP chapters mainly describe supporting characters, and half of the remaining 15 chapters are water. The poisonous point is that the supporting character is named Zhou Nan, Zhou Jia, Zhou jumps around and jumps out, which is too confusing and affects reading. The protagonist of the elf novel is the protagonist's elf. Why did the supporting character Zhou Nan be desperately written? After entering the V, Chapter 46 gave at least 20 chapters and more scenes than the protagonist. It can be said that deleting Zhou Nan's scenes will improve the smoothness of the reading experience. Evaluation: Read a novel that skips from one chapter to ten chapters.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has a neurotic personality, and sometimes she is a virgin and sometimes she is a pervert! I don't know what I want to express! 😓

The book is good and has been received! Come on! You can collect it and keep fat

After watching a few of them, I just couldn't stand it anymore. Everyone has their own ideal sister, but I think the main character is too boring. Who has no temper? They've all done this to you. It continues like this

The new book was said to be discontinued, so I came to read this one, but I couldn't stand the second chapter. Can't I have a normal sister? It sounds like a cute sister with a vicious tongue, but in fact, she is just a person who uses the name of a sister to insult her brother. (It's not just you, the author.) I don't know why everyone likes this kind of character. Don't you find it disgusting? Don't people who don't have a sister have such a scumbag in their fantasies? Let's go. I'd better delete this one. Keep your new book first and read it when you remember it.

I have only read dozens of chapters and would like to give my suggestions to the author. First of all, the portrayal of this sister is very unpleasant. The problem is that the protagonist licks her like a licking dog. When I saw that I wanted to give my sister the Chou Chou Fish with the golden qualification, I really wanted to delete the book. After it is announced that Chou Chou can evolve into Menas, wouldn't it be nice to replace the Chou Chou Fish with the Yusanjia with the same qualifications or a slightly inferior quasi-god? Secondly, there are skills. The protagonist's elf upgrades and evolves without understanding the skills. It is very confusing, especially when the Ugly Fish evolves into Menas and only learns one water wave. It seems that in the setting, the Ugly Fish, Carp King, Cowardly Worm, and Burning Worm can understand many skills immediately after evolution. Then the cheat cheat is a bit too big, the skill points come too fast, the mission system has no sense of existence, and the skills outside the elf world are very cheap and very abnormal. It is recommended to increase the price as mentioned in the book review, and you can only learn skills that are very suitable for you.

The protagonist went back in time and had no relationship with his sister. He just kneeled down and licked her. If he wasn't a lolicon, he was just greedy for her body! Despicable!

I still don't understand what the author thinks. I've read more than a dozen chapters. This is the most disgusting book I've ever read about starter pets. If you don't like it, don't write about unicorns. A person who says he loves Pokémon has no interaction, no nurturing, no training, no contact with Pokémon after he gets the starter Pokémon. Then the unicorn worm evolved due to malnutrition, and then said it was okay, I have a golden finger, I really accepted it, just because the protagonist cultivated it like this, the following content must be the Long Aotian type, that is, don't worry about anything, just lie down casually and you will be invincible. No wonder no one has read this book

I have photos of the author wearing cross-dressing in high school! ! Anyone who is interested, please come and ask me! ! One Thousand Floors Photo (ಡωಡ)

In fact, it's okay not to have a female protagonist. What kind of girlfriend do you want when you have an elf? !

I originally wanted to read it, but the comments stopped me, and why did you take up the spot in my daily guide?

After reading more than 400 chapters, I felt that the protagonist was inexplicable. The author wanted to express the protagonist's mentality as an ordinary person. Has it changed after more than 400 chapters? Instead of seeking a championship, how about exploring the world? There is just no goal. Also, the author, did you write whatever you wanted and didn't write it down? Earlier, it was said that the protagonist exchanged Kati Goudan and Ibrahimovic, but later he only had Ibrahimovic, and wanted to find Junsha to exchange for one. The big milk jug I had agreed with the teacher was nowhere to be seen behind. The most important point is, author, do you have no sense of time? I won't tell you how long the trip will last after the senior year of high school (it's almost March). The College Cup is also funny. The author, can the protagonist participate even after finishing his senior year of high school? After that, it's time to travel and hit the gym. What about college? Eaten by you? You also need to have your own set of logic when writing a book! Or are you studying Doraemon or Conan? Say no more, give up the trap.

Everything is fine. It's the protagonist who spends all day thinking about spring, the second grade of middle school

What the hell, if you are not strong enough, you always want to show off. Even if you improve your strength, you still want to show off better and flirt with girls. Can you be a bit promising? Please stop licking like this and stop writing randomly. 😅

It is recommended that authors write less about female characters if they are not good at writing them. It is really poisonous if they are not good at writing. Many authors have been persuaded to quit their books because of female characters such as heroines or sisters. Isn't it good for the male protagonist to be a lone ranger and work hard? I suggest the author read the Dark Rises of Elves and Pokemon Garden Tree, which are elf novels without female protagonists.

It looks so embarrassing, the author is enjoying himself alone

I suggest the author write a new book. My sister really persuaded too many people to quit in the previous part. The other parts are pretty good. My sister's part persuaded at least 80% of the people to quit. It's really disgusting.

Water, water, water is terrible. The Charmander conquered in Chapter 300 did not evolve until more than 800 chapters. When it comes to water, I would like to call you the strongest 🙂🙂

I have been playing in Yuanqi, but after reading this book, I installed Qidian when I was extremely angry, just to see what the comments were. Now I feel relieved after seeing these comments, thank you everyone 🙂

1. Emotional description is insufficient, 2. The bond with the elves is not reflected, 3. Author, do you have no sister?😏

After reading dozens of chapters, I don't feel anything at all. It's all nonsense. Bibi Bird's skills are 100,000 volts, jet flames, and freezing light. Do you think it's a game? Why didn't the Real World Alliance capture your Bibi Bird and slice it up? Can't Menas learn Freezing Ray???

After reading five chapters, I wonder what the author wrote first? It feels like the whole pig's trotters are just soy sauce. On the contrary, the fat man misses the protagonist more. Also, it's only been five chapters and there's no interaction between the protagonist and the elves at all.