Dazzle the Whole World

Not lonely, already collected, let's warm each other

I still don't know what secret ability to arrange for Amy! Depressed. . .

From the introduction, it seems that I want to write a funny article. It is easy to be funny in a story, but it is difficult to tell a story in a funny way. Wish you progress! After reading the beginning, the author's vocabulary accumulation and descriptive ability are sufficient. With some adjustments, it is not difficult to sign the contract. What is lacking is measurement! That is, I don't know where to write, where not to write, and how much to write. This is a problem faced by most authors. Personally, I only watched the beginning, and it felt like I was attacking in all directions. The tightness and coherence of the story need to be improved. It's not easy to write so many words, come on!

Drag it, just drag it hard 🤭 Come on