Chakra Industries

Come on, come on, come on, come on

It's been so painful lately Forget it, I'm busy with work. The key is that I don't have time to revise the text. I just upload it after coding in a hurry. I can't stand what I wrote The most important thing is that I can't write characters. The characters in the book are all pale and feeble. If I didn't have an impression of Naruto, I probably wouldn't know who he is, right? The more important thing is that no one gave me guidance... I felt like I was just writing randomly! What should I do if I want to delete the book and stop writing? Go make up the chapters first, take classes and then write again...

I'm envious that so many people are talking. I don't have a lot of people to talk to there, so I don't know where I made the mistake 😥

Collect it first and take a look, cheers for the author

I like Tiantian the most. Good luck to the author.

Kai's character, but even Danzo refused to join. . .

Can you change the place where that work is related?

It has just been serialized not long ago and it is not updated regularly. It is difficult to gain popularity.

The writing is okay, but the chapter about establishing a power plant is a bit abrupt. The Tenten family mainly operates ninja tools, so it is a bit strange to suddenly open a power plant. In addition, regarding the development of industry, Naruto's technological development is very unbalanced. Snow Country has trains and Konoha has radios, but they always focus on cold weapons, with a few exceptions. This is one of the reasons why Boruto is criticized. It's just that technology is developing too fast, and we rely more and more on technological tools. The ubiquitous technological products have also diluted the ninja atmosphere. Therefore, it is difficult to write about the path of industrial development. There is also a bug in the Qidian APP search. The update time of the novel search is abnormal. The update time of the book that appears a few months ago is a few months ago, which may also affect the score. This is the reason I think

Traces? Yingfu stone? My name is useless too.

Can the author explain what a knot is? I couldn't find it in the dictionary. I saw this card and couldn't understand it. I couldn't read it anymore.

The protagonist in my place is Ningji, and the female protagonist is Tiantian 😏 Do you want to make the male protagonist Ningji?