One Sword Super Travel

The author is very good at portraying female characters. The image of Lin Xiuxiu is vividly sketched in just a few chapters. The young senior sister is also very three-dimensional in the interactive description (I am looking forward to the Shura field with several people) But the author is sometimes too young. Just like Dragon Clan 5, too many non-main plots make the story very unbalanced. The author's feelings Readers may not necessarily feel that To make people read, whether it is a cool story or not, the rhythm and logic must be mastered. As the background stories of some characters can be briefly described through dialogues, etc. If you really want to describe it in detail, just put it in the side story. Unless you can write a group drama in which all the threads are inseparably connected, it is better to exercise restraint.

I have finished reading the first volume. My personal feelings are that the first part is a bit toxic. Some plot settings and character settings are not particularly good. There are too many beautiful female characters. There are also some shortcomings and loopholes in the protagonist's growth path, but it is irrelevant. The plot is good but a bit sad. Some of the characters are also good. The writing is also good. The bottom of the first volume only starts slowly. I hope it will not be unfinished and eunuchs. I hope the quality is guaranteed and I will give you a recommendation vote.

To summarize for the author, the plot of this book is indeed difficult to attract at the beginning, mainly because it is too bland, but if you keep reading, it is still very good, especially the portrayal of characters. I think the most vivid one is the little senior sister. If there is a next book, I hope the author can learn from the lesson. Some plots are indeed boring, and I skipped some chapters. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

There are ideas but the writing power is difficult to control. Practice more and you will have a promising future.

To be honest, I just read this book today. I looked at the book reviews out of curiosity, and I don't know why some people said it was a harem novel that I couldn't understand. Then there are times when I look at it and feel that the previous chapter and the following chapter are not consistent, but it is indeed very good. I support the author greatly!!! ! Come on! ! ! !

This book is very good. I have always wanted to read the Xianxia version of Amber. This book gives me hope. Come on, author!

It only takes three or four days to update a chapter, which is too little. I hope the author will update more.

This book... Wasn't enjoyable enough. First, if the protagonist does not encounter an unexpected crisis, the plot will not be exciting enough. However, when encountering an unexpected crisis, the protagonist should easily solve it with secret hands (using methods that have been foreshadowed before but that the readers would not think of, the focus is to solve it with wit), rather than getting through it with a little injury. For example, what is the main character's reaction when he encounters a white spider? He didn't notice the spider getting trapped in advance, but he didn't jump decisively into the river and the air bag exploded. He relied on luck to save himself from suffocation. I'm most annoyed by the main character who relies on luck to get through. This is called a sadist. Secondly, first explain that there are a lot of good things in front of you, but when you get to the location, you find that the protagonist can't get any of them. I can understand that you want to maintain a balance of combat power and prevent the protagonist from becoming stronger too quickly, but the correct way should be to explain that there are three things in the front, two real and one fake, one for the protagonist and one for the heroine, and then the protagonist is done with it and leaves a bunch of big forces to fight for a fake thing. Both sides will be hurt. To put it simply, the protagonist gets all the benefits. No matter how strong the enemy is, they will be tricked by the protagonist, otherwise they will abuse the protagonist.

I just finished reading it in one breath. I have to say that what I wrote is a story and it speaks about people's hearts. The confusion of the first volume and the loneliness of the second volume spread out so richly that I almost suffocated. Especially the scene where Xueshu sits on the top of the mountain and sends away his parents and master. I, an old man running around, could not control his tear ducts while hiding in the bathroom So, for me, this is a good book. However, I don't know if the story of the little nun and Zhang San in the book hinted at Lin Xiuxiu's eventual darkening (after all, the author's logic so far is that the plot will return to the original story line after your efforts), which made me pay more attention to the character of Lin Xiuxiu, and found that there is really only one person in her world, Shang Ye, but Shang Ye has already changed. He only has sympathy and obligation for her, but no emotion or recognition. But when I was browsing the book review area, for such a woman who was likely to be tragic, someone could stand in Shang Ye's perspective and ask, "What else do you want from me?" All I can say is that I stay away from people who convert everything into profits and weigh them on the scales.

The title is a bit off For those of you who are passing by and haven't read it yet, please listen to me and say that this book is so exciting, don't give up. (Contains slight spoilers, mainly about the characters, obsessive-compulsive disorder is not included) The story of memories is really well written! From the very beginning, the struggles and growth of the little character Ye Ye feel like a clear spring, dull, but impressive. The memories narrated during the period not only advance the plot, but also enrich the characters. How should I put it, it makes people smile knowingly and make them think about why they didn't meet such interesting teammates when they played the game; At the end The story of the green tattoo on the face begins to attract attention (I don't know if it is in the paid chapter, you must read it if you can, Wall Crack recommends!) The story of the green tattoo foreshadows the thoughts between human beings and monsters, and leads to the story of the gentleman and his apprentice. As the plot progresses, it also leads to the young youthful passion of the apprentice, which is sour and makes people want to send a razor blade. I felt a pity when I saw it, oh! (Memory and reality intersect and influence each other here, nice!) I think it is a breaking point at the end, which is our mountain god, from ignorance to encounter, from growth to independence, from separation to loneliness, and then to new encounters, finding the goal and practicing it all the way, and finally good deeds will have good results. Wow, when I watched it, I made a big man burst into tears. I couldn't stop it. It's so beautiful. I want to send you a razor blade. It's so attractive. Personally, I feel that the mountain god and the apprentice are the most attractive to me at the moment. Of course, the other characters who appear are also flesh and blood and have independent souls, but they are still too young and their shining points are not big enough. I look forward to growing! The last thing is the frequency of the author's recent updates, which makes me a little panicked, but don't be a eunuch... (This month's monthly ticket is provided, the author sees it and adds it to see if he is still alive)

