Jin Chixuan Says

As a novice writer, if you have any dissatisfaction, please give me some pointers. I can accept criticism and opinions~Thank you dear~

The writing is quite good, but the dialogues in the first few chapters and the large paragraphs are too discouraging. I suggest you revise it if you have time. I have invested in it, so keep going＾0＾~

Love this novel greatly! I think the setting of the heroine is very interesting ~ and it has a script basis. However, this novel is a bit slow to catch on, but I will continue to follow it! Update as soon as possible, preferably two to three chapters a day.

The subject matter is extremely novel and the writing is passable. It's worth a read.

A good book with a lot of suspense, which is very suitable for me.

I've added a bookshelf, let's enjoy it slowly and let's cheer together.

The paragraph is too long and not suitable for mobile reading. In addition, one sentence is full of commas... This should be broken up 🙂

Watching this book grow along the way, keep working hard, I will definitely write better and better!

🌹 Great work and update

Now that I have gained weight, the more I write, the more wonderful I am, praise, praise, praise

I came here specifically to see the exquisite writing style of Dada!

It's okay. It's not easy to find one like this at the starting point.

It's really good, I will collect it decisively, keep going.

I like the heroine in the book, why not change the hero to me? 😁😁😁 Welcome Be a guest

It's a pity that I'm poor, otherwise I would have to give you a reward of 180,000 yuan in one breath, so that you can give me ten updates and hundreds of updates. Your writing is so wonderful.

If you put double quotes in the description of the character's words, it won't look so laborious.