Shuo Ming

Although Lao Bai's previous works were not well written, they were concise and lively without being abusive. Now that I have perfected my writing skills, I have pursuits, and I have begun to abuse my master. In my opinion, I'm afraid I can't find my niche.

In fact, we can follow the example of establishing the Five Elements Banner of Gold, Wood, Water, Fire, and Earth, with twelve divisions of A, B, C, and D, totaling 60 troops and horses, and actively train soldiers and horses like the Mongolian cavalry to learn from the Eight Banners and give different statuses, but it does not necessarily mean that the father will die and the son will succeed. You can raise underage children and the elderly and let the children grow up. After the year, you can choose whether to join the army, and set up fixed assessments, and all the people in Shanxi and Shaanxi will be classified as military households, as the main force and elites to conquer the world. After the conquest, military households will learn to garrison the Eight Banners and move to conquer the world, and try to make military households as wealthy as between homesteaders and small landowners, while the six The ten tribes became small to medium landowners, and new subjects were ordered not to go to school for two generations, but civil and military households could intermarry with each other, while the sixty tribes of military households implemented compulsory education, and did not recognize the land annexation of the previous dynasty. This could completely eliminate the influence of the Jiangnan gentry. The resurgence and posthumous reputation slander made the main class of the new dynasty the beneficiaries of the new dynasty and could win the hearts of the people. After two generations, the gentry represented by the army could expand. This is equivalent to establishing a Chinese version of the Juncker landlord class, which is of great benefit to expansion. I hope the author will adopt the advantages and delete the disadvantages.

I haven't finished my last book yet, so I'm starting a new one. I kept your last book for five months just so you could come back and continue writing it. You're so damn cool, give me a trick to start a new book.

I have read many Ming Dynasty novels written by this author before. They are very good. I have not supported them yet. I will support them now.

Lao Bai, you have opened a new book again. . . In fact, I still want you to update "Zhu Ming". I really like this book 😆

This time it's considered a stinker. I think you won't write online novels in the future. You've already exhausted the patience of book friends.

The beginning was okay, but when his father died, it collapsed. Die for the sake of death, without considering rationality at all. Hundreds of households in a village are eager to use your skinned and bone-pulling enemies to deal with you, but in the end they trust you just because they killed the Boma thieves together. The protagonist's father is surrounded by a bunch of veterans, a group that has been hanging out outside the Great Wall for decades. Even you, a bastard, think it's inappropriate to let them into the camp. And looking at the posture of the raid, the opponent has already coordinated internally. Imagine this scene. Two groups hate each other. One of them sneaks into the camp of the other group with the idea of ​​killing all the opponents. It is in a zone where no one cares, and there are enemies outside. Can you try it and see if you can do it? I let you escape, and I didn't want to rush back to the village to find my brothers to take action in advance. Then I insisted on going back to see how his father cut the body into five pieces. After the division, he was still thinking calmly about how to finish the meal. Aren't you afraid that this white man will go back and slaughter your small group? Isn't he afraid of your revenge? And your revenge is inevitable. Why don't you go ahead and kill all these half-hearted guys and get it done, instead of waiting for you to go find him and cause trouble? You have to know that human behavior comes from purpose, and purpose comes from motivation, and motivation comes from inner emotional needs. A series of plots starting from when his father was raided are unreasonable. Rather than being the author's deduction based on the characters' personalities, it is better to say that this is the script in the author's mind. Writing a book is actually about expressing oneself, and authors are all exhibitionists to some extent. The author of this book writes similar plots again and again, which makes me feel that the author has some kind of emotional disorder in his heart.

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I have read several of the author's novels, and they are brilliant at the beginning, dull in the middle, and dull in the later stages. It always ends in an anticlimax, and the more you write, the worse it gets. How can such a style last?

I don't quite understand. It took more than thirty chapters to fully develop the character, but all of it was sacrificed? Also, the line about the Mongolian girl is gone, so why write it? It's better to just start with the sentence "Qidian Orphanage, Parents Sacrifice to Heaven"

Forced insemination, extremely poisonous. . . It is recommended to skip the first fifty chapters and read it. I guess the author will not be able to write it for long, so he will either find a writer or a eunuch.

One of my favorite historical authors. I have read Shun Ming ten times, Jin Yi Dang Guo twenty times, and Da Ming Wu Fu thirty times. It is a novel that I never tire of.

