Peashooter in Douluo

Author, please update quickly. I'll give you all the tickets, (●—●)

Give me a copybook too. . . . . 🤓

Suggestion Forum If you have any suggestions, you can put them in this forum. If you want to criticize the author, you can do it. I am a new author, so my writing style may not be very good, but I will work hard to improve. Your suggestions are very important to me.

Why write in the first person? . . It's extremely poisonous, you know?

Your fake fans came to report (ಡωಡ)

Those who were drawn in by the name raised their hands.

It feels tiring to watch, and the sense of immersion is too bad. (Writing problem)

The first person view looks a bit uncomfortable

This is my first time seeing the Douluo story of Peashooter. It's quite interesting. It would be even better if it had some funny elements. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.

Update soon ah ah ah ah ah

One hair, pea shooter Three hairs, two shooters All blue, ice pea Cuckold, Gatling

I hope that some idiots and mindless dialogues can be removed. The protagonist's character traits are not obvious. Only the author can fill in the strength spontaneously, not the protagonist's self-improvement, and it will destroy the update! ! ! ! !

It's green, it's green, look at the collection of beasts coming in from the cover

First person flashed

It was quite creative, but why put the world view in Douluo! And the plot was not handled well, which is a pity,

I'll go and write it and it will become the first person, and you won't let me read it, bad review

Actually, I wanted to read this book. But I developed a habit. Before reading a book, I looked at what novels the author had written. I saw that few of the author's novels were actually completed, and they were all tens of thousands of words long. So it wasn't that I didn't want to read this novel, but that I didn't have the money to buy a razor blade.

I think investment should be done with caution, and investing after ten minutes of reading is a bit hasty...

It was okay at first, but later on it was probably like other Dou 2 fans, nothing interesting to watch.

Author. . , The Emperor's auspicious beast has been running for more than 10 chapters, and the Star Dou Forest has not exploded yet? Level 99 Dragon God Douluo can't see the soul beast transforming? I'm so stupid

This thing is not finished in one book.

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