My Host Is so Powerful at Fast Penetration

Just reading the introduction reminds me of Shi Sheng

Is there a male protagonist? Prefer to be single

Does the original owner's description really need to be that long? There are 20-30 chapters of a plane, 7-10 chapters are about the original protagonist, and then 2-3 chapters where the protagonist takes care of the villain, I hope it can be greatly improved, I always want to skip chapters when I look at it like this.

The plot is being conveyed. I want to complain! I don't want to watch that ridiculous plot... I strongly request that the plot be delivered with less replay content. People want to see the boss's bastard spirit.

I saw Chapter 192. Is it really cp-free? I saw how Joel felt so much like the male protagonist, chasing the heroine even to death, trying to make the heroine fall in love with him no matter what, and the medicine the heroine used on him had no effect at all. Moreover, the author writes that this man is exactly what the heroine likes in terms of appearance and eye color, and he is the only one who has a guilty conscience since the heroine passed away. To be honest, I can't stand it anymore after seeing this. This man is not simple at first glance. He feels like he will keep chasing the heroine. This is not like having no cp, and he is emotionally entangled.

The introduction was very annoying to me, but the content was not good. I only read the first world story, but I didn't finish it. It was too long-winded and talked about too many things about the original protagonist, and many of them were not important. It would not affect the plot at all if not written. The heroine's character is nothing to pick, but the way of speaking is not very good and a bit greasy. This is only for the twenty or so chapters I have read.

I didn't feel how powerful the heroine was, and I didn't feel comfortable being tortured. Her IQ was not worthy of God's setting. The early plot is too long-winded. Flash first out of respect.

If you don't like this book, please come quietly and leave quietly, and don't leave negative reviews at all times. Also, if you really feel that this book is bad, then don't waste your time giving negative reviews. Otherwise, if you don't waste that time, just point out clearly which chapter is good and which sentence is not so that I can change it. What good does a malicious negative review or a malicious low-star review do to you? It is not easy to know the author. You are still typing words in the middle of the night. You give negative reviews and malicious low-star reviews, so that no one reads the book. How can this make the author who works overtime feel embarrassed? If you point out any problem, I will change it. Of course, my book is not perfect, and I cannot make it popular for everyone. I don't like to come and go quietly. If you really like it, I will give it a five-star recommendation. Of course, I don't force it.

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It's really too long-winded, with too many empty words that make up the word count.

After reading the first story, the heroine is set in a boss-type setting that I love. It's just that there are too many system dramas, so Little World should follow the plot well. The system always pops up to make a sense of presence, and it's all while the plot is going on, which is very distracting. The author may want to create an atmosphere of mutual hostility and try to convey the story lightly. This can be done in the space after the mission is over, or in the small world. Forced to let the system come out to explain the plot while the plot is going on~ Readers are not all elementary school students, and they don't need to explain everything clearly. It is really very entertaining

I drew it. Hey ~ love it. The plot will be arranged soon.

Tsk tsk, this miserable author has no comments. I looked through the comments I posted last year and saw it.

I feel like the heroine just screams without thinking at all.