Seven Artifacts of Strange Dreams

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I have read your book. The following is just my personal experience I may be very harsh, please forgive me Let me talk about the good points first. Your writing style is good, at least it is fluent, come on. More questions, First of all, your book gives me the feeling of a dialogue novel. The layout is very messy because there is no "" punctuation mark. Personally, I think your dialogue can still add ". (Maybe you like it yourself) Secondly, I don't know if you did it intentionally or unintentionally, but I feel that there are a lot of punctuation marks or expressions with errors. I reviewed a couple of them, you can check them out. After that, it's your segmentation problem. If your paragraph is too long, readers will be cluttered and easily distracted, and they will easily skip to read. If there is important information in that paragraph, it will be GG. So it's better to divide it into more paragraphs. Finally, the pace is too fast. I only read the beginning of your book. (Forgive my sharp tongue, I have no interest in reading it at all. Maybe I don't read this type of book?) When I read it, you didn't write out some of the battle content at all. It was just that A made a move, B made a move, and A won in the end. It just gives me this feeling. It seems like a waste of time. After that, when I saw the junior brother leaving, he immediately started doing another thing. I had no idea what he was doing. In fact, you can write the first chapter in two or three chapters. Ifthe amount of information is too large, the reader will not have the desire to read on, because he will not know what you want to express at all. Well, that's it for now. Please allow me to promote my own book. (If you don't like it, just delete it) Newcomers, new articles, please try your poison, welcome your poisonous tongue! ! !

Return visit! Not bad writing! Come on!

Collect one, come on and sign the contract

The story is good, with a sense of martial arts. Come on, keep writing.

After reading the introduction of the artifact, the author's outline should be relatively clear, but the sentence fragmentation in the text is a little strange, and it does not read very smoothly. I don't know if it is because it is a game term. A layman who does not play games will pass by. Authors who dare to create and show their works are courageous. Please support 👍

To be honest, I can't stand it. There is no punctuation in the character dialogue, which is deliberate. It is better to say that it is a role-playing game, but it is more like the basic script of the character dialogue in the basic game. I can't get into it. Some of the dialogues are simply overdone, and the expressions are a bit awkward. Chapter 1, the historical part, you don't have to write it in at all. Just write a prologue to introduce the history. Incorporating it into the main text is too long and uncomfortable to read. There are also sentence fragments, but the ones that could be connected together are broken. The two brothers are particularly surprised at where to interrupt the sentences. There is also the relationship between the characters. I don't know who the master of the two brothers is at first glance. I just said that their master Yun Ya gave Gong Kai and Jiang Chen something. But I talked about the master first. I thought who this Yun Ya was... The characters must clearly explain their relationship and names. Furthermore, the history of the protagonist's appearance is too long, and there are too many characters. For a while, I had no idea who the protagonist was. If I hadn't read the introduction and the artifact score first, I might not have continued reading, because I watched for a long time and the protagonist hadn't appeared yet. Let's talk about the introduction. The introduction tells all the things that the protagonist will encounter in the future... I have seen this thing before from another buddy. His introduction almost spoiled who the protagonist will meet and what maps he will hit... The introduction is okay for you, but the introduction is not attractive enough. Although it is revealed that the protagonist later collected several artifacts and was involved in bigger things, the way of expression is too flat. It sounds like the feeling of writing an essay when I was a child...

Hello, visiting book friends. Thank you for your support. Keep up the good work. I loved reading books when I was a child. Later, when I was a teenager, I started writing. I was firm and persistent and sketched for many years. For this work, I can definitely say that it incorporates the style of role-playing and martial arts. It focuses on the key points and details during the long story. In the deliberate sentences of all the characters, the original intention is not forgotten. , Keep in mind the eight characters, be orderly, and have clear foreshadowings. I hope everyone likes this book. The most important point of "Qi Meng Ji: Seven Artifacts" is that it keeps pace with the times and is written innovatively. Please forgive me for any shortcomings in writing. If you are interested, please pay more attention to my story. If you like it, add it to your collection or leave a comment to support original literature and genuine reading!

The story line of "Seven Artifacts of Strange Dreams" is not time travel, it is completely started from dreams. The writing method is based on role-playing themes. The genre, fantasy, sword and magic, fantasy world view, foreshadowing style, innovative writing, in every character, every detail, scene design, without adding unnecessary symbols, let the readers hear It's just a fresh start. Some book friends may feel uncomfortable and will get better after reading slowly. However, this is an innovation that keeps pace with the times. There may be shortcomings. In terms of quality, the foreshadowing is clear and orderly. Welcome fellow book friends to come and discuss the story of Qimeng Ji: Seven Artifacts.

After reading the introduction of the artifact, I decided to collect it without hesitation 🤓

The subject matter is very good and the language is great. It has been collected~

Wonderfully conceived and delicately written, it has been collected. This is how the great god was born

The writing is very good, keep it up. Another: Xianxia's new work - Yunji's Seven Swords, please support me. Sorry for the intrusion, thank you.

Collected

Already collected, hope to visit again and give some comments🙂

Is it over? Why isn't it updated?

Come on 😡, look forward to the next plot

Received, I hope you can give me some feedback. 😁

I hope the author will be great and continue to persevere!

Interesting work, worth a look! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

This is the end of the book, when will I write something else next?

Come on, work hard and create greater glories in the future!

Is this the end of the book? I treasured it for a while and then finished reading it.

Jack is coming. Wow, there are so many words. It's great. Keep it up!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Hahaha, I never thought of a return visit. When I remembered it, it was already finished. 😁 Let me recommend my book "The Earth Has No Eyes"

I really didn't expect you to finish the book so quickly. I don't know how long I can hold on to it. I have only had over 1,000 views of more than 100,000 words, and I feel like I don't have the energy to continue writing.

You are really lazy. Did you just take the college entrance examination?

When are you going to publish a new book? It's been so long