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This case doesn't appeal to me, I'll wait for the next one 😅

The second case is to investigate his own murder before his rebirth? Then he accidentally met his ex-girlfriend who had sex with him at the bar? Then he hugged his ex-girlfriend domineeringly and pretended to be cool? I didn't watch it carefully. Is this the plot?

😭 Too few, not enough to read, please beg the author to update

It's 2020, why is there still that routine where the waiters in luxury stores first ignore you and then buy a few clothes and then everyone is shocked?

There is no such thing as a diamond and a porcelain job. Mystery novels are very rigorous and you won't know who the murderer is until the last moment. The villain in the supporting role cannot always be smart and attack. Isn't it interesting that you already know who the murderer is after watching the first case, but the protagonist still has to reason for a long time? The police have been using words and deeds to reduce IQ. I really can't stand it anymore.

There are 3 shortcomings, Firstly, in crime-solving novels, the direction of the case will be completely different if one detail is different, such as the hook that was sawed off at the beginning. If it could be seen from the beginning that there was a problem with the hook, the case would have been over long ago. However, the author simply covered it with paint for convenience, which is a huge loophole. Either it was written flawlessly at the beginning, or it was changed after the reader raised it. There is no point in holding on, and there will be new readers later. Secondly, the protagonist seems a bit tired now. Everything is proposed by others, and you can't even think of smearing poison on the cup? Don't rely on others for everything. Third, the atmosphere of other film and television works is too strong. You should change the title of the volume to a different style. The serial case of Niu Ma Villa. I immediately thought of the Conan serial case of a mountain village that I had seen before, and the previous Conan movie version of the Internet of Things murder case. You have to write it, okay Most of them write about foreign literary works (other than Conan), which I guess many people have not read (I only watched Sherlock Holmes anyway). It is best not to write about films that have been adapted into movies, because many people may not have read the relevant novels, but most people may have seen the film and television works. Or you can write about unresolved, mysterious and difficult cases that have happened in real life, and I guess many people have never seen them. Finally, I wish the author's books will get better and better!

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In a small place, the incidence rate of cases is so high, and it was promulgated just after completing the previous task. How could it be such a coincidence! It would be more like saying that a major case from a few months or a few years ago had not been solved! Besides, he's not the Shinigami elementary school student from Japanese comics! If the author wants to create a Chinese "Conan", just pretend I didn't say it. Moreover, the case structure is too small and the network of relationships is too narrow. An ordinary person in society can have a large network of relationships, let alone Tang Yiyuan in the second case? It is said that no book is written without coincidence, but is it too coincidental to give some direct evidence? The setting of "native" Jiang Yifan is very awkward. The detective industry can be said to be completely hateful. Even if you are an unknown little detective, even in the novel, it is impossible not to have the slightest conflict with others, such as Tang Yiyuan. This is equivalent to an enemy. If you say there is no enemy, it is better to say that you don't know if there is one. I really don't understand the emotional line of the work. It's not that I can't understand it. The situation in the book is not absent in real society. I just feel that revenge is something everyone has. After all, you and I are commoners, not saints. But the second person decides the reward based on the degree of revenge. This is a bit poisonous... And the characters in the chat group. Setting, even if KIKO was interested in the case at the beginning, even if she only had this social platform, she would not be able to help the protagonist right away; the setting of the character is a bit ruinous. Generally, detectives like them think a lot. After all, the error tolerance rate given to them is almost zero. Just like in the second case, the author did not notice this. As far as the updated chapters are concerned, it gives me the feeling that several cases are pieced together because of group tasks. There is no main line and not much connection. Of course, there are few chapters and it is difficult to reveal the main line. ... ps: The above is just my personal opinion. Let's talk about it in the discussion. Some of it is also relatively intuitive. I hope it will be better in the future. The most important thing is not to be a eunuch! After all, the author wrote according to his own ideas. Since he put in the sweat, why not try his best to do better. Mo Gang......

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After discovering this book, I will try my best to climb up and "come on"

If you haven't updated it for too long, it will be removed from the shelves sooner or later. Qidian clears books very quickly.

However, there is a difference between breaking the chapter and writing a small climax. There is no sense of expectation, or you are giving the protagonist a seemingly useless ability, and then it is very crucial in its own time. Anyway, the reasoning upgrade you wrote does not feel changed at all, and the fighting skills feel very redundant.

This writing style, the plot of the case is too plain and has no sense of investigation.

There are many people who write this kind of novels, but not many are good at it. I hope to keep writing. I read the author's previous works and found that the number of words was a bit too small. I was a little worried about the issue of entering the palace, so I collected them first.

Um. . . The author practiced the evil-repelling sword manual

How about adding Shotaro, Philip (*/ω＼*)

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When I bought clothes in the mall, no one paid any attention to me. After I bought the clothes, the whole crowd was stunned. Then the sales girl was in a state of love, yo! That's all I have to say. .

The author has always written that the protagonist is called Lin Fan, and others call him Li Minghao. . . The protagonist has been reborn and still uses the name of his previous life? It's better that the person who was reborn at the beginning was also named Lin Fan.

Come on, author, I hope it will have a beginning and an end.