There Is a Tree of Life in the Palm of My Hand

Standalone has always been fun. It's always fun to play alone

After looking at it, I think it's okay!

Build an opinion building. There are many logical errors, and I hope everyone will point them out. Or any suggestions, I can also accept the poisonous tongue. After all, people grow up with criticism. . Just no one spoke. I feel bad

Stallion story? If so, I'll leave

I looked at the character list and then looked at the word count, and I found that the female protagonist appeared in just 310,000 words. It feels completely unacceptable. Having a female protagonist too early is a burden. And if the heroine is too strong, it will hurt her self-esteem. Therefore, it is best for one or more female protagonists to appear in the middle and later stages. After all, it is better to get a few confidantes in the early stage.

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The timeline is not obvious, the speed is too fast, and it is too outrageous. In less than two days, even the instructors and some ability classes have come out. Also, the man in white appears too suddenly, and it feels like it is imposed. It is best to slowly turn from the dark side to the light. There are still many places to complain. The country is a country, why is it called a country? Because there is a government, how can it be managed? Strength, force. It is impossible to invest a lot of human resources immediately after recovery. The country will first ensure its own strength before investing slowly. Anyway, no matter how fast it is, it cannot be so fast. Unless there are superpowers already, it will become meaningless. Lingfu novels have this routine, the best is the best. Before Lingfu, there was no extraordinary person on the earth, or there is no extraordinary person anymore. That is, the protagonist and other people must be put on the same starting line, and then the protagonist drives a bicycle equipped with an electric motor, and nothing else. I've only read a few chapters, but haven't read the rest. I can only give you so many suggestions. The words may be ugly, but I typed them for half a minute ~ Don't criticize, thank you.

Treasures, skills, techniques, magical powers, etc. All grow from... Trees? ? ? ?

Author, if you don't recommend anything, it's very dangerous to list it on the shelves.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

An eight-year-old bookworm comes to try out the author's proficiency

I feel like the author was confused by what he wrote. Many places are repeated. Sometimes there are a lot of mistakes in grammar, which makes my head hurt just looking at it.

This book will definitely make me happy when I first start reading novels, but now I feel disgusted when I read it.

Why did it suddenly come back and be finished?

I didn't want to read it after reading Chapter 5. The protagonist felt a bit too kind.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~