Emmmm, what do you say? The book is good and attractive, but the author's writing style has not yet reached the point of controlling the book One: The world view is complex and difficult to understand, and the readers are confused and confused. I should be considered a more careful reader, and the settings are also a bit confusing. I dare say that most people do not understand the author's settings Two: The character of the protagonist is not clear and has no outstanding features. Characteristics Three: The early plot is unpleasant, the prophet should be a refreshing point, but it is uncomfortable to watch, and the protagonist's gains are not reflected Four: Excessive sensationalism, this may be a point that the author likes and is very proud of, but I still have to advise you to restrain yourself. The author's writing style cannot control these stories, it looks a bit awkward, forced sensationalism, and is too long. . . Non-protagonist stories should be kept as short as possible. The monkey's story took nearly ten chapters, or is it in a paid volume? How many people will read it completely? I hope the author will practice more and make rapid progress in the future.

I just finished reading the part of the underground palace, and I would like to share my thoughts after reading it. First of all, I can't stand the fact that the protagonist chose Tianshi Dao. The author wrote about the protagonist's deep love for Taiyi, and there is also a protagonist who just joined Tianshi Dao and left for a trip three days ago. Damn, it's not like I'm in Cao Ying and my heart is in Hanma, but it's reasonable to choose a tool or something. Players are all like this. Secondly, we talk about the issue of spiritual practice. The author has talked about coping with the coming disaster countless times, and then what did he do for a long time? Download dungeons, some dungeons that are of no use at all. Author, take a look at how many copies you have downloaded. Have you seen any improvements? I was quite speechless. I dared to do something in front of Jindan and Nascent Soul in just a short period of Qi training. Isn't this seeking death? It's also just trying to survive. I had to download some messy copies. More than two hundred cultivation bases didn't move at all. The technique is still introductory. A protagonist like you can still cope with the coming disaster. It would be good if you don't get sprayed to death by the underworld master. The third one I have to talk about is the underground palace copy. I asked the protagonist what are you doing in the underground palace? Take the body of the Holy Lord? What did you use it for? Rape a corpse? Seize the body? Or a weapon refining? The players in my impression are very different. Who has never played the game? Have you ever seen someone download a copy that has no profit? Fortunately, I went to the underground palace and got a bunch of garbage. All I can say is that the planning is dead. I am skeptical about the protagonist's identity as a high-level player. If the author wants to say that players just like to cause trouble, have you ever seen any players who want to fight for a level 100 boss before even leaving the novice village? This is not a gift! Fourthly, regarding Long Shengyu, her heroine probably didn't run away. I just want to say to the author, don't pretend to be a reversal of the plot and do the job of licking dogs. Or the underground palace? Why does the protagonist go to the underground palace? Corpse, for whom was the body taken? Long Sheng Yu. If you like it, you like hemp. Why bother talking about coping with disasters? According to the original plot of the game, Long Shengyu should not be dead. So what is the protagonist doing in a hurry? It must be for favorability, coveting other people's bodies, and having the courage to fight against the Huangquanzong during the Qi training period for the sake of his body. I can only say that he is a ruthless person. Summary: Don't talk about dealing with disasters, it is the truth to cope with disasters and just level up. Don't talk about the plot, honestly admit that you are greedy for other people's body Don't do some unprofitable work, because no one will do it. This is especially obvious in games. Have you seen any activities that have no income, but players are working hard to earn gold? Are you crazy? Not bad at planning.

Well, good news, the author is still alive and can check out the readership. . . The author said that he is busy these days and will update in a few days. . .

Without further ado, let's get straight to the point. The title of this book is "One Sword Super Travel", four words, let us break it down and analyze it one by one. One: a moment Sword: sounds the same as "Jian" Super Game: From the content of this book, we know that Super Game means "transcendence from the game "Light of Hongmeng"", so we can also change the term Super Game - "Out of the Game" To sum up, it is not difficult for us to come to the conclusion: "One Sword Super Game" is just a false title, and the real title of this book is "Momentary Out of the Game" | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ

It's too shabby. After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist's cultivation has not improved at all. He is still wandering around. Moreover, everyone is unhappy with the protagonist. Is the protagonist a bear?

The author is at risk of becoming a eunuch...

I understand, as long as I'm not in prison, this book will keep me and the author outlived.

The protagonist, the Holy Mother, directly joins the Sword Sect and saves the girl with different eyes in order to inherit it. Isn't it good to practice in the sect? Wouldn't it be nice to turn to Xuanmen and start refining alchemy again?

To put it simply, the previous plot was very good but from the moment I met Liu Bai, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It almost relies on the constant appearance of female characters to drive the plot, which loses the rebirth flavor of the game. In addition, too much otaku style is also a big problem. It started out as a hardcore development, but the result was unsatisfactory.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I feel that the protagonist actually has no romantic feelings for the young senior sister. It is simply a feeling of admiration in the past. What I like is not this person but this person's spirit of daring to be the first. The two of them are Taoist couples, not lovers.

Can the author explain what happened?

I don't understand what the protagonist is going to do at all. In the world of cultivation where the jungle is strong and the strong preys on the weak, but my cultivation level is not high yet I always participate in the plot. After reading the first 50 chapters, I want to ask, does the protagonist gain anything? Since I came out to experience, I haven't seen any adventures

The sixteen-year-old bookworm came here uninvited. The last time I saw such an interesting book was because I had many masters. It's a pity that a book above this level is so deserted. Although I have seen that the author has recently begun to update as the occasion demands, the monthly recommendation ticket is still a one-stop service. I hope the author can continue writing.