An Immortal Book

It was very tiring to watch, and I felt that the heroine was doing it from beginning to end. She knew that the bracelet given by her brother had been tampered with but still followed him, let him frame her and used it as a reason to kill her brother. She also made so many twists and turns, and always said she hated trouble. Since she didn't want to get into trouble, wouldn't it be better not to give her brother a chance to frame him in the first place or to expose him later? Does she still need to kill so many people? Does she still need Gu worms? Does she still need to do so many tricks? Will there be so much trouble if I go to college? Speechless

Dark, depressing, long-winded, authored... This book is poisonous, please read with caution

I feel that the outline of this novel is actually a good story, but I don't know why it seems to be a headache. Sometimes the author writes too many side details, and the heroine has too many thoughts when she sees a person encountering something, which makes it tiring to read. I basically took advantage of the limited exemption and read most of the novel. The information is large but relatively fragmented. There are many introductions to the characters and inner activities written from different angles. In fact, it is not necessary. My thoughts on this novel are that I am tired, it was written with great care, and there are too many other things. I would like to speed up the main line of the story a little, and occasionally use the Spring and Autumn style of writing.

I haven't read the article yet, so I read the comments first… eh! Whether there is a male protagonist depends on what the author thinks, how he structures it, and what kind of story he wants to tell! How you feel when you write it down is what readers should express! Even if some readers want no male protagonist, that shouldn't affect the author's setting! Of course the author should take suggestions from the readers, but they must not let the readers influence your setting! Readers can't cross the line either! This is a matter of principle! Otherwise, the readers can do whatever they want, then they can just write it themselves, why would the author do it? Whether a novel is good or not does not depend on whether it has a male protagonist or not! In order to cater to some readers, some novels specifically emphasize that there is no male protagonist. In the end, it is better to add a male protagonist and change the romance! I once read a novel about an adult who traveled through time and space into a lolita. There was no male protagonist in the Taoist cultivator! And it's very popular! As a result, the adult soul heroine is cute throughout the whole story, and by practicing Qi with her golden fingers, she can transcend the Nascent Soul, causing the Nascent Soul monks to abandon Taoism and practice Buddhism, and their family members will no longer want her! Then the heroine was hunted down by the monks from the Southern Region to no avail, so she could only resist the expulsion! The result is that you in the Southern Region are blind! This heroine will have to fight against the pseudo-Tiandao in the future! The heroine shouldn't be too strong! This novel is highly recommended to those who don't have male protagonists! ! ! I don't remember the name, so I'll search it myself! If there is a male protagonist in the novel, of course it will influence the female protagonist. It cannot even influence the female protagonist. It can only be said that the female protagonist does not love you. Two people in love will always influence each other and undergo some changes. As long as they do not hold back, do not commit any principled issues, and do not affect their spiritual character, that's fine! There is nothing wrong with having someone seek enlightenment with you and supporting each other! Reading the comments, it was said that the author had originally positioned the male protagonist, but when there was no male protagonist, he had to "abandon the article if there was a male protagonist", so the author changed the setting! My sympathies to the author here! Why is it now called a "cult without a male protagonist"? That's what he did! This "setting threat" kidnapped the author! It also affects readers from other civilizations! If there are now another group of readers who say "abandon the novel without a male protagonist", what should the author do? Should I change the settings back again? Therefore, many introductions to immortality novels now specifically emphasize "no male protagonist." When I saw this emphasis, I stopped reading it! Personally, I like to have a male protagonist, after all, it can be read as a romance if it's not well written! If it's well written, even the romance will be exciting, and even the icing on the cake (such as the cute mortal female fairy) if it's not well written, the heroine will hate it! My personal opinion about whether it is good or not is: Basic world layout settings. Plot: Like a fairy. Cultivation system: Taoism, demons, Buddhism, Confucianism, witchcraft, etc. Details of Taoist practice: Like Immortal Crossing. The impermanence of water includes characteristics such as swallowing. Fighting scenes: weapon characteristics, swordsmanship moves, spells, secrets, magical powers, etc. Enlightenment: Like the female thief who controls the spirit, the three thousand avenues are not just the so-called supreme and ruthless path without male protagonists! There is also Liu Rumei in the fairy tale. The way of killing, the way of medicine, the way of painting, the way of nature, the way of cause and effect, the way of life and death, the way of inaction, the way of action, etc. All roads lead to Rome, and all laws are Tao! If the spirit of craftsmanship is put into the literature on cultivating immortals, isn't it just the way of mortals? Character description: Like the Chu Qiao biography novel, not to mention other things, the background and personality of the characters are very vivid. Emotional relationships of characters: family, sect, interest involvement, love and friendship, etc. As long as it is not a waste or a Mary Sue, the scope of control of the thunder point is not too large!

I saw a lot of people saying that the heroine is dark. In fact, being dark is not a problem, but being wordy is a big problem.

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 26. The heroine is dark and wordy. I don't know what's so interesting to write about and interesting to read.

