Elf Achievement System

The writing is very good, but there is a big problem with golden fingers. I don't know why, but I hate golden fingers for some reason, and there is too much water. I will save it and wait for a hundred chapters to see how it goes.

We are soliciting opinions. Although the author is not a pure newcomer, he is still half!

I think many people choose your system because of it. The system is actually nothing. The key point is that in this era, chatter systems are no longer popular. Most people don't want to see this kind of smart and thoughtful system. If you have a panel system or even a rigid "ding~" system, it will probably be much better.

It's very frustrating to watch, and it feels like the protagonist is restricted everywhere.

It's good if you leave aside the original plot characters. The original plot characters were not well written, especially Nazi. Her aloof persona collapsed and she felt like Aqua.

I feel like I can be on fire. Very good to my taste

A cute little nine. (≖‿≖)✧

Why is it fat? 😭 Isn't the name Kuailong bad? 😭 We can fly around the earth quickly 😭 We can't discriminate against Kuailong because of the nature of the game 😭

You can't update too slowly, two chapters a day, otherwise you won't attract people. The best I've read is several chapters a day. The effect is very good, and the writing is good. Your update is too slow and it won't attract people. I read it in a book shortage, and there are too few.

In this mane rock werewolf, you can get dusk evolution from both night and day. So what kind of evolution is impossible in reality? Example: 1. The flower dancing bird absorbs four kinds of nectar at the same time (beat the four kinds of nectar with a juicer) 2. Stinky Flower uses leaves and sun stones at the same time (one stone in each hand) 3. Mr. Mosquito Repellent uses the King's Certificate when the evolved white light appears (when the evolved white light appears, give props, collect the baby ball, and then communicate) 4. Yukidouji♀(Chirulian♂) uses the Awakening Stone when the evolved white light appears (when the evolved white light appears, give props, collect the baby ball, and then communicate) 5. Pearl oyster uses Deep Sea Fang and Deep Sea Scale at the same time (put both items into the shell) 6. Slowpoke + Slowpoke*2+Certificate of the King (several Pokémon + props (Slowpoke): Collect the Pokémon + Slowpoke you want to conquer with the Poké Ball, and then have a tacit understanding. While pressing the communication exchange button, the Pokémon will take the correct pose) 7. Eevee is on a moss rock (ice-covered rock) with enough intimacy and friendliness. At sunrise (dusk), when learning the fairy attributes, use the fire, thunder and water stone (put the fire, thunder and water stone on the ground, and use (pseudo) Taishan to top the stone) 8. Mane Rock Werewolf evolves at sunrise ~~~~~~~~~~~ Because Pokémon are mainly for children, there is actually no chance that a certain pair of chromosomes will be XXY (normally speaking, ♂ is XY and ♀ is XX). If that family only has a few ♀ or ♂, a certain pair of chromosomes will appear to be XXY.

I'm off track. This elf world is mainly about elves, and your heroine describes it too much.

1. The system is unbearable (personal opinion) 2. A little watery is not ordinary water 3. No more 4. Evaluation of this book Others are SSS Only the system is F 5. Author, please reduce the role of the system. I really can't stand this system anymore. Everything else is fine, only the system can't stand it anymore. 6. The above are purely personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them. 7. Maybe there are people who like the system, but definitely not me 8. Again, reduce the role of the system. 9. If the author dislikes me as a troll, please delete the book review!

The cover looks a bit familiar, like that card I didn't draw in Love and the Producer

The previous book is here, please support it.

I must have been in high school at that time, and I was very impressed by the plot and setting at the beginning of this book. Later, the phone was broken and many things were broken. But I still remembered the plot of this book from time to time, and I posted a post looking for it for a while. I thought it was because I only watched half of it, so I interrupted it. I asked using AI today and it turned out that it was the eunuch.

Author, have you ever thought about creating a group?