I'm Playing a Copy in a Parallel World

I feel like the main character is pretty useless, so I gave up the book and stopped reading.

The first part looks pretty good, but the second part of World of Warcraft with two female dragsters is so damn poisonous. The author can't write the routine without including female characters. I thought it was food and grass, but it turned into poisonous weed in an instant.

It feels like another potential novel about being unable to walk when seeing a woman.

Food and grass turn into poisonous weeds. If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about them.

It was okay in the early stage, what kind of thing is the World of Warcraft dungeon? The child's dungeon was so poisonous to me. I knew it was a very dangerous dungeon but still did it like that. He was just a naughty kid relying on good luck. The same goes for the female supporting characters. There are poisonous points everywhere. If you don't know how to write about women, don't challenge female characters.

Sure enough, I still hope that the author can adjust the positioning of the female character. No matter from which point of view, except for the fact that Mengxue obeys the instructions because she became the girlfriend of the protagonist, that loli is simply unpleasant. Even in the game, I hate people who don't obey the instructions. Just because I like it

I don't know if the author wants to highlight the difficulty of the dungeon or the protagonist's brilliance, but this dungeon of Warcraft is really uncomfortable to watch. Because when I think about the protagonist having to download dungeons with these two trolls in the future, it becomes boring. It is obvious that Meng Xue and Ou Huang Loli are written as important supporting roles, regardless of whether they are heroines or not. A young lady who is arrogant for no reason, looks down on the protagonist at every turn, and also has a psychological flaw. Do you want to write about tsundere? I only saw Ao but not Jiao. A European emperor, a slanderous and foul-mouthed lolita. In fact, this character can be written brilliantly, but I only saw her being unreasonable and unscrupulous because of her young age, whether it was her words or her actions. Loli, you want to write a poisonous tongue, but it turns into a bad mouth. I feel uncomfortable when I think about the protagonist taking these two people with him and taking them down dungeons in the future, enduring the cynicism and continuing to lick his face to help others improve their strength. Why not set up better partners or supporting characters? If you don't have enough writing power, just write it as the protagonist's licking dog. Don't write a character that's hard to control like a tsundere and a poisonous tongue. Meng Xue is a violent woman. Just write it according to the character of a violent man. Wouldn't it be good to be loyal and take the lead in the charge? Wouldn't it be good to write a lolita as a well-behaved person with a little bit of scheming? I don't know what kind of characters other readers like. The most basic thing about the female characters I like. If they are companions, the most important thing is trust and obedience, at least in combat dungeons. What you wrote is really uncomfortable. Expect better performance.

Why not go Sekiro? The low magic is also very suitable for practicing sword skills. It can hone the killing ability by seeing the blood.

Game type. To write about women is to commit suicide.

I don't know if the author has played this picture in "Dance of the Three Kingdoms". You can give it a try.

Recently, there have been more and more novels about playing real games on Earth.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but things have changed since the two girls came out. Anyway, these two girls are quite annoying, and the protagonist feels like he's slowly changed.

Have you played Dark Souls? I'm very curious about the protagonist's expression when he sees this

What is the main plot of this book? I read it for a long time and found nothing.

After reading the comments, I feel completely disappointed. Licking a dog has no solution, and a single dog is invincible. The highly-difficult poisonous woman is even more calcium-in-calcium and has withdrawn.

Write well! It's up to you whether you want to eat dirt or meat.

Dear book friends, because the author is about to take the driving test and is taking the test in the next county, he cannot update in time. The book will be suspended for ten days to half a month. I am extremely sorry and please forgive me!

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