Rise 1639

This part of the siege basically plagiarized the contents of the third volume of Yao Xueyin's novel Li Zicheng, "The Attack on the Unsealed Feng".

Don't brag about Chinese martial arts. Just practice and strengthen your body. But don't make it so confusing that people are so good at Chinese martial arts that they allow slaves to destroy the country? When the Ming Dynasty fell, where did those bragging martial arts masters go? Have you traveled abroad?

Grandma is so stupid and has no regard for the actual situation; the chaotic reform of the military system has caused a serious lack of sense of the times, and she becomes very dramatic when she sees the commander. To reform the military system indiscriminately, are you lazy or are you just thinking that the readers are uneducated and don't know the military establishment of the Ming Dynasty? The whole two hundred and fifty is the same. If you look at the late Ming Dynasty novels written by great masters, who has blindly changed the ancient military system? In historical military novels, you don't consider the sense of era background!

I saw that each of the protagonists made a move of 10 taels or 100 taels. It was like using money as money. Has the author ever calculated the military expenses?

Each book basically follows the same tone, talking about a bunch of women and making nonsense! It always looks good at the beginning, but later on the plot develops around women, which is too deliberate and far-fetched. Under the guise of history, it is actually a bloody romance!

I don't really like the heroine Red Lady, she's too pretentious. In fact, apart from stabilizing the morale of the army in the early stage, she didn't help the protagonist at all. She was just a vase. What's her charm? He also said that the protagonist is an arms dealer. Why did he even talk about falling in love? Maybe he forgot how he died in his previous life? Zhou is hundreds of times better than her, at least she can help the protagonist with some things, and her thoughts are much more mature than that of the Red Lady (of course due to her age). Author, don't tell me that you created the character of Red Lady just to fall in love with the protagonist. Although most of the female protagonists in other time-travel novels are just flowerpots, at least they have rich backgrounds. Their fathers are either tech giants or high-ranking officials. I really don't see the charm of a red lady.

I think it's pretty good. Many people think that the demise of the Ming Dynasty was caused by the Donglin Party. But Dong Lin is not the only one who steals the truth. Dong Lin takes the biggest blame. Donglin, the eunuch party, and various other local parties are not good things, they are all pests, and they must be eliminated.

Please write history. The founding of the People's Republic of China was very serious. Please don't make it like a child playing house. It's not a narrative.

Why do people with no literary talent always write some incomprehensible limericks? I really want to laugh when I see it, what kind of mess is this?

It's really disgusting. I thought it was well written before, but then I attacked the Kou Army and the Chinese Revolutionary Army. Isn't it embarrassing for you to come back and take a look?

The writing is quite good, but don't make the plot too dramatic. You, the Chinese XX Army, are quite dramatic. . . Why bother to make such a leap? Isn't the ancient name of Qidian quite good? ! !

If you read too many books that say it clearly, it will be very contradictory! ! Some say that so far there is no historical record that Li Zicheng surrendered, nor was he called King Chuang, but was called General Chuang! ! Some books are just the opposite, contradictory and confusing to read! I don't know which one to believe anymore

I don't like that the main character is too frivolous with his words. He even doesn't let the mother and daughter off the teenage children. This is too ****.

The names of the troops are constantly changing; this looks very tiring!

There's a reason why it's not popular. Forget about cheating. The plot requires it. It's just that it's a historical text, with a hint of urban atmosphere. It uses modern terminology at every turn. It even created its own Chinese Revolutionary Army. Not to mention that it doesn't have any sense of history. The protagonist's breath alone insults the word "Revolutionary Army"!

Please don't post the introduction to the new book in the old book. Even if you want to post it, keep the old book.

It's so funny to poach someone like Li Zicheng, but I like it, haha

"Sun Tzu's Art of War" says: When advancing, one does not seek fame, and when retreating, one does not avoid sin. Only people are protected, and those who benefit the Lord are the treasures of the country. Judging from this, it can be said that the disaster of France is also

Historically, he knew that he could directly control Gao Jie's troops as long as he recognized Gao Jie's son as Gan'er, but he thought it would damage his reputation and refused to do so, resulting in such serious consequences. Now he will recruit the protagonist, the homeless bandit

The firearms in this book are okay, but don't be too exaggerated and make automatic rifles or something. The era of the previous book really couldn't accept firearms. . . .

There is no ending, why is the whole book finished?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The matchmaker is so clueless that she should just be a concubine!

Dear author, I read your last book. Interesting but not without proof. I created a few characters. Can the next book be about them? I will always vote for you. 1. The fourth son of King Ning Zhu Chenhao is called Fourth Brother. The time traveled after the defeat 2. Liu Bei's great-grandson Liu Xuan 3. Li Shi, son of Li Cui 4. After Zhao Tingmei in the late Southern Song Dynasty 5. Wang Zhi during Jiajing 6. Zhu Houwei, the younger brother of Emperor Zhengde

Chinese Revolutionary Army? It's so thunderous for me

International arms traffickers. . . He is known as Mr. Li. . . .

I remember that before Li Zicheng conquered Beijing, he sent an envoy to cross the river with Chongzhen to rule, but Chongzhen later disagreed and then conquered Beijing, right?

The writing is very good. I have helped promote it in several groups. Good luck to the author.