Rebirth: Border Survival Record

Stupid or not, you can put as many good things as you have space for, so why do you have to win back a man's heart? Is it too far-fetched?

The heroine of this article is more silly, sweet, and mad than a virgin, which leads to pitfalls in subsequent chapters and cliched bloody plots. Also, too much fantasy and space upgrades are failures, making a good article a bit boring, so let's just do it.

I feel more and more that Li Yunbao is stupid!

The subject matter of the article is pretty good, written in a running account style. Here is a summary of several problems found so far in this article. ①The heroine is really stupid, a complete idiot. ② The crime of treason plus the original body's retaliation has no reputation at all. The time-traveling heroine is even more feudal than the original body, a pure ancient. The exile was originally the best time to get rid of the second wife. The male protagonist ignored the second wife, but the female protagonist had to talk about her filial piety and reputation to the uncle and aunt of the second wife. It can only be said that whatever happens next, the female protagonist deserves it. ③The road to exile is written in a childish way, with banquets, shopping, etc. The exile is not difficult at all, but the number of words is quite watery. ④If it weren't for the male protagonist, the female protagonist's golden finger would have been exposed in the early stages of her exile. The male protagonist reminded her again and again, but the female protagonist never changed her mind. ⑤The story is anecdotal. It seems like a long time has passed, and the male and female protagonists have experienced a lot, but the readers have no impression and cannot read it. I really doubt how the heroine managed to buy a car in modern times without relying on her parents. The main reason is that the heroine's IQ is not up to par. I can tolerate the cruelty of the heroine, but I cannot tolerate the mental retardation of the protagonist.

Are you trying to laugh me to death by asking a proficient embroiderer to do cross stitch? And that poem about waiting for my hair to reach my waist doesn't make any sense. What the hell did people who were proficient in writing in ancient times say?

Haha, I couldn't stand it. The writing wasn't good enough. I read a few chapters and gave up.

To be honest, this book is not very well written. First of all, the heroine did not make good use of the powerful cheating device of space. This can be seen in many plots. For example, when the heroine took her two children to find the hero, she could often put the children in the space without making the children suffer. She seemed to have forgotten this matter and took the children on adventures, euphemistically speaking, for fear of exposing the space. In fact, many times you can find a way to control it. The heroine is actually not smart. Another example is the rebellion in the end. Since the heroine has room to cheat, she can kill him in many cases and is threatened stupidly. Many plots are really not well written. Check it out in Shuhuang.

Tell the truth! This book is not very well written!

I thought I had never read it, but after reading a few chapters, I realized that the title of the book had been changed 😒. I like the subject matter, but it is a common problem in farming books. After clinging to the powerful and embarking on the road to Qingyun, the content becomes cliché and ends in an anticlimax.

I really can't stand it, the heroine might as well not have been time-traveled

I just said last night that Li Yunbao was getting stupider and stupider. I didn't expect that he was so stupid today. He didn't want a safe way to save the child, but wanted to exchange for the child's safety. Is this possible? That person is an insidious person. I can believe his words. If he is caught, he deserves it. He is stupid.

If Li Yunbao simply kills He Shengli, everything will be fine. He is afraid of harming the people in the city. The lives of the army outside the city are not human lives. Those who died directly because of her. What does the author think?

What is QQ Farm Space? When I heard the name, I almost gave up the article. It's very dramatic.

After reading the first six chapters, I found that the author had many long and awkward sentences, and many sentences were interrupted where they should be broken, which was very uncomfortable to read. I just want to ask everyone, does the author still like to write so many long sentences?

Why do so many people like to be reborn as military wives? I heard that soldiers are always busy and have all kinds of dangerous tasks, so they accidentally become widows?

4 Recommendation votes, I like it.

4 Recommendation votes, I like it.

4 Recommendation votes, I like it.

Isn't it tiring to read such a long and dense introduction?

To be honest, the plot is okay, but the writing is a bit poor.

In fact, many of the author's arrangements are full of loopholes, and maybe the author forgot some because he wrote too much, right? The school mentioned earlier was Xingxing Academy, and the year after that it became Xingnan Academy. Of course, it can be ignored. I just felt that the heroine became more and more stupid in the later period. In fact, just kill the sixth prince! It's not good to let so many people die to build up hatred for him. Just say that he is using Xing'er for the throne. Basically, everyone will hate him. There is no need to kill Xing'er and her son. It doesn't matter if the heroine dies, after all, there is still the underworld. There is also the problem that the author did not explain the last space, maybe he wanted to leave some thoughts for the readers! All in all, the article is good! Nice! But there are still shortcomings. In fact, it would be perfect if the author arranged for the male protagonist to be reborn as the good man Li Yunbao, so that the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists would be more exciting! Also remind the author of a big bug! In the early stage, the author clearly stated in the memory of the male protagonist that his son Shen Chengan died of illness after being exiled for 2 years! Later, he said that in order to save Li Yunbao, he handed over all the family arrangements to his son Shen Chengan, and then took his wife to find a way. Can his son be resurrected? But it's not important. What's important is that it's over and it looks good!