The first and last part were not written by the same person. After the middle part, the heroine's character completely changed, and the content description also became a lot more burdensome. It was not the same style as before.

The heroine is very perverted and depressing. I haven't finished watching it. I actually wanted to see how the poison of the heroine and his seventh brother has been cured, but it gave me a headache and I couldn't stand it.

Too wordy. If you want to leave, leave. If you want to kill, kill. So much nonsense. It almost ended with more than forty chapters of nonsense.

Isn't it a genius article? I looked at the second one and it turned out to be a piece of trash.

Just ask the heroine why she doesn't tell her clearly about her talent?

Why is it so long-winded? It took so long to write just one chapter, one hundred and eighty, about Pearl's inner life. Don't cram in words, it won't take away the plot.

After reading more than 20 chapters, the endless darkness of human nature and meaningless words gave up.

It's super difficult. If you don't like it, if you watch it again, you'll become depressed. Tsk tsk

Very well written heroine novel

I saw a comment discussing whether or not there is a male protagonist. Some people who want a male protagonist say that we like readers without a male protagonist and threaten the author that if there is a male protagonist, he will abandon the article. I am also haha, don't you? Didn't you say you'd abandon the novel without a male protagonist? You still have the nerve to say that we and I are drunk too... Besides, there are so many romance novels. If you open a female channel and click on it, it's all about romance. There are very few novels without male protagonists. It is precisely because there is no male protagonist in the novel that we ask for it. If the author says there is a male protagonist, do we have any other choice but to abandon the novel? Why is it so difficult for us to bite the bullet and watch it? Not only that, even if we asked for no male protagonist, we didn't say that you like people with male protagonists, love, brain worship, diao, cancer, straight women, cancer, and other unpleasant words, right? Are you degrading us like that? Who started it first? If we like an author who does not have a male protagonist and says that there is a male protagonist, we will choose not to read it even if we beg to no avail, and we will never belittle those who like a male protagonist. Is it necessary to say something so harsh because of different personal preferences? But there are some people I don't want to talk about, it really makes me react drunkenly. I'm only talking about those who have said bad things about us. Please don't take your seat if you haven't said anything.

I feel that the heroine has no desire to become stronger. It is definitely not an upgrade story. She has always been very powerful but lacks a lot of pressure. She has various inner activities and indescribable feelings...

I have written more than 1.5 Million words and there are no recommendations. It turns out that most people can't understand it. I feel that the heroine's dark disguise is a bit too much. She is a 6-year-old girl. Because her seventh brother framed her, she deliberately let her seventh brother succeed. Then she used her uncle to kill the talented immortal cultivator in her family. She gave her seventh brother the White Bone Pill, which will cause pain for three years before dying tragically. If you don't understand this brain circuit, don't care about Brother Seventh, but first kill your uncle who wants to kill you when you are only one year old.

Damn, no more male protagonists. If there is no male protagonist, then pursue it. Nowadays, girls who want to cultivate immortality are better off if there is no male protagonist.

A lot of people hate the heroine design, but I quite like it. Although I am tired of the repeated psychological descriptions, no one is perfect, so I can still tolerate it and continue reading. In the paid chapters, cultivation-related knowledge is often introduced in detail, and I can't stand it. Finally, the long lecture on the classification and distinguishing characteristics of each cultivation stage finally succeeded in convincing me to quit.

I have saved up 50 chapters and have finished reading. The author will update it. It is not enough. I may have to wait until the Chinese New Year to save another 50 chapters 🌹

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

I'm rubbing my eyebrows, the author's writing is actually quite good, but the plot arrangement and character creation may have a lot of contradictions from my personal point of view. With Seventh Brother, if the heroine wants to teach the other party a lesson, I totally agree with it, but the other party's crime will not lead to death. The seventh brother's reaction is also well written, and his psychological activities are very consistent with the character itself, but the heroine's reaction is a bit off. As for the uncle's place, I personally only saw the Gu insects threatening the uncle's place. Because the time was so far apart, I can't remember the details, but I always felt that there were many contradictions in the plot. The biggest sense of dissonance is probably that it can be seen that this is a plot, and the heroine is following the plot. This gives people the feeling that the heroine can only and must follow the plot this way, which leads to collision with many ideas that arise when reading the novel, such as there is a door, but the heroine insists on climbing through the window. With the character setting itself, there is a subtle sense that the two (plot and characters) are connected but derailed. The character of the heroine... How should I put it, benevolent people have different opinions. There is no problem with the setting, but in the process of description, I personally feel that it is a bit abrupt. As for other things that are verbose, I personally think they are fine. Because my values ​​​​and outlook on life are so different, I was stuck at the same progress twice after reading it, so I had no choice but to abandon the article. There is nothing wrong with the quality of the novel itself.

Why is there a circular word count for a long time? A bit like repeating the whole chapter directly?

I don't understand why we have to take the hardest road

There are a lot of repeated chapters after 500, but it gets stuck at 609 and then it's over? How did you post this?