What on earth is this author doing? He doesn't write a chapter a day, but keeps updating, and the content has been messy recently. Please have some writing spirit! Do you always live up to the support given to you by readers?

Recently I feel like I didn't write it myself, did I find someone to write it for me? Still a not-so-good ghostwriter!

I just finished watching Late Ming, and I am already at the peak of Ming Dynasty. In the history category, I read The Warriors of the Ming Dynasty first, followed by A Little Soldier in the Frontier Army at the End of the Ming Dynasty, and finally read The Late Ming Dynasty. Then I ran out of books 🙂, and I am going to try again to see if I can continue reading.

The more I write, the more I lean towards novels. Although it is an artistic process, it is not a book for fools. Historical novels are not mythical novels. A small hundred households are not gods or Sun Wukong. It is becoming more and more biased and unreasonable.

At the beginning, there were more than 30 chapters. My father and those veterans were very talented and experienced. Suddenly, they made a low-level mistake and the entire army was wiped out. They forcibly added conflict and hatred to the protagonist. After reading it, it felt like eating shit. I couldn't stand it anymore.

In fact, I didn't feel that it was unfinished. This book felt like it was too difficult to write. In the early stage of writing about the dead father, Lao Bai must have been affected by the scolding. The middle part was a bit rough, but in fact it became more and more interesting later on. As a result, it was cut in half, so I had to forcefully finish the book. Many old readers of this book say how poorly Lao Bai writes. I think Lao Bai is asking for change. Can the tens of thousands of words at the end really be considered bad in all conscience? All the changes have been explained, and the direction of the plot is very interesting The abruptness of Nurhachi's battle, Hou Jin was blocked to conquer North Korea, the positioning of the Donglin Party and the Eunuch Party, history The characters are also outstanding, including the emotional drama between Wanli Taichang and his son, the intersection between Mulan and Qin Liangyu, the combination of Yuan Chonghuan and Huang Taiji, Wei Zhongxian and the completely different changes in history, Zhu Youxiao and the missionary's imagination of learning science. If these things were written with 1.5 Million words more, they would definitely be wonderful. If Lao Bai really planned to just finish it, there is actually no need to write these. When Gao Jin helps Zhu Youxiao ascend the throne, he can forcefully complete the book. I can only say that buying out is harmful to people. Even if Lao Bai wants to force it to continue writing, the editor will think that you are a waste of money, and cutting it in half is inevitable. Finally, I think authors who write about the Ming Dynasty can refer to the last tens of thousands of words of Lao Bai to consider the outline. After all, this is a god-level plot trend. To put it bluntly, a lot of people are annoyed because it is explained like this when they can clearly write wonderful things. It is like giving you a wonderful introduction to a movie, but when it is played, it goes blank and you can only make up your mind.

Floating, floating! The former merchants only earned dozens of taels of silver by working hard, and the bribes were only 20 taels of silver. The silver accumulated since my grandfather was only 200 taels, and the pension for servants who died in battle was only 20 taels. Now you are sending those strange women who were raped by horse thieves, giving each of them 20 taels? ? ? Not to mention the disintegration of people's hearts, these women are afraid that they will all die on the way! ! !

The shame of the time traveler! Is there such a bottomless way to lower IQ? In order to suppress the pig's feet, you are forced to be brainless, insulting yourself, insulting the readers, and also insulting the pig's feet!

The author's books basically cooperate with foreigners to overthrow the Ming Dynasty. I don't know what the author's psychology is, but as a Han Chinese, I have no choice but not to read it.

This book is actually pretty good. A very white book, I can read it twice now. One is Shunming, and the other is this one. But there are also problems later in this book. In the early stage, I wrote everything in detail, but after reaching 350, the pace obviously accelerated. If written according to the same method as in the early stage, this book could contain at least eight, nine hundred or even 1,000 chapters. But the speed behind it is really too fast. The ending is too sloppy, which is a pity. The others are either Taijian, or they are just not to my liking. Jinyi Dangguo and Daming Wufu are about the protagonist playing house with some children when he was a child. I came to see the protagonist change history and fight. There are ten or twenty chapters of your childhood plan, so hurry up and get over it.

Shuo Ming's novel was quite popular when it was updated back then, but now it is really not popular at all. The popularity has almost completely cooled down. It has been completely forgotten by the Internet. The popularity has completely cooled down.

This high charge is at the level of a hundred households. It depends on his strength, but he is not courageous enough.