Pear Blossom Promise

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, she moved a small bench and sat down. She brought her own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book~

The writing style is good, without the childish words of other new writers, and it is not inexplicably embarrassing. However, the writing style is not enough, and the plot is a bit confusing. I have practiced magical skills for more than ten years, and then I went to the capital and couldn't defeat the general. Then the general asked someone from the escort agency to chop him up. So, is the combat power of Wang Tiangang from the escort agency higher? Then when he was beaten inside, he said he was invincible, but he was hung up and beaten again. Please give me some advice. , The author moved the plot too quickly, the writing style is okay, but the writing style is not mature enough, the plot looks very watery, and it feels like hundreds of thousands of words have been simplified into a few thousand words. I suggest that the author write more carefully and enrich the content. The biggest problem of this book is that the writing style is not mature enough and the content is not substantial enough. (For example, if it is about the magic power or how powerful someone is, the author can add some things to describe it, instead of just saying, "No. 1 In the world" or something like that) The author can spend some time to conceive the content. Come on.

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It's a very ancient martial arts work, thank you very much.

It's beautiful, I like the description of the scenes. Nowadays, there are always system stories and time travel stories. I am still very happy to see the martial arts genre. Collect it and watch slowly. But there are no recommendation votes today 😄 Come on! !

Come on 😁😁😁,

I've been watching it for more than a week. It's good. Give me a tip to support it 😁