Dao Lord of the Immortal Palace

The main plot is not clear, the scene layout is a bit messy, and there seems to be too much writing. The protagonist's cultivation level is too slow and should be in the later stages. The successful wealthy couple seems to lack preparation, defense, and planning. Therefore, the current focus is on top-level skills, advanced foundation building, upgrade paths, and long-term development space.

It is recommended that you write it without a female protagonist. After all, this is an indigenous novel, so the sense of immersion is much worse than that of a time traveler! In addition, fairy tales come and go with only a few routines, and they mainly rely on writing and character design to attract readers. You are a new author with no basic traffic and no special highlights. It is difficult to make any big development.

The kind of super holy scriptures, the kind that is grateful when others hit it ten times, the kind that kneels down and licks a female nun when it sees it, the kind that is not self-interested but only benefits others, the kind that has basically zero IQ. If you like this kind of writing, then congratulations on finding your favorite, this book is it.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)งThe writing and plot are pretty good

I am a cultivator who kills men and cuts melons and vegetables; I am a cultivator who captures women and treats them like my ancestors. What kind of male protagonist is this? This male protagonist is really harmful to people. Male cultivators are no longer allowed to live in this world. We must be forced to death before we are willing to accept it. Hell is empty and the devil is cultivating. Ps: Sand sculpture stuff

If you have a golden finger, you can just keep practicing. Why run around and risk death for nothing?

First of all, Jiuyunhai would like to thank many book friends who have provided valuable suggestions! To be honest, when I wrote this book, there was no plan to write a heroine in the outline, because this book is a mortal fairy novel, and the main line of the story is mortals cultivating immortals, so even if there is a heroine later, it will only serve as an embellishment, not taking up too much of the plot, and there will not be too many romantic scenes. It is currently planned that there will be no official heroine appearance before it is put on the shelves. After it is put on the shelves, based on the development of the plot and the requirements of readers, we will carefully consider whether to arrange the appearance of the heroine. In short, everything is based on the development of the plot and the expectations of readers. Of course, I will also consider my writing ability. If I can't write well, I will never write easily. Finally, I would like to thank all the book friends again for their valuable suggestions. Xiaojiu will definitely write the article well to avoid straying into the minefield, and strive to finish the story of Taoist Master of Immortal Palace.

The plot is reasonable, the writing is delicate, and the characters are well drawn. The only drawback is that there are wild dogs barking below, which is really embarrassing for me.

I have read too many slow-burning classical fairy tale novels. But as slow as you are. You can be ranked in the top three in the Qidian novel, but you have to get thirty or forty pictures for an entry-level disciple of a sect? Are you sure so many people have the patience to read your novel? Are you sure you shouldn't write all the chapters around your golden finger? Are you sure the first few dozen pictures are not related to your golden finger? I'm pretty patient, but I still can't stand it anymore.

Just by looking at the introduction, you can tell that this is my type 🪖