Back from Marvel to Be a Dad

Yes, yes, yes, the writing is really nice 😏

Yuewen has stopped running for a few days, but the reward amount is only 1 million soft girl coins. You are so poor, so you can just reward this small amount. No one who has the ability is too lazy to deal with such a company! The protagonist has been in the Marvel world for 10 years at the peak of its development, but his eyesight is so low 🙂

Come on, old man, there are too many Marvel eunuchs, I hope you can stick to it!!

The subject matter is quite novel, the setting is very good after coming back from the Marvel world, and the author's writing is not faulty. After all, he is an old author 🥺

Personally, I think the words that can describe the protagonist are one word, coward, two words, loser, three words, not confident, four words, no plan, five words, no experience in the world. He loves his wife but cannot completely trust her, nor can he firmly and firmly refuse external temptations. He has various agreements with his wife and children but cannot complete them perfectly. There are always some twists and turns. In short, if the performance of the protagonist is not forcibly set by the author, he must be a scumbag in Hezhong, which is a conflict of characters... There is no problem overall. There are really many small flaws in details and common sense, so it can be read, but people who watch it are very depressed... Another problem is that there are a lot of waste plots. Such unnecessary plots are mixed with the pits dug by the author, which will cause readers to be confused, and they will not be able to distinguish which is the useful information I want to remember later, which will make the novel overlong and boring...

I want to ask how a ten-year-old child can be cute

The author definitely does not know how precocious the nine-year-old children raised by a single-parent family are.

If you talk like this when you are five years old, it is called cute. If you still talk like this when you are ten years old, then the parents should be fooled! Did the author choose the wrong age package?

The golden fingers are too big. Why do urban novels need such big golden fingers? It breaks easily. The novel should not be exaggerated, as exaggeration is a poisonous point. What's the point of having a protagonist with such a golden finger in the city like an adult in a kindergarten? It is no different from the rebirth of the Immortal King or Demon Emperor a few years ago.

So, don't exaggerate the protagonist's previous experience, ability, and status too much, because the subsequent plot cannot express that powerful character and mentality. Do you think this is just showing off? No, this is pretending to be sb.