I Don't Call Myself a Hero

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The title of this chapter is completely in the style of the ancient times. Who would dare to do this except the great gods nowadays? 😁 But I will give you 4 tickets.

At present, we see the two protagonists leaving Xiangsi Island and taking a boat to Qingyun Knight Island. The first few chapters are a bit discouraging, but the story gradually gets better and the plot begins to emerge. However, due to the short length, the main line of the story cannot be clearly seen yet. The following are some of my humble opinions for the author's reference. First of all, out of personal reading habits, I selfishly hope that the author can change the punctuation marks in the front. Wouldn't it be nice to have the same punctuation marks in the back? This is only a small problem, but it is also the most easily ignored. Secondly, the reaction descriptions of some characters in the first ten chapters or so seem a bit unnatural and unsmooth. I personally think this is a point of dissuasion, but this problem disappears in the later stages. Perhaps it's because the time span between the first chapter and the latest chapter is so large that the writing style has improved significantly. Therefore, I don't really need to point out where. The author only needs to re-revise the previous chapters from the current perspective. It would be great. Finally, and the most subjective point, maybe because I am not a martial arts fan personally, I always feel that some dialogues are awkward and seem to be pretentious, so I will leave them in this chapter, just take a look. I suggest the author check the first paragraph of the first chapter. There is a small clerical error... I won't mention the errors elsewhere, but because it is in the first paragraph of the first chapter, it is the first place that readers see, so... Personally, I think the most fascinating part of this book is the description of the moves. It successfully creates a sense of the picture, and even the sense of smell and hearing, as if I am actually involved in it. This is another part that I admire very much. Above.