The Miaoshou Doctor Concubine and the Cold-Faced Prince

Overall, the writing is fairly smooth. It is necessary to refine the wording, paragraph division, and punctuation. There are not too many typos. Besides, you must read it more by yourself. Some incorrect sentences in some places may affect the reading experience. Character The heroine is reborn after death and has a golden finger in medical skills, but the portrayal of her personality is a bit weak. The male protagonist appears less, so I won't mention it for now Other characters are also not distinct and really cannot catch the eye. Plot ... From cold to hot with the male protagonist, to sleeping together and flying together, at the same time stepping on the vicious female supporting role and crushing all enemies? This is my guess, because I think the routines of this kind of writing are similar... I apologize if I guessed wrong. In the first five chapters, it's peaceful! ! The story is about looking at the mountains and not liking the plains. If it doesn't require a lot of setting and foreshadowing, it would be better to create more conflicts. For example, the first five chapters can be re-expanded: On the big day, the heroine suddenly fainted and fell unconscious - exaggerating the joy and then suddenly turning to tragedy, focusing on describing the grief of the heroine's family. At the same time, the modern heroine encounters a crisis, and her life hangs by a thread - it is enough that her life hangs by a thread, and the scene moves to ancient times. The heroine of the ancient game, whose life was also hanging by a thread, turned around and learned of the existence of the miracle doctor, so she rushed to seek medical treatment. Don't despair when seeking medical treatment. When in despair, turn to hope. At the same time, the heroine of the modern scene takes her last breath and ends. Then just focus on taking the ancient route. Another example is the scene where the male and female protagonists meet for the first time. The form of secret observation is too cliche. It is better to create more conflicts. For example, here at the palace banquet, there are some ups and downs that are better and more outstanding. That's all for now... It's a bit much, don't mind

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