Tree Immortal

Story background: Fantasy continent (similar to Xianxia). Story style: emotional story + invincible legend. Brief review: At the beginning of the story, the protagonist has traveled through time! And when he traveled through time, he turned into a tree! A small sapling! Of course, he is also a sacred tree, which can absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth since he was a child and use it for cultivation. But, he is just a tree! It starts with looking at three children in a village. His story begins. Because of his promise, he protected this village for thousands of years. Because of his promise, he, who originally planned to live like a tree for the rest of his life, turned back into a human being. Of course, many people will think that the story has just begun here. Because becoming a human, there are more disputes and struggles. Because becoming a human, the protagonist begins his own path to immortality. After all... Even after a thousand years, he has not yet reached the peak of the world... He can only be regarded as a lamb... To summarize: the theme of the story is very good, a story starting from a big tree, a theme that I have never seen before. However, the writing style needs to be improved, such as the jumping style in the previous chapters. Although there is no big problem, it is not good if it is used too much. (Links to internal chapters) But in terms of emotion, I can give the author a thumbs up, just like the three children... In the end... Keep your feelings in your heart. (Maybe it's a foreshadowing). Note! This book review is because I only tried to read the previous article, so the evaluation is relatively one-sided and is for reference only! It will be integrated and published in the article scanning circle and classification circle later. Call the author.

The dialogue is not well written. The author has written that the protagonist has regarded himself as a tree. When he communicates with other people, there are too many expressions on his face and inner drama in his heart. I hope the writing is better. The book is a good book

I think this book is very interesting and I hope the author will continue to work hard 😄

The author gives you a suggestion. When writing a dialogue plot, don't write both sides of the small theater at the same time. You don't need to write like this when writing a novel. It feels bad to read the novel like this. TV plots are basically designed to be seen more clearly and conveniently. If you write a novel this way, it will feel bad. The same goes for not writing the same plot twice. Remember, you are writing a novel, not a script.

Write well, come on 😡

1 Is not a world-class tree, at worst it should be a willow tree in a perfect world. 2. The promised tree fairy guardian turned into a human and felt weird, and I couldn't stand it.

It's another story about human transformation. This book can be seen as the protagonist becoming a spirit from a tree and then cultivating an immortal. After all, within a few chapters, I met a cultivator and the protagonist became a human body. Looking at the title of the book, I was expecting it to be a heterogeneous genre. I remember reading a book called Rebirth into a Tree. The background is on a demon-free earth. The main character is a mutated tree that does not change humans. It can give birth to beings similar to spiritual energy, transform, or separate daughter bodies, etc., And start to transform the environment, and the main body is hidden. The sub-body attracts attention. The protagonist seems to have had a mental mutation and can sense the surroundings through the sub-body. Then some animals begin to be affected. This effect is benign, but there is no leap-forward change at the beginning. However, many incidents are still noticed by the town government, and the plot begins to unfold. It seems that there is a eunuch. Many years of books, many years, many years.

The greater the hope, the greater the disappointment. I thought it was a fairy grass

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Speechless, it is obviously a tree but it is written about a person, is it selling dog meat on the head of a sheep?😡

Don't worry about what others say, just write

If the number of people remains the same, there should be more people watching.

Isn't it good to force the plot to sit under a tree and watch the clouds rise and fall? I have to compete in some kind of competition.

There are a lot of novels where you die if you change into a human. Hey, I just read the first 2 chapters and thought it was interesting. But after the second chapter, I changed into a human and I didn't want to read it immediately